...GOA... - Page 2

Originally posted by: ANJANA

I don't have words to say 👏


bye,

Anjana

I Agree ..with you Anjana..well said..we can only clap..!!!👏

phewwwwwwwwww it got hot here suddenly and i m breathing hard. wow enigma u r something
like jd said i got lost of track and surroundings
tumbo dumbo r not goin to show this but when the goa scenes do come we wud be picturising this only
this seems a perfect ending to perfect love story
wowww
dont know what else to say
i m just lost in that
how do u manage to write all that

amazing brilliant i loved it
wowww again
i think i wud go and drink water to cool down myself
u r making everyones hormones go mad now
hehe 😆

ahem...ahem! 😉 i can see sme hormone levels rising... 😉

tooo good dear
I m really impressed the way u write
its much bettr than we expect next from TnD

I was in a terribly morbid and somber mood today.

The first time I read your piece, I felt Goosebumps steal over my neck and hands...I experienced plain carnal pleasure…

The second time I read it, I experienced the glory of being a woman…

The third time I read it, I experienced wrath at the injustice that is meted out to true lovers and true love…

The fourth time I read it, I experienced the ecstasy that is born of fulfilled love…

The fifth time I read it, I experienced the pain of falling in love…

The sixth time I read it, I felt a strange completeness, incomprehensible fulfillment…

Blissfully armed with the experience called 'Love', thanks to enigs, I can proudly say 'I too know what it is to love, to be loved, to lose love and then regain it…capture it…drink it…revel in it…If you are one of us, you will agree that love is heaven…'

You know enigs, several people could pen down a technically better piece than yours but I doubt if even half a per cent of them would be able to move the reader half as much as yours does.

A good writer is not the one who makes not even a single grammatical error but one who invites the reader to take a delightful journey with him and experience what he wants you to…

A good writer shows the reader not tells him…

A good writer makes the reader yearn to a be a part of his master piece…

I swear I wanted to be Mallika just to experience A's cold fury…I could actually feel his eyes blazing..I could almost touch the tumult of emotions let loose…

I actually experienced evil accepting defeat and good, in the form of love, finally basking in the glory of its victory…

Every word of yours is poetry enigs..magic…

I just love the way words seem to fall in to place like the pieces of a zig zaw puzzle..all by itself...effortless and magical…

I love the way every word under your expert guidance becomes music, swirling and twirling, etching out priceless waves of magical music…

You have a great talent…you could, through your writing actually make a positive difference to doomed lives…I am not exaggerating!

Use your talent well enigs and thanks for bringing some sunshine in to a cheerless life…

AJ FOREVER!


(And there are certain sentences, adjectives, phrases that are startlingly original and amazingly apt. I'd like to dwell on them at leisure, to do them complete justice…)

But your extrordinary talent doesn't vindicate you from your charges!

I charge you with the sin of spoiling young impressionable minds and giving them ideas!

Boys sure wouldn't want to thank you for raising our expectations from them!

Unfortunately, boys in real life are such a****, really (There is only one Armaan after all in this world)…To think of the effort it takes to teach them to kiss alone…much less something more complex…!
🤢

Once again enigs, 👏

😃

And I'm going all paani paani imagining Apu and Mona execute this..... 😳

Originally posted by: Deepa_iyer

I was in a terribly morbid and somber mood today.

The first time I read your piece, I felt Goosebumps steal over my neck and hands...I experienced plain carnal pleasure…

The second time I read it, I experienced the glory of being a woman…

The third time I read it, I experienced wrath at the injustice that is meted out to true lovers and true love…

The fourth time I read it, I experienced the ecstasy that is born of fulfilled love…

The fifth time I read it, I experienced the pain of falling in love…

The sixth time I read it, I felt a strange completeness, incomprehensible fulfillment…

Blissfully armed with the experience called 'Love', thanks to enigs, I can proudly say 'I too know what it is to love, to be loved, to lose love and then regain it…capture it…drink it…revel in it…If you are one of us, you will agree that love is heaven…'

You know enigs, several people could pen down a technically better piece than yours but I doubt if even half a per cent of them would be able to move the reader half as much as yours does.

A good writer is not the one who makes not even a single grammatical error but one who invites the reader to take a delightful journey with him and experience what he wants you to…

A good writer shows the reader not tells him…

A good writer makes the reader yearn to a be a part of his master piece…

I swear I wanted to be Mallika just to experience A's cold fury…I could actually feel his eyes blazing..I could almost touch the tumult of emotions let loose…

I actually experienced evil accepting defeat and good, in the form of love, finally basking in the glory of its victory…

Every word of yours is poetry enigs..magic…

I just love the way words seem to fall in to place like the pieces of a zig zaw puzzle..all by itself...effortless and magical…

I love the way every word under your expert guidance becomes music, swirling and twirling, etching out priceless waves of magical music…

You have a great talent…you could, through your writing actually make a positive difference to doomed lives…I am not exaggerating!

Use your talent well enigs and thanks for bringing some sunshine in to a cheerless life…

AJ FOREVER!


(And there are certain sentences, adjectives, phrases that are startlingly original and amazingly apt. I'd like to dwell on them at leisure, to do them complete justice…)

But your extrordinary talent doesn't vindicate you from your charges!

I charge you with the sin of spoiling young impressionable minds and giving them ideas!

Boys sure wouldn't want to thank you for raising our expectations from them!

Unfortunately, boys in real life are such a****, really (There is only one Armaan after all in this world)…To think of the effort it takes to teach them to kiss alone…much less something more complex…!
🤢

Once again enigs, 👏

😃

And I'm going all paani paani imagining Apu and Mona execute this..... 😳

deepa enigma moved and touched everyone with her writing this piece and made everyone feel that love that passion with that intensity

and ur words are so true and explain totally how each of us felt when readin this piece

i feel so elated that we have such creative geniuses who cud make the reader go thru so much feelings

deepa....sach main armaaan jaisi koi nahin 😆 ...try as we might his character is much too complex to find anyone anywhere close to him... 😳
i agree...there maybe people like armaan..but there is only one armaan suri!

oh wow if enigma mesmerised us with her story ,deepa u have expressed ur feelings (and ours too) so beautifully.woe we do have some great creative minds here
kaash we cld say the same abt the jjkn creative team...

oh wow if enigma mesmerised us with her story ,deepa u have expressed ur feelings (and ours too) so beautifully.wow we do have some great creative minds here
kaash we cld say the same abt the jjkn creative team...

Originally posted by: tina59

oh wow if enigma mesmerised us with her story ,deepa u have expressed ur feelings (and ours too) so beautifully.woe we do have some great creative minds here
kaash we cld say the same abt the jjkn creative team...

I agree with you completely Tina..Deepa..you are just fab yaar..!! Wow..what a team of lovers we have for Armaan suri and Armaan's Jassi..and Apurva and Mona..!!

love you all...Hema.(What would I do without you all..God..I would surely be dead..with all these crazy things..the useless..Sony creative people are doing...)