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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Stargirl06
So cute. ❤️

10q😃😃😃

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -kitty-
Cont. Soon
cant wait for next part
Its awesome

Would surely try to update soon

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Loved It. Was Awsome.

Thanks for that encouraging comment...

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: worldequalsyou
loved it :D
its really good
please update soon :D 😊

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Will surely update soon...

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -bornalee-
interesting start:) do continue n if possible pm me nxt time :)

Wll surely PM you..

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rimpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Omg its mindblowing... pls pm me whenever you update

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S.H

@SH01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved it can't wait to read more do pm me :)

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Arya75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

CHAPTER 2

P.S.: I have not used any logic

' Yeh aap kay kar rahe hain Raja Suryabhan ji ' Jodha said in anger

' Maharaj ' she shouted

It was early morning and the whole kingdom was gone to the Masjid

' Maharaj ' she shouted once again

' Tumhara Maharaj nehi aaega usne humara haq humse liya ab hum uski isat par dag lagakar jayiende '.

' Maharaj ' she shouted once again

' Hai allah humien aisa kyun lag raha ki Jodha kahin musibat mein hai ' he said to himself

' Khan baba hum jaa rahe hain '

' Jalal aap humare sath nehi aiege '

' Nehi humien ek zaroori kaan hai '

' Thik hai jaiye ' Khan Baba gav hi allowance

' Maharaj ' she shouted last time as Suryabhan was about to open her dress's dori

' Nehi ayeda vo '

Thash a voice came

' Maharaj ' she ran and hugged him

' Jodha tum thik to ho ' he said caring

' Hum thik hain '

Jalal removed his upper coat which he wears above his shervani and made Jodha wear it and took out his sword and there was an awesome sword fight with Suryabhan where he injured his chest area.

' Maharaj ' she went close to him ' Chale jao tum Suryabhan bhag jao varna tum apni jaan kho betho ge '

' Jodha yeh kya kar rahi ho tum ' he said in an angry voice

' Maharaj voh humari behn ke suhaag hain mein unhe aise marni nehi doongi ' she said

' Par '

Jodha kept finger on Jalal's lips they had an eyelock.

'Jalal' Mahma Agna said fuming in anger seeing Akdha so close.

' Ji ami jaan ' he got up

' Hai allah ' saw Jalal's wound ' Yeh kaise hua '

' Aap fikr na kare ami hum thik hain ' he stood up but he fainted there as there was possession on the sword.

' Maharaj' Jodha shouted ' Jaiye vead ji ko bolaiye ' she order to the das.

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Shreya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Nice start.

Plz do me pm whenever you update next part.

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

It's Awesome. 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
Pls Continue Soon and PM me. 😳

@SHINYSHREYA:-You too here. 😲I guess Hum saare Mbians ka naya thikana JA forum he. 😆

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