A&J. Inspired to write my own scenes - Page 2

Hi JP...I dont know how , but I was also thinking on the same lines that before Jassi's reentry, where Armaan dreams of Jassi in his old avatar, and immediately after that he would get a shock of his life on seeing Jassi's new one...Well done...

You need not be a poet or a painter, because without imagination none is good enough...i also have a lot of oing on in my mind...Keep posting the good work...

Originally posted by: alien_visitor

Hi JP...I dont know how , but I was also thinking
on the same lines that before Jassi's reentry, where Armaan dreams of
Jassi in his old avatar, and immediately after that he would get a shock of
his life on seeing Jassi's new one...Well done...

You need not be a poet or a painter, because without imagination none
is good enough...i also have a lot of oing on in my mind...Keep posting
the good work...

thanks Alien Visitor. Did you see my post to you? Will u write me a
romantic poem on Jassi and Armaan? I am so sad for Armaan.

u are to good JP....

Mallika

This is my version of JP's scene, the first one.

Armaan receives a call that Jassi is finally going to come back to Gulmohar, and he is dying to meet her at his office.

Just then as if his prayers were heard, the door opens and Jassi enters...

He gets up from his chair and with all the passion he can put in his voice he calls to her tearfully..

Armaan: Jassiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...

Jassi: Armaan Sir, Yeh apko kya hogaya?

Armaan: Jassi tumhare bina main Jee nahi saka Jassi. Mujhe chorkar tum kaise Jasakthi thi?

Jassi: Main yahan rehe nahi saki.

Armaan: Jassi, Maine tumhara dard ko mehsoos karliya. Yeh bahar dikhraha hai yeh kuch bhi nahi.Tum tho mere dil mein ho, pata nahi chala is dard ka andaaz?, Choor choor horaha hoon,tumhare bina. Mujhe kudh se bhachao Jassi. Mere zakhamon ka dava tumhara pyaar hai Jassi. Abhi kabhi bhi mujhe chor kar mat jaana Jassi( tearfully)

Jassi: ( crying) Armaan Sir, Armaan Sir... Main bhi kush nahi thi jaake...

They hug each other passionately.

My hindi is also poor, so kindly adjust.

I dont know if u read this poem of mine, Will try to write a new one, till then read this?

Hoshwalon ko khabar kya?

Zeher peene ka dum nahin

Jab tak tumhe na dekhloon...

Hosh mein jeene ka din nahin

Jab tak aankhen na bharsavoon...

Teri yaadon ki nasha mein

doob raha hoon,

Dard kya ab jaana hai hum

Aaakar mujhe sametlo sanam...

Rom rom pe aajayega jeevan

Aakar bhahomein samaajao sanam…

Hosh walon ko kabar kya

Bekhudi kya cheez hai,

Isdesh walon ko kabar kya

Mere Isqh bhi kuch ajeeb hai...

OMG.. jprasad.. minnie is damn too right, you're a chhuppa rustom and I would LUV to read more posts like this from you...!!!😳😳😳

You have a fantastic imagination, and what else does one need to communicate effectively if not bold and simple words? You're talented and it shows. Appreciate it even more cos I'm hopeless at this imagination thingy myself.. I always end up making the serial characters turn into M&B protagonists and take the story on a whole different track😕 that's what comes of reading too many M&B's too early on! I'm brainwashed!!😛

Alien_visitor, you're gifted too... still havn't forgotten ur poem that went something like: wish you'd swooped down as a vulture instead of pretending to be a sparrow.. then it wudn't have hurt me so much..😭 that was beautiful!!

since everyone is writting thier dream scene..i have one too...
i always thought of this scene
this takes place when jessi comes back...armaan has realized what he has done..and hee will do nething to makee jessi happy...even tho it hurts to see her with purab...he knows he made mistakes..and god should punish him...jessi ko purab ke saath dekhna bhi ka dard bhi ek saza hi hai...
he knows jessi has changed..and she is not his jesssi.."meri jessi"..

he tried so much to tell her he has changed..that her middle class mentality is what he fell for..her big glasses and her hair..just the way she is...he loves her for who she is...but she tells him she hates him..and he is a lier..so then armaan decide to do everything what jessi says...and wait for the day when she comes to know wthe truth by herself..


