To Armaan Sir with Hate( from who else)

Hey Guys, I could hear all of you saying, Not again...Not another poem, But the impulse was killing me...So here's one from Jassi to her Armaan Sir with Love or Hate...

It wouldn't have burnt me thus

If you had swooped like a vulture

Rather perching like a sparrow...

If you had stung like a poison ivy

Rather shining like the morning glory...

If you had torn like the hounding foes

Rather singing friendly tunes...

It wouldn't have burnt me thus...

Yet still in this inky dark

I could spot a dawn, a spark...

When the sky lightens with

The Rising of the Phoenix

I will up and fly again

From the depths of my own ashes...

That was so beautiful alien_visitor!
It felt like I was reading Jassi's mind.

Wow, that was just so beautiful. Thanx for offering such a great read.

Wow, that was astoundingly beautiful. Thank you for offering such a great read! 👏

Hey sorry about repeating myself, my internet just went haywire and i didn't realise the first message had been posted!😛 But I seriously loved your poem alien_visitor

that was great. But i love Armaan. 😭

THAT WAS GREAT !!!!!! 👏 👏

That was absolutely beautiful alien....so deep and wonderful....gives us all hope of a brighter tomorrow in our own lives in general....i especially love the last couple of lines....keep up the good work, you guys are great.

wow! great alien once again!👏!! specially the last stanza!

Originally posted by: Daisy

That was so beautiful alien_visitor!
It felt like I was reading Jassi's mind.

I second that!