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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az3003

It's perfect!! Ghajniat😛😛😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Getting an update in an hour or so
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Chapter 4

Jodha froze. What was happening with her?? She was married to Jalal?? How did this Happen?? Jalal smiled evilly."Aajse Tum Meri Biwi ho. My wife. Mrs.jalalluddin Mohammad. Tumne Hume thapad Mara Tha na?? Jalal ko?? Now u will have to pay for it MRS.Jalal. Ur mine now..Chalo." He held her by her hand and started pulling Jodha. "Ek minute! Hum yeh Shaadi Nahi maante. Hume Chodiye. Leave me!" "CHUP! Ek aur Shabd Nahi.. Baki Sab bate hum apne Ghar Mei karenge! Chaliye." Jodha"mamma papa kuch to kahiye."
Ram "Aab Tumhari Shaadi ho chuki hai. Jao apne pati ke saath." "Mujhe Nahi Jana.. Plzzz" tears were flowing down her eyes. "stop all this drama and come with me. Driver gari nikalo." "Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath? Mujhe koi Lekar JA raha hai aur mere parents chup hai?" "I'm your husband Jodha. No one can stop me. Let's go." Jodha was not moving. "Alright then Jodha." He picked up Jodha in his arms. "Now u have to go." "Leave me!" Jalal put her inside the car n they both drive off.

In the car-
Jodha- let me go! Mujhe ghaar Jaana hai.
Jalal- wo hi to JA rahe hai. OUR house.(with a smirk)
Jodha- Just for that slap ur doing this to me??
Jalal (in angry tone) Just a slap?? It was just a slap for u but for me it was an insult. No one can Insult JALLUDDIN MOHAMMAD! NO ONE!"
They reached their destination. THEIR HOME.

Inside Jalal mansion.
"Welcome to Your new Home Jodha. In other words Welcome to HELL." A tear escaped Jodha's eyes."Aap Meri saath kuch bhi Nahi kar sakte hai. I am JODHA. I won't give up! I will make ur life hell." "Waah! Tumhari himmat ko salaam Jodha. U still have the guts to talk to me like that. Waise accha hua ki us Samar se tumahri Shaadi Nahi hua.. I told him that if he marries u then the business deal we are having is cancel. Jhat se maan Gaya! U should be happy Jodha u got married to me." "Aap jaise Insaan meine kabhi Nahi dekha." Jalal"Dekho ge bhi Nahi. Jalal jaisa koi Nahi! Let's not waste time anymore. U go catch some sleep. Kaal humara Nikaah hai. The Muslim way. Aur Uske baad Suhaag Raat." Then he laughed evilly. "Shabakhair Jodha. Goodnight sleep tight. Sweet dreams. Because after that u will get nightmares...

Jalal left. Jodha broke down.

Precap: Jalal pins Jodha on the wall and kisses her on the cheeks.


This update was short I know.. Next part will be long. Next part would be updated after 30 likes. Or else no update.




Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Hi Tahni,😊
wow...kya sensuality hai pre-cap mein...Aur thoda zyada length ka likhna pls...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Update...Precap is more than exciting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NIce update and the precap ... It makes me want more updates ...😳😆
Keep up the good work ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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firstly thank uuu sooo much dear for updating...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
totally fantastic and fabulous update...
👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👏👍🏼

finally our akdha r together
but too short dear...😔

ur dialogues r perfect... i like u dont stretch d melodrama... it was perfect...VERY BEUTIFULLY WRITTEN...
LOVED IT YAAR❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT PART...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
amazing update tahni...👏👏
i m shocked ,,,her parents wanted to get rid of her...😭😭
well it ll b revenge wid love...😳😳
i m so much xcited for d next part😛😛
thnx for d lovely update n for d Pm😊
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 1234philli23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Oh mY jaaan Tahni...Love you 👏👏👏👏
It was wonderful chapter😛😛😛 ..But very short!!!😛😭😭
I am loving the way u carrying the story ahead..👏👏👏
Awesome one and plz update soon!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
very very nice os👏
thanks for the pm😊
i like the way jalal asking jodha to welcome to the hell😆😆jodha saying i will make ur life hell😆😆😆what a competion😆😆😆
precap is very hot☺️
jaldi update next part buddy😃
Edited by arnavkushibest - 11 years ago

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