jessi has been working at gulmohar for past 2 months...she takes care of the company....
she needed to finalized some deal with other company ..and she needed to review the detail file...
she comes to think armaan has the file...

jessi goes to armaans apartment to pick up the file...
she knows the door..but no one answers...but then she realized..armaan has left the door open...

so she slowly opens the door..saying.."armaan sir, armaan sir..sir aap kahan ho"...
no one answers...she takes the good look around....then she walks into his bedroom..looking for him...
thats when she is shocked to see her pictures all over the wall...

woh pura ghoom ke sare bedroom mai apnni tasviren dekhti hai...uski har alag tasvir.....big glasses....those old hair...those braces...her old baggy cloths...
and she remembers old days..
who armaan sir ka car ki chabi dena
woh phool bhegna..
woh cards
woh teddy bear..
woh ring pehnana..
aaine mai apne saath..armaan ko pana...
woh pehli baar amraan sir ka..i love you jessi kehna..
woh last hug..
and she starts crying...
just then armaan comes out in his bath towel...wiping his hair...
he is shocked to see jessi in his room...


armaan: jessi tum yahan kese?

jessi: woh mai...(still lookking at pics)

armaan: woh kiya jessi...: (he realized she is in his bedroom looking around those pics..)

jessi: amraan sir...ye meri tasviren...?

armaan: ye tumhari nahi hai..meri jessii ki hai...tum khud hi dekhlo..tumme aur meri jessi mai kitna fark hai...tumhari aankhon pe bare bare chasme nahi hai..tumhare baal..(by now he is angry and yelling..)
mujse dur jane ke liye tumne apne baal to kiya apni chaal tak badal di hai..tum meri jessi hohi nahi sakti...

jessi: armaan sir..kiya aap mujse wakehi etna pyar karte hai?

armaan: jessi ye baat sach hai ke..tumse pyar karne ki koi plannning to ki nahi thi..bas gulmohar ko bachane ke liye tumhari zaroorat thi..agar saaf saaf tumse fake balance sheet banane ko kehta to..tum na kehti..es liye raj ke kehne par jooth ka sahara liya...

jessi: armaan sir..aap jante the na mai kitna pyar karti huin aapse......ek baar kehte to jaan tak de deti...aur phir sahi kaam ke liye jooth ka sahara to sahi kaam hi hota hai na....

armaan: (realized..she said "kitna pyar karti huin...not kitna pyar karti thi)...kiya aabhi pyar karti ho mujse jessi?

jessi: (shocked..and thinks of what she just said..and turns her back on him)

armaan: mai janta huin jessi..tumhe mene dukh diya hai..lekin us dukh me ...mai bhi to pal pal jala huin...jessi tumse behad pyar karta huin...bahot koshish kii tumhare khayal se bhi dur rehne ki..lekin jessi..saco mano ...ye mere bas mai ab nahi hai...tumse door reh nahi sakta..aur tumhe dukhi bhi nahi dekh sakta..

jessi: (turns back to him..still crying..tears rolling down her eyes..)...armaan sir..aapko kiya lagta hai.aapse dur chale jane se aapko mai bhul gai huin...khudko to badal diya..lekin aapko pyar karne se es dil ko na rok pai..

thennnnn..they hug and tell each other..

armaan: i love u jessi...tumhare bina ji nahi sakta..

jessi: i love u armaan sir...maii bhi to aapke bina kabhi ji nahi saki..aur nahi kabhi ji sakungii...

they then..armaan&jessi..FOREVER ALWAYS!!!

whoa emma...Armaan in a bathroom towel...whoa...I almost passed out...whoa...whoa...whoa....(faint)

thank you so much Alien Visitor and I agree with Queenbee that poem you wrote on swooped down as a vulture instead of pretending to be a sparrow was beautiful. Would you mind posting it again???


Thanks!

