Akdha ff: Destiny CH 15 updated (Thread Closed)

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
TANI KI BACHI JALDI UPDATE KAR VARNA😡PYAR SE BOLTI HU TO MERA FAYDA UTHATI HAI😡ABE UPDATE DE VARNA TAPKA DUNGI🤢

Mei busy hu 😎

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Mei busy hu 😎

yeto munaa ben... gabbar kisise nahi darti ...HA MEKUMBO KO BULATI HU...

AAAHHHAAAHHH MUKEMBO KHUSH NAHI HUA

UPDATE DE

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Awww... you wrote such a sweet FF 😳 (chapter 1) at first i felt shocked after reading that Akdha died 😲🤢 but then when i read it further i realised that both were reborn after 100 years that was sooo cutee & heart touching & sorrry for sooo late reply as i was busy in sessionals sooo dint get time then to visit IF😭

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

uff uff why it has to be Jodha to get scolded sooo cruel father Jodha has in this 21st century story (chapter 2) which you wrote i ll throw all my jutaas & chappals on her father i feel like roasting her father for scolding & hurting our sweet Jodha but jalal kept staring at her & was mesmerised by her this was really sooo cute & sweet ... aswome FF 😳

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

part 2 of chapter 2 was nice... let me tell in brief about this part . Jodha ko misunderstanding ho gyi & she slapped jalal for the crime which he dint commited😭😭😭 poor jallu 😭 infact he saved her selfrespect 😳 but jo thinks that jallu tried to touch her 😔 but the real culprit who did this flew away😡 . And now that jallu is angry & wants revenge from jo 😭😭 😲 this is not good 😒 .

In between i dint get it that what is the big problem with Jo s father why he treats her like his enemy inspite of all her efforts 😡 😈 how can he take such an important decision about her life without asking her 😈

i m very eager to read the next chapter in between you wrote a beautiful update good job well done👏👏👏

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

wow thats the twist in chappy 3 😆 . wow mazza aa gaya 😳 seriously i mean what a freezing twist you gave in this chapter and afterall non other than jalal was Jo s destiny to be with her 🥳 now our Akdha finally got married in 21st century " punar janam " thankx for this twisty update 🤗

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

awww... bechari Jo😭 ( chapter 4) now she thinks that her life is like a hell for her & nothing good is gonna happen in her life 😔 but ... later on she ll realsize that her destiny had planned all happiness hidden for her as she freed from her cruel father & now shes unaware of the fact that she got a hubby who has unconditional love , care & support for her in future☺️

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

mast update kiya hai (chapter 5) 😎 it was a sensual update 🤪 really liked your update alot 👍🏼 & i enjoyed reading it 😳 hats off to you dear for writing such awsome & adorable updates 👏

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#669

ohkkk let me give my reviews on chappy 6 i ll give my views in brief

finally our Akdha will be sharing one room 😳 but not in the way i wanted like sharing of everything in room even the bed🤪 but i know this will happen later in future date😆 as now Akdha are a married couple so like every other couple even they should share everything including almirah & bed with eachother☺️ they would do they when they start loving eachother ❤️ which will happen afterwards there was notiness in between of this update at some places & meanwhile Jallu was jealous of that guy ☺️ for Jodha😉 hayeee...

im eagerly waiting for that time to come when this happens but for this update i would just say that you wrote such an interesting update dear , the words you used were simple & beautiful 👍🏼 i really liked your this update as well & waiting for myself to read the next chappy 😳 👏👏👏

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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#670

awww... 🤗 this time you wrote such a beautiful & indeed a romantic update dear😳(chappy 7) especially their dance sequence & that jallu s feelings arise after seeing Jodha each time ☺️ really nice & romantic update ... hats off to you all credit for such cutee , sweet & interesting updates goes to you 👏 & what a smart selection of songs you do👍🏼

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