ViTharv OS- Second chances!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!

"I am disgusted at the fact that I ever loved you." These words, these heartbreaking words kept playing like a broken record in his ears, continuously as he stood there, at the exact spot when she had spat those words right across his face. The night was pitch dark, with only the moon keeping it company. There were no stars and no hopes. And all he ever wanted was Vividha back.

He crushed onto the ground not knowing what to do, after how he had hurted Vividha. He was still dumbfounded at the fact that, even after so many games he played, she had stayed on. She had bared his every insult, every tantrum and his every freaking blame, as she believed in their love, their relationship. She believed in him and no matter what, she wouldn't dare speak against him, even at his back.

He had heard her entire conversation with Ravish, and that's when it struck him, that as much as he had got involved in her and their love, she was in it too. She had trusted him, despite knowing his trust issues, had given him everything knowing his habits and accepted the way he was despite his painful past. She had made his life beautiful. She had filled it with colors and balloons and their love. She had done everything for him, not wanting anything in return. All she ever wanted was my trust and my love.

He remembered that it didn't matter to her that he tested her love, it mattered to her that he let her down. It killed her and pierced her heart like flaming arrows, when she knew she couldn't prove to him even after so many incidents that she loved me.

He entered the room, opening her cupboard, he took her dupatta out. He held it in his hand, it was the same piece, which she had tied to his palm it was bleeding. He had kept it till date. He took it in front of him and cried out his heart out. He collapsed to the ground, with her dupatta near his heart. "I am sorry Vividha". These were his last words before he slumped to the floor.

And seeing him like this, I had decided to give him another chance, as I always give people whom I love. I decided to give our Love another Chance. It was another chance for Atharv and Vividha, and that's why I believe in second chances, she proudly told her 3 year old daughter, Malvika.

Life is all about Second Chances!


The End!


I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!


Positive criticism welcome!

Love,

Mayu

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Shweta13 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayuuu ... this got me completely.
I exactly want Atharva to be like this after the leap but your last few lines made me cry ... Vitharv my babies ... How can I not love them and me as a fan too will give Atharva a second chance too after he regrets like this.

This is so so beautiful.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It literally give me goosebumps
Thanxs for this surprise OS😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written dear.
So much pain but amazing
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is such a beautiful OS
Thank you for writing an amazing OS it gave me chills
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS Mayu❤️
But Malavika sounds too old fashioned a name for Vitharv's kid😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really nice story
Soo sad but so vitharv
Lovely job
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu this angst is what I expect post leap in atharv. He should know what he had done while he was blinded with stupid insecurities.
Very beautiful OS :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta13

Mayuuu ... this got me completely.

I exactly want Atharva to be like this after the leap but your last few lines made me cry ... Vitharv my babies ... How can I not love them and me as a fan too will give Atharva a second chance too after he regrets like this.

This is so so beautiful.


Shweta🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I so want Atharv to go through this pain and angst for how he MU Vividha😳

We will definitely give both of them a second chance!😃

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: saharsonu

It literally give me goosebumps

Thanxs for this surprise OS😳


Thankyou so much:)

I am free now so many more surprises😆

Love,
Mayu

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