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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳There is something that i would like to share with all of you... its just a small writing which i had penned down laast week...hope you all like it...

Jassi is waiting for Armaan, who's gone for a business dinner-n- meeting... since next day is Armaan's birthday Jassi wants to be the first one to wish him Happy birthday....She thinks- "Kab se Armaan ki raah dekh rahi hoon, unke liye itni saari tayyariyaan bhi ki hai lekin Armaan hai ki ab tak nahi aaye"..


Thinking about Armaan she is standing by the window... At last Armaan comes home...As always he comes from behind and grabs Jassi by her shoulders😳.. With mock anger,"Main kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahi hoon Armaan, kitni der ho gayee hai pataa hai"..
"Lekin Jassi main toh tumhe keh kar gayaa tha ke mujhe aane mein der ho jaayegi, tum meri raah mat dekhna.."


"Le, ek toh aap ke janamdin ke liye surprise ki tayyari karo, yeh socho ki sab se pehle main tumhe wish karoo aur Mr. Suri keh rahe hain meri raah dekhna.."
"Jassi main toh bhul hi gayaa tha ki kal mera janamdin hai..."

All the while Jassi is trying to hide her both hands... after some time Armaan notices this and asks her "yeh kya chchupaya jaa raha hai Mrs. Suri..."
"Yeh sab main tumhe baad mein bataoungi, pehle tum chchat par chalo..." With a mischieveious glint in his eyes😉,"Kya iraada hai Jassi?","Tum chalo toh☺️.."

When they come near the entrance of the terrace, Jassi stops Armaan and asks him to put on the terrace lights, "main lights toh laga doonga par yeh toh bataao tum apne haath kyon chchupaa rahi ho, Kya tumhe koi chot toh nahi lagi? ", "Kya aapse yeh kisine kaha hai ke aap sawaal bahot puchhte hai Armaan Sir... ab aap apni ankhen band kariye.. "

Armaan closes his eyes.. Jassi comes in front of him and kisses him right on the lips... and whispers "Happy Birthday Armaan!!!" First with surprise and then with utmost affection and love Armaan accepts her wish...❤️☺️

After some time Armaan asks her, "Ab toh bataao meri Jassi tumhare hathon mein kya hai??" "um hm,Abhi nahi, Baad mein"... She coaxes him to enter the terrace... Armaan is surprised to see what is there... Right in the middle a table has been set for two with a Birthday cake and all finery, with red ballons scattered everywhere...

Jassi, "Aaj main bahot khhush hun Armaan, kyunki sabse pehle maine tumhe Birthday wish kiya..Aur yeh rahaa tumhara Birthday present..." saying this she shows her hands to Armaan.

She has put mehendi with a wish for Armaan on one hand -"True love is the best thing you can have and one of the best thing you can be, & i'm glad that i found that true love in YOU, Happy Birthday, Armaan..." And on the other hand ," I LOVE YOU..😳"

Armaan,with moist eyes, takes her hands in his... "Yeh aajtak ka mera sabse special aur pyaara Gift hai, Jassi.. I Love You..."Both are lost in each other's eyes for ,like, infinity😉😳...

"Ab cake cut karen Armaan... Woh bhi kabse tumhara intezaar ... " Armaan puts his finger gently on Jassi's lips, 😳"Shhhh.. mujhe iss lamhe ka ehsaas poori tarah lene do, KYUNKI yeh lamha , yeh pal toh chala jayegaa lekin iska Ehsaas hamesha, hamesha humaare saath rahegaa Jassi..." saying this he pulls his beloved into his ever inviting arms, with a promise to never let her go away from him😳😳😳...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohh!!!Rupali I thought for a minute that you are getting married with the MARRIAGE season fast approaching and were giving us the good news...

Anyway well written beautiful piece...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was so beautiful Rupali. Just like the pics and videos you post. I hope you keep writing more. 😳 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rupali that was just brilliant dear 😳 ..why don't u continue it as a FF 😛

Jassi and Armaan together hv always created Magic in the Romantic-Passionate scenes 😳 and while reading this beautiful piece I could actually visualize all the happenings 😳

Wonderful job Rupali 👏 👏 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was nice and romantic.. It was easy to imagine in pictures.. good work Rupali.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Vary beautiful Rups!!! You are a creative writer!! Yeah as Jyothi said why don't you contribute to FF!! Very nice 👏 👏 .. Jassi Armaan Ki jodi is one masterpiece!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dimdim

Ohh!!!Rupali I thought for a minute that you are getting married with the MARRIAGE season fast approaching and were giving us the good news...

Anyway well written beautiful piece...

Gottcha!!!😉😉😉 waise shaadi karne ke liye ek ladke ki zaroorat hoti hai aur unfortunately woh ladka is married to SS😭... so waiting😍

Well jokes apart... glad you liked the script

Edited by rupali28 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was so cute 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was beautiful Rups!!! 👏

Loved it - made my heart go mmmmm!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 Rupali that was nicely written continu to write if you have the time. I used to love writing untill I got maried and had a son. Know adays I don't get the chance even if I want to write. I look forward to you next pice.

All the best. 👏

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