Originally posted by: Emaa

since everyone is writting thier dream scene..i have one too...
i always thought of this scene
this takes place when jessi comes back...armaan has realized what he has done..and hee will do nething to makee jessi happy...even tho it hurts to see her with purab...he knows he made mistakes..and god should punish him...jessi ko purab ke saath dekhna bhi ka dard bhi ek saza hi hai...
he knows jessi has changed..and she is not his jesssi.."meri jessi"..

he tried so much to tell her he has changed..that her middle class mentality is what he fell for..her big glasses and her hair..just the way she is...he loves her for who she is...but she tells him she hates him..and he is a lier..so then armaan decide to do everything what jessi says...and wait for the day when she comes to know wthe truth by herself..


jessi has been working at gulmohar for past 2 months...she takes care of the company....
she needed to finalized some deal with other company ..and she needed to review the detail file...
she comes to think armaan has the file...

jessi goes to armaans apartment to pick up the file...
she knows the door..but no one answers...but then she realized..armaan has left the door open...

so she slowly opens the door..saying.."armaan sir, armaan sir..sir aap kahan ho"...
no one answers...she takes the good look around....then she walks into his bedroom..looking for him...
thats when she is shocked to see her pictures all over the wall...

woh pura ghoom ke sare bedroom mai apnni tasviren dekhti hai...uski har alag tasvir.....big glasses....those old hair...those braces...her old baggy cloths...
and she remembers old days..
who armaan sir ka car ki chabi dena
woh phool bhegna..
woh cards
woh teddy bear..
woh ring pehnana..
aaine mai apne saath..armaan ko pana...
woh pehli baar amraan sir ka..i love you jessi kehna..
woh last hug..
and she starts crying...
just then armaan comes out in his bath towel...wiping his hair...
he is shocked to see jessi in his room...


armaan: jessi tum yahan kese?

jessi: woh mai...(still lookking at pics)

armaan: woh kiya jessi...: (he realized she is in his bedroom looking around those pics..)

jessi: amraan sir...ye meri tasviren...?

armaan: ye tumhari nahi hai..meri jessii ki hai...tum khud hi dekhlo..tumme aur meri jessi mai kitna fark hai...tumhari aankhon pe bare bare chasme nahi hai..tumhare baal..(by now he is angry and yelling..)
mujse dur jane ke liye tumne apne baal to kiya apni chaal tak badal di hai..tum meri jessi hohi nahi sakti...

jessi: armaan sir..kiya aap mujse wakehi etna pyar karte hai?

armaan: jessi ye baat sach hai ke..tumse pyar karne ki koi plannning to ki nahi thi..bas gulmohar ko bachane ke liye tumhari zaroorat thi..agar saaf saaf tumse fake balance sheet banane ko kehta to..tum na kehti..es liye raj ke kehne par jooth ka sahara liya...

jessi: armaan sir..aap jante the na mai kitna pyar karti huin aapse......ek baar kehte to jaan tak de deti...aur phir sahi kaam ke liye jooth ka sahara to sahi kaam hi hota hai na....

armaan: (realized..she said "kitna pyar karti huin...not kitna pyar karti thi)...kiya aabhi pyar karti ho mujse jessi?

jessi: (shocked..and thinks of what she just said..and turns her back on him)

armaan: mai janta huin jessi..tumhe mene dukh diya hai..lekin us dukh me ...mai bhi to pal pal jala huin...jessi tumse behad pyar karta huin...bahot koshish kii tumhare khayal se bhi dur rehne ki..lekin jessi..saco mano ...ye mere bas mai ab nahi hai...tumse door reh nahi sakta..aur tumhe dukhi bhi nahi dekh sakta..

jessi: (turns back to him..still crying..tears rolling down her eyes..)...armaan sir..aapko kiya lagta hai.aapse dur chale jane se aapko mai bhul gai huin...khudko to badal diya..lekin aapko pyar karne se es dil ko na rok pai..

thennnnn..they hug and tell each other..

armaan: i love u jessi...tumhare bina ji nahi sakta..

jessi: i love u armaan sir...maii bhi to aapke bina kabhi ji nahi saki..aur nahi kabhi ji sakungii...

they then..armaan&jessi..FOREVER ALWAYS!!!

Emaa.... this is priceless!!! Armaan in a bath-towel embracing Jassi!!! WOW😆

I loved it!!! Great imagination😃