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Entry 1

Armaan and Jassi in the Heartbeat restaurant. Mallika enters..

Mallika(confused): Armaan, tum is restaurant main kya kar rahe ho is chashmish chuhiya ke saath?

Armaan gives that blank look and tries to find an answer..

Armaan: woh Mallika, hum...😕

Jassi: woh Mallika ma'am, Armaan sir ka ek meeting tha, 'Mehta&sons'
fashion store ke maalik ke saath 6 baje.

Mallika: Armaan abhi tho 7 baj chuke hai, aur Jassi, tumhare duty time
tho abhi khatm ho chuki hai, tho abhi tum ghar jaao.. main Armaan ke saath
rahoongi.😈

Armaan: Woh Mallika, saari paperwork Jassi ko karni hai, tho Jassi ka
yahan hona zaroori hai.

Suddenly a waiter walks in

Waiter(in a romantic mood): Ye rahe sir, aapke dil-e-azeez falooda aur dil-e-armaan rasmalaai 😳

Mallika (takes Armaan aside): Armaan, ye kaisi jagah hai client meeting ke liye? aur koi jagah nahi mila kya?

Armaan: Woh Mallika...client ne meeting ke liye yahan pe aane ko kaha tha...

Mallika: Theek hai, armaan, abhi tum is chashimish ko bhej do aur phir hum dono dinner karenge...

Armaan: Mallika phir kabhi, abhi tum yahan se jaao...

Jassi: Armaan sir, main chali jaati hoon, paperwork baad mein kar loongi.🤢

Armaan: Nahi Jassi, tum yahi raho..tumhara yahan rehna zaroori hai.😳

Mallika(agitated): Armaan,tumhe hamesha is chashimish ki zaroorat hai, aur meri koi zaroorat nahi? theek hai, apne kaam khatm karke ghar aajana, phir hum baat karenge...😡

Mallika leaves haughtily and Armaan looks angry

Jassi: Armaan sir, lagta hai, abhi client nahi aayenge, tho kya hum ghar chale?

Armaan: Pehle dinner tho kar lete hai,Jassi...😳

Jassi: Nahin Armaan sir, mujhe ghar jaana hai, aur papaji bhi
pareshaan ho rahe honge🤢

Armaan(catching hold of Jassi's hand): Jassi,aajkal tum mere saath
bahut kam waqt bitaathe ho, kya ab tak tum mujhse naraaz ho?😳

Jassi: Armaan sir,main aapke saath Gulmohur ke liye aayi hoon..
tho agar hum apni personal baatein yahan na kare tho behtar hai..

Armaan: please Jassi, main tumhari dil ki baat jaanna chahta hoon. i love
you,Jassi. I really love you.. kya tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho? please,Jassi sach batao..😳

Jassi(getting up): Armaan sir,aap Mallika ma'am ke liye bane ho aur yahi sahi hai, abhi main ghar jaana chahti hoon...🤢

Armaan: Please Jassi, main tumhe ghar chod doonga dinner ke baad..😕

Jassi: Mujhe dinner nahi karni hai Armaan sir..

Armaan(within): tum baar baar aise kyon kar rahi ho Jassi? baar baar
mujhse door kyon chali jaati ho?😭

Armaan takes Jassi back home.

Entry 2

Armaan Takes Jassi at Heartbeat Restaurent😳

Armaan:Sweetheart,this was the surprise I was talking about,A Romantic Candlelight dinner before our marriage😃

Jassi:But Armaan I told u earlier also I can't see the food properly in candles😆..patah nahi,why people like eating in dim lights😡😆,See after my makeover,the braces have gone,but the contac lenses r not imported na😕..thats why thodi problem hoti hai😳

Armaan:No problem dear,I m there na...main khila dunga😳(*Jassi blushes and smiles*)..See my heart is really beating faster after seeing your lovely smile😳

Jassi:Thats because the Restaurent's name is Heartbeat Armaan😉,so the heart automatically starts beating fast😛

Armaan:Tum kitni bholi ho Jassi,Kuch samajhti hi nahin ho😛

Mallika enters the Restaurent and sees Armaan-Jassi doing coochie-cooing😉😛

Mallika:😲Tum dono...looks like I will have to yet again bring my Rambo Chaku into action😆

Jassi:Well Mallika I m the Bhagmati Queen😳,so u can't catch me😃

Mallika:Jassi in that case why don't u run away forever from my Armaan life😡

Jassi:Thats not possible Mallika;I run only to make Armaan run after me😉😛

Armaan:Nari-Niketan please stop fighting😆,I m really hungry right now😭lets first eat something😳..and Mallika..I told u many times that Jassi is my life,so u better stay our from our lives😃

Mallika:No way Armaan,u know I m the permanent Kabab Mein Haddi in your life😃

Armaan:😒Fine, then show your Villainous side later in Gulmohar as its the permanent Paagal Khaana of Fashion world😆😕,for the time being lets just leave us alone for dinner😃😳

Jassi:(*Whispering*)Armaan before Mallika bores us more,lets just run away from here😉

Armaan:Jassi can't u think of anything else other than Running😡.

