Originally posted by: Paulaonohi
My alternate script of Jhanak: I think now Ani cannot bring her back there. He will likely be able to get her to stay by saying he has started getting calls/deals for her to perform and she might need professional training and representation 24/7. They need to start building Jhanak’s dance empire and this is how it starts. However, Ani cannot return her to a place where she was thrown out at night. I’m sure he will find out and give it back hot to his family. But concerning Jhanak, If Ani is still as we know him, he would have to admit she is better elsewhere with access to support. But where better than him to help her with a good hostel with other girls who are aspiring dancers too. Jhanak needs friends, she also needs rivals and enemies in her professional world. Given that she is now a famous rookie, she has a headstart over other aspiring dancers. Ani should take her to a dance agency as a trainee Where she can train with other dancers and live in a dorm with them. He will provide her financial and emotional support and always come to visit, use his influence to stop any bullying of her, etc. And Ani will NOT hide his support of her. He will tell his family clearly what he did and that they drove him this far. I feel this is something he can do. Arshi and Shristi will try to influence things with their influence and Jhanak’s colleagues and agency officials Who want to butter up to them and pander to them (recall our favorite social climbers and grifters Bipasha and Laal) will try to ruin Jhanak and her chances but Jhanak will be there to rescue herself with Ani there beside her. He will also be more confrontational with Arshi and start really backing away seeing her actions. This is the era of Ani. He can give all his motivational speeches to woo his girl. We can have people trying to tape Jhanak as having affair with Brij Bushan or Ani, or say that Jhanak was disrespectful to Arshi or Shristi who were her seniors, the agency trying to Send Jhanak to some pervert politician in exchange for connections and Ani rushing in to beat some idiot up. We cannot waste that Bose name! Ani threatening to sue them. Jhanak meeting a senior male dancer or teacher who is interested in her, etc The biggest problem to Jhanak will be Ani himself. Ani doesn’t even need to establish anything with her. They just need mutual feelings, emotions are high, and he had already ended things with Arshi...and then boom Just when he believes they should label what they have (and reveal they are married and start life together), Jhanak starts getting mega deals, becoming popular, being linked in the news by tabloids to other celebs, and Ani starts panicking. Not only Ani, even Jhanak starts panicking. Brij Bushan says he knows they aren’t cool, but he is experienced and that she is meant to be international and Ani would only hold her back. She is more than a domestic life and be bothered by all that. Then, there is Arshi who still wants Ani and says she is ready to stop dancing and focus on being his wife if he gives her a chance.....I have the clear path for this show in my head.
Specific track:
Arshi can keep being slimy for appearances in the agency. The agency where Ani takes Jhanak to sign up as a trainee is the same one that Arshi is in as a top artiste. Arshi and Shristi used to give ridiculous prices and Clients go ‘oh that Jhanak actually dances better and is less expensive to book’. So they don’t plead as much as before and hurry to book Jhanak. Arshi gets angry and jealous and tries to isolate Jhanak from other rookies. Other rookies seeing Jhanak’s good character like her when she comes but arshi does things to separate them. And unlike usual ITV vamps that are so blatant, Arshi decides to kill Jhanak slowly while smiling. She will visit Jhanak and act more caring, bringing her expensive things that rookies can’t afford and hinting to everyone else ‘hey, she is special and has favors. She is my cousin and doesn’t need to work hard to be selected.’ In that way, when before the others believed that Jhanak was naturally gifted, not to them, every event she is booked for is because she is Arshi’s cousin. Arshi has isolated her and also has managed to reduce Jhanak’s hard work into her favors. Additionally, Ami also sees her ‘efforts’ to change and starts to be less guarded with her and closer, while maintaining they can only be friends. Arshi pretends to agree. Jhanak can tell that Arshi isn’t right in some way but cannot say exactly what because Arshi is doing all the nice things for her, so Jhanak, being young to showbiz is confused and depressed, that something is wrong with her. Jhanak also starts to feel guilty because Arshi is being good to her and she is developing feelings for Ani. She feels bad. Whenever Jhanak trains till late, the other rookies (who are busy wasting time chatting) will say she is just trying to seduce guys with her looks, Just like she did to her cousin’s fiancee and is a backstabber. She is targeted and she starts to refuse Ani access to visit her because her feelings are increasing and its a cycle. Ani, influenced by his trash family and Arshi (who he has told they should have a break but can still be friends), tell him Jhanak is now too popular to see him and he gets insecure and upset and says he won’t bother trying to visit her. Appu comes to visit, who is doing well in her own agency, commuting from home due to her special needs, and Jhanak asks about Ani. Appu, by the way, notices the subtle behavior towards Jhanak in the dorm. At this point, Jhanak knows there is something unspoken between her and Ani (both know) and she feels miserable Because she turned him away and she wants to see him so much, but at the same time, Ani seems to not care anymore to try again, yet again, she feels like maybe she actually seduced him like the other girls said. Jhanak starts to compare herself to Arshi, doubt her own talent, and with the bullying, her mentality collapses and she is rushed to the hospital after a scandal breaks out in the news (engineered by shristi and arshi) That she is having an affair with Brij Bushan, who is now belatedly trying to help her at the agency. Jhanak, with all these pressure, is also scared at what Ani will think of her if he sees this and if he would believe it and stay away from her and she collapses. Of course, this is a joke to Ani. The one who is holding her mom’s letter? Haha 😂!! He guesses there is a conspiracy now and rushes to the hospital and almost goes craze seeing Jhanak that way. Ani threatens to sue and arrest every living thing at the agency. He has the trainees in Jhanak’s room arrested once a whistleblower/Appu tells him. Arshi manages to exclude herself from it, feigning innocence and abandoning those girls. Ani gets distressed that Jhanak was bullied because of him and wonders if to reconcile with Arshi, work on their relationship and let Jhanak go for real. He goes to tell her when she leaves the hospital, and she cries, distressed. He cries after in the car and calls Arshi they should try again, but hoho... RAHUL comes to visit 😂. And Ani is back to, I chased you on a bike, I saved your life, I blah blah and Jhanak, who is upset and bitter at his reconciliation with Arshi, is back to, what right? What right?! 😂😂😂
I am waiting for the next thing afterbJhanak leaves. Where will she stay in Srinagar?
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