Akdha ff: Destiny CH 15 updated (Thread Closed) - Page 66

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

All the aunties unres Karo 🤣

Aunty ki bacchi ... 🤣

OMG !!! I want them to be in drunk state... Ye dono guilty feel kar rahe hai... ohhh ... Jodha felt she cheated on himmm... She had unknowingly cheated Jalal.. Unknowingly? I LOVE IT... That sentence really stuck IN MY MIND... Yaar you have twist this story... Tears weld up on Jodha's eyes and she began crying. "Why Jalal? Why? Why did you punish me like this? I felt like crying... Why she think that Jalal did it purposely... he was drunk too... oh no...

This chapter is so practical... Thank god... I love this Jodha... she did said harsh words to him and realized it immediately that they both made this mistake and Jalal saved her from that man...she knows it is her mistake too... but at the same time she has doubt in her mind that he has done this purposely...She controlled herself beautifully... I like the part she is not crying whole day...The way she acts with him and said it was MISTAKE... it is commendable writing⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... I love the part he thought she look like a teenager...how cute😃

Manisha ...love ur shayri... tu aaj ka sabke FF pe chamak rahi hai...👏

Jalal is shocked...he is so confuse with her behavior... I think he was expecting big drama... but yaar ye Jo to badi practical hai... her one touch send shiver to his spine... Hello... suno... samjo... apni destiny ko... Yaar I am in love with this chapter... Ab jyada wait mat karvana... I want them to confess their love for each other... I bet it is going to tuff for them to stay apart after their closeness... U R AMAZING WRITER... SUPERB!!! LOVE U SWEETY!!! 👏

Wow. The emotions were palpable from the start to nw... 👍🏼
The intensity of akdha's actions just goes to show how far to the edge both can push eachother. Excellent work. Can't wait for tomorrow's piece.

YAAR TERI STORY AESE MOD PE HE KI NIND KESE AAYEGI... UPDATE KAR VARTA... CHIPPUDIN KO LAGA DUNGI TERE PICHE

Nice one choti...thnx for d PM

updateee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡😡

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

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NANU UPDATE KAR😡😆

😭update update plz 😭😭😭

Tani My sweetu update kab de rahi hai

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