Mallika:Thats because she is Miss Bhagmati 2005😃

Jassi:

Entry 3

Armaan and Jassi having a good time dining at the Heartbeat Restaurent when Mallika enters in a drunk state😃

Mallika:(*Starts singing a song in front of Armaan and Jassi's table*)Hai agar dushman, dushman; zamana gum nahin,gum nahin,koi aaye,koi aaye,hum kissi se kam nahin, kam nahin

Armaan:😕...Mallika this is a Seven Star Restaurent and I don't want donkeys to come and stand outside the Restaurent😆

Jassi:I think she is drunk Armaan,mayb not completely in her senses.

Mallika:Oh please Jassi...U don't need to give any explanation about my condition,u have ruined my entire life Jassi😭..mujhse mere Armaan ko cheen liya😭 and now having a good time eating sphagetti with him😡 while I m just reduced to wearing sphagetti strap blouses with my designer sarees😆😕

Armaan:Please stop doing your tamasha over here Mallika,this is not Gulmohar..just go from here😡..

Jassi:Its better we just leave from here Armaan;I don't want to create any unnecessary drama over here.

Mallika:Jassi one day u will have to leave from my Armaan's life forever and thats a challenge😃..Armaan ki patni mein hi banoongi,U will always remain a secretory

Armaan:(*Slaps Mallika in front of the all the people present in the Restaurent*)This is what u deserve Mallika and now before I forget that u were once my childhood friend ,its better u go from here.

Mallika:U already forgot that Armaan😭,but anyways I won't give up soo soon😈

Jassi:Keep on trying Mallika,but at the end only true love will win..😃because Armaan and Jassi r made for each other😳

(*Mallika goes from there like a wounded tiger*)

Jassi:Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Armaan.Mallika is still there in our lives like a dark cloud

Armaan:(*Holds Jassi's hands*)Don't worry Jassi,your Armaan Sir is always there with u,now lets eat the sphagettis,sab thanda ho gaya in all this high-voltage drama.😆😕

Jassi:Don't worry eat the thanda ones,and then we will have some garma garam milk😉😛

Armaan:😳😳

Entry 4

Armaan : Jassi we need to visit the client right now, so please get the files as its late already.
Jassi : What client? I have no appointments set with any client...(confused by an intense romantic look in Armaan sir's eyes, client meeting and why is he romantic?)
Armaan thinks, what am I doing? Why am I so keen on taking Jassi out? Do I really love her? No, I am simply doing it all for Gulmohur? Am I ? No, its not only Gulmohur, I am falling for her!)
Jassi: (Interupting his thoughts...)Sir, sir sir where are we going?
A: Right here.(A shady but romantic restaurant) The client said he shall come here........
Jassi: Here?!?!? (Aghast!)
Armaan:"Lets go inside"
Both are a bit awkward with the romantic settings but Armaan with his newfounded realisation cares less.|................
After the waiter departs with theor orders......
A:"I am sorry Jassi. I lied to you. But I had to get you out of there to tell you, I really missed you at Goa. I hated every moment of spending my time away from you, where actually it was you I wished to be there. I remembered our time in Singapore. Do you remember Jassi, I was so happy then, so free and I was with you. Armaan thinks in his mind,Do I actually mean all these things? A small voice says "Yes Armaan...."
Jassi is equally confused. She feels that with Armaan sir being already engaged she is doing the wrong thing and is confused. She simply stares at Armaan sir. His eyes are reflecting the truth and at the mention of Singapore all the beautiful moments come back all flashing in her eyes as if they are back there again, now!
A: You do remember, then why are you holding back Jassi? Why? Am I not worth for you? Please Jassi your quiet is killing me. Say something God dammit!!
J: Armaan sir, I feel, I feel we are wrong. You shouldn't be here with me. Its wrong. You are engaged to Mall.....
Armaan interupts her,
A: But you are here Jassi. Not her. Why do I feel that strange calm when you are with me. With her (He can't even bring himslef to say her name...) why do I always feel hatred and confusion......
Just then the waiter arrives with their drinks and Armaan asks him to get some dish remembering that Jassi is allergic to mushrooms and asks the waiter specifically not get anything with mushrooms. Jassi is touched by his remembering this and tears well up in her eyes. She feels the strong vibrancy of his feelings for her. Armaan sees that and grabs the chance, he slowly raises his hand and touches her fingers lightly, tentatively at first, and then holds her hand in his firm grip.
A:Look at me Jassi. Apne Armaan ki aankhon mein dekho, tumhe sirf tumhaare liye pyaar hi nazar aagyega. In his mind he thinks Yes finally he knows it is the truth and goes on to bare his heart.........
|Jassi is very shy and scared and with all that her confusion doesn't help. She goes to blabber something but just then they are rudely interupted with
Mallika: Armaaaaaannnnnn, what is going on here? And why are you holding Jassi's hand? She is in a spitting rage and Jassi has a scared look on her face and Armaan is there still holding Jassi's hand and with a renewed confidence simply looks deeply into Jassi's shocked and scared eyes and says A: "Mallika, whatever you see is right. I love Jassi and I can't marry you....................

Entry 5

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Ok parivaar, you see, I have a really hard time making decisions...so...I've just re-read all the entries again and again, and come to the conclusion that our members very very very talented indeed! Loved the last entry es well! Armaan aur sola somvaar?!?! 😆 But, after MUCH contemplation, I think I will have to go with.....no...I think I'll wait until voting is almost over...I need to think about it some more....you see, I really can't make decisions! But everyone has done a VERY good job! I love all of the entries...trust me, its was a Very Very Very hard decision to make, and a close call...I need more time!😕

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