JJKN Alternate story, by me. - Page 2

Thanks to all those who liked and appreciated my version of story.

Now to answer a few query's. Well Esha, you never know when good friends become first love, maybe purab is on denial about his love for meena because he thinks that meena is not fit for him & his family.

Kshreya, Thank you for your appreciations of my post😊. Even I liked that bit of nandu and jassi making armaan jealous, but unfortunately we are past that stage, basically that part was to make armaando realise his love for betty. Its too late in the show and we are past it. Also if you remmember then nandu and jassi did make armaan a bit jealous in the past, too bad the directors didnt grow the story on that. But that story was ended when jassi had agreed to marry purab (this means there is nothing between jassi and nandu). So now putting nandu and jassi together would have been just too much. after all the real reason to write the above story was to make it more beliveable. So sorry to disappoint you in that section. Also about making armaan jealous, jassi could have very well flaunted her relationship with purab after the make over just to make armaan jealous makes more sense doesnt it? Also would have helped purab to realise that jassi and armaan still love each other.

I really gave alot of thought how the story should have been from where it seemed to have messed up, basically right after the fire incident the story picked a downhill. and currently it has become too predictable. agreed that people like to see what they want but when the story becomes predictable then it becomes a bit bore. our brains are like, "ok we know that this is gonna happen then why all this stuff, comeon moveon." Also till how long do you think mushy scenes will hold your attention after sometimes it becomes a bit bore as we need to see good story as well.

Also for the funny scenes we have a lot of story untold from life's of nandu and pari and maria and veeru.

Jammy.

Great story Jammy, but can you try writing it in a way that Purab marries Jassi??

I think you should put Nandu and Pari together and Malika can go with Raj.

Originally posted by: jammy

Thanks to all those who liked and appreciated my version of story.

Now to answer a few query's. Well Esha, you never know when good friends become first love, maybe purab is on denial about his love for meena because he thinks that meena is not fit for him & his family.

Kshreya, Thank you for your appreciations of my post😊. Even I liked that bit of nandu and jassi making armaan jealous, but unfortunately we are past that stage, basically that part was to make armaando realise his love for betty. Its too late in the show and we are past it. Also if you remmember then nandu and jassi did make armaan a bit jealous in the past, too bad the directors didnt grow the story on that. But that story was ended when jassi had agreed to marry purab (this means there is nothing between jassi and nandu). So now putting nandu and jassi together would have been just too much. after all the real reason to write the above story was to make it more beliveable. So sorry to disappoint you in that section. Also about making armaan jealous, jassi could have very well flaunted her relationship with purab after the make over just to make armaan jealous makes more sense doesnt it? Also would have helped purab to realise that jassi and armaan still love each other.

I really gave alot of thought how the story should have been from where it seemed to have messed up, basically right after the fire incident the story picked a downhill. and currently it has become too predictable. agreed that people like to see what they want but when the story becomes predictable then it becomes a bit bore. our brains are like, "ok we know that this is gonna happen then why all this stuff, comeon moveon." Also till how long do you think mushy scenes will hold your attention after sometimes it becomes a bit bore as we need to see good story as well.

Also for the funny scenes we have a lot of story untold from life's of nandu and pari and maria and veeru.

Jammy.

acc to me story went downhill when jassi demanded ceoship and started giving attitude to everyone. I lost sympathy for her. Also tore up her diary. It is essential that the protagonist strikes a sympathetic chord. Finally felt sorry for her in the episode when Aryan and Mallika were after her.

Jassi and Nandu making Armaan jealous may not happen given the rapport b/w armaan and nandu at this stage. most likely armaan and nandu will help jassi tide over her crisis. Infact I dont think there will be mushy scenes at all b/w Armaan and Jassi. Jassi has just been dumped and Armaan is engaged. Jassi is no longer pagal after Armaan and Armaan has turned over a new leaf and I guess he wont intentionally cheat Mallika.

So my guess is story may not go exactly the blf way. except that now Jassi has to find out abt Armaan's fake proposal and also have the makeover. So other than these 2 incidents the story will not be on predictable lines.

Originally posted by: munizaaa

Great story Jammy, but can you try writing it in a way that Purab marries Jassi??

I think you should put Nandu and Pari together and Malika can go with Raj.

Arre yaar Jammy to apna aadmi hai, jaisa hum bolenge waisi story likh dega 😉

jammy ur story is really awesome. if the story goes like this all the viewers will be happy i.e Armaan fans and even Purab fans.

Mallika can go with Raj.Even Raj is good guy.😉.Aryan ko chod do agar use chairmanship mil gaya to kuch aur nahin chahiye.😆😆

Ur story was simply superb. I liked the part where Purab realises that he still has some feelings for meena.

Originally posted by: cutereems

jammy ur story is really awesome. if the story goes like this all the viewers will be happy i.e Armaan fans and even Purab fans.

Mallika can go with Raj.Even Raj is good guy.😉.Aryan ko chod do agar use chairmanship mil gaya to kuch aur nahin chahiye.😆😆

Ur story was simply superb. I liked the part where Purab realises that he still has some feelings for meena.

That will be better, atleast yeh to nahi lagega ki acche log end mein dukhi hote hai !!

It is very nice story Jammy. I think your story has made Purab fans happy.

Ides, ritu and cutereems liked the story(they r Purab fans right????).Aisa hone se Purab fans ur Armaan fans ke beech ka jhagada to khatam ho jayega.