a journey to LOVE : a FF update pg4

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

This is my first FF... hope u all like it...

A journey to love...

AKBAR

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kash in hothon ki lali par mar meet pate...

kash in bahoon ki garmi ko apna bana pate...

kash in ankhon me kho kar ji pate...

kash... hum apse pyaar kar pate...

'phir wohi raat...phir wohi subha..nato kuch khoneka daar, na kuch paneki hasrat... bas ek hi arzoo...har pal har lamha, jis aag me jal raha hoon main...use aag se duniya ko rakh kardoon main.'

subha hone mein abhi kuch pal baki hai, magar aj nind Jalal ke ankhon se koso dur hain... wo soch raha hain, baat kar raha hain apne ap se..

'Jalal ka khaouff...Jalal, jisse pura hindustan darta hai, uski samsheer hawako bhi chhir sakta hai... Jalal bekhauff hai... wo darna nehi janta, rukna nehi janta, sirf fateh karna janta hai. Jalal ki samsheer ke age achhe achhe soorma bhi har man lete hain. wohi Jalal aj itna soch kyon raha hai? mana Rajputana ko hasil karna itna asan nehi hain, magar duniya mein aisi kounsi chiees hai jo Jalal hasil nehi kar sakta...'

isi bich kisi ka sparsh Jalal to soch ki rahoon se wapas le aya. nazuk eah sparsh hi kafi hai unki khubsurti ka andaza lagane ke lie..bistar me Jalal ke pass letiti woh.. jiska naam khud Jalal ko hi nehi pata.

'Amer pe hamla karne se pehle, uska deedar karne ke liye kal hum Khanbaba ke sath amer bazar gaye the.. wohi is larki ki khubsurti bha gayee hume...ekbar jo cheese hume pasand a jati hai...use hasil kie bagar nehi rukta hai Jalal... ise bhi kar lia. khubsurti hume khush karti hain... husn hamara nasha hain... bas ek mohabbat ke lie hi waqt nehi hai hamare pass...ishq se nafrat karte hain hum... hume pyar hai nafrat se...har raat nayee kahani... our subha hone se pehle hi kahani khatm'...

coming next our princess JODHA...

Edited by ppluvkuch - 12 years ago

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Arya75

@Arya75

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Don't tell me its your first FF you write awesomely...

And please rename you post as 'A Journey to LOVE a FF'

I seems as if its just a normal post...

Edited by Arya75 - 12 years ago

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

So good...👏👏👏Will be waiting for next update...

p.s.- we should have a thread where links for all ffs are available...I don't want to miss any of them...we have fab writers on this forum...

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arya75
Don't tell me its your first FF you write awesomely...

And please rename you post as 'A Journey to LOVE a FF'

I seems as if its just a normal post...

thanx ya...and done...

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Arya75

@Arya75

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
thanx ya...and done...

Welcome...

Continue soon...😛😛😛

And do PM me when update...😳😳😳

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S.H

@SH01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it do continue and pm me:)

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zerro

@zerro

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

am DEAD!!!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 and reached heaven *jumping in heaven,angels looking at me contemptuously*
WHAT HAVE U DONE. myyy goood what awsum dialogues.ufff!!!!!!!!! pls if u want ur fans to stay alive plsss continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zerro
am DEAD!!!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 and reached heaven *jumping in heaven,angels looking at me contemptuously*
WHAT HAVE U DONE. myyy goood what awsum dialogues.ufff!!!!!!!!! pls if u want ur fans to stay alive plsss continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

plz don die... otherwise how will u read my FF!!!!!!!!