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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!😳


This scene is out of the context. This is a scene I so wanted to see, but I guess we are not getting it, so I decided to give a vivid account of the scene!❤️

Since I am not able to find a suitable title, please do suggest one too!😳


ViTharv OS- Untitled!


Seeing his mother leave for the temple, Atharv knew this was the perfect opportunity to gift Vividha something he had been planning to do since the day she surprised him with the 70's look and the delicious food. How he had been longing for such small, sweet moments which will be etched in his memory, their memory and will linger with them all their life along. These stolen moments defined their relation, these stolen moments, their stolen glances, their stolen kisses and their conversations.

Atharv saw her strolling in the stable. It was their routine to spend time in cattle shed, have a cup of tea together and discuss their day. Sometimes even Sujata chachi would join them and the three would have a lovely little chat, regarding the factory, household decisions and eventually she would tease these two lovebirds. Vividha had finished her degree and had joined Atharv's factory to understand the workings of the same. He wanted her to help him out with his current factory and with the establishment of his new factory. She was a quick learner, she had learnt the basic ropes and was helping him, giving him the confidence when he would doubt himself and his projects.


Atharv hugged her from behind and entwined his fingers with her. They took a moment to acknowledge their happiness and she was the first to speak in the moment.


Vividha: "Atharv..."


Atharv: "Hmm..."


Vividha: "Aaj itna late kyun hua? Phone pe to kaha ki aaj kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya..."


Atharv: "Wo sab chodo na, aap chalo na mere saath..."


Vividha: "Kaha?..."


Atharv didn't give her any answer, instead swept her of her feet and carried her to his house.


He put her down. He bolted the door, so no one would disturb this precious time which was his. Vividha was a bit angry. But he knew exactly how to calm her down.


He gently tucked a lone strand of hair that was falling on her face and hugged her tight. How could she still be angry on this very man she loved heart, body and soul. He shifted her hair to one side of the neck, and pecked her nape. He broke the hug to see her smiling.


She finally spoke,


Vividha: "Yeh sab kya hai? Aur tumne darwaza kyun band kiya?..."

Atharv: "Are hamari zindagi main haddiyan kam nahi hai...ye waqt sirf hamara hai...main kisiko bhi yeh spoil nai karne doonga..."


Vividha smiled at his innocence. He was so outspoken and frank about his feelings and his possessiveness for her and their relation.


Atharv: "Waise mere paas aapke ek surprise hai..."


Vividha's eyes lit up the moment he said about the surprise. She loved getting surprises, and when they came from him, they were extra special.


Vividha excitedly extended her hand in front of him, expecting some kind of packed present but instead she saw him unbuttoning his shirt. She was appalled at his behaviour. She stopped him, but he was in no mood to stop.


Vividha: "Atharv...yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?..."


Atharv: "Are us din to aapne pura show kaha dekha?..."


Vividha: "Us din...kis din?"


Atharv: "Are us din, jis din aap history main paas ho gayi thi...us din to public ke liye tha...aaj sirf aapke liye private performance..."


Vividha couldn't help laughing at his antics; he took that bet way seriously.


Vividha: "Main mazaak kar rahi thi Atharv...aisa please mat karna..."


Atharv: "Us din to bada maza aa raha tha aapko?...Mujhe pata hai aapne bahut enjoy kiya..."


Vividha: "Kaha...yahi dar tha ki tumhaari ye sexy body koi aur ne dekh li to? Aur tum to poori taiiyari main the, Dadi aur unke doston ke saath flirt karne ke liye..."


Atharv: "Jalan..."


Vividha: "Haan...bahut jalan hui...tum to meri taraf bhi nai dekh rahe the...poora dhyan Dadi par tha..."


Atharv: "Possessiveness..."


Vividha: "Haan...main hoon tumhaare bare main possessive...aur iss baat ka mazak banaya to dekh lena..." she said anger evident in her voice.


Atharv: "Main iss baat ka mazaak kaise bana sakta hoon, jab main khud aapke liye ye feel karta hoon...aap sirf meri hai..." he stated as a matter of fact.


She raised upto his level and took his lips in a passionate kiss, slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through. They parted to breathe, staying in the embrace feeling the emotions running high in both of their hearts.


Vividha looked into his eyes and started buttoning his shirt. Before closing the last button, she kissed his bare chest. He moaned in pleasure. She enjoyed seeing him like this; her touch affected him as much as his touch affected him. He was anticipating another move from her side, but she stepped back to take a good look at him, his excitement, his longing and his desire.


He opened his eyes to see her staring at him. He grabbed her and hugged her. They stayed there, in complete silence; she rested her head against his chest, listening to their hearts beat in rhythm with each other. He could clearly hear her heart racing, her beats getting faster, all he did was crush her against his chest, tighten his grip around her waist, and stood still until, her heart was back to normal. She slowly raised her head from his chest while they stood there, their eyes speaking. Speaking a thousand unsaid words, a thousand unsaid feelings she spoke first.

Vividha: "Aur koi surprise baaki hai ya phir main ghar jaa sakti hoon?"


Atharv: "Ruko naa...itni kya jaldi hai?"


Vividha: "Mujhe tumhe kuch dena hai..."


Atharv: "Kya?..."

She went towards his cupboard and bought a photo frame. It was his childhood picture with his mother.


Vividha: "Pasand aaya?"


Atharv: "Haan, obviously. Par aapko ye mili kaha se?"


Vividha: "Actually jab tumne papa ka collar pakda tha, uske baad main bahut gussa hui thi. Gusse main yeh fek di thi...pichle hafte Sujata chachi se maafi mangi aur phir se iska frame banvane ka socha..."


Atharv: "Hmm..."


Vividha: "Kyat um mujhe kabhi us din ke liye maaf kar paoge? Bahut galat kiya tumhaare saath, tumhe itna maara...I am really sorry."


Atharv: "Koi baat nai...main aapko kab ka maaf kar chooka hoon."


She said an inaudible thankyou! This man loved her immensely. He never ceased to amaze her. Every second, every moment he amazed her.

Atharv and Vividha were together! They both had finally found peace and selfless love both had been struggling to find!





The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!❤️


Positive criticism welcome!😳



Love,

Mayu

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Ultimatevikku7 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu...another great OS...👏
really loved it..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu love your OS as always 👏and asusual your OS was awesome fabulous😳 I so want these scenes may be in future we get these type of scenes.😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu my sweetheart... 🤗 What a lovely OS it is... ❤️

I just loved loved loved this idea of yours...Atharv's surprise. I was imagining the scenes while reading it. And the interesting thing is the other day Vividha did enjoy it when Atharv was doing it in front of everyone... 😆 I wish I could see this scene on my tv screen.

I always adore their love and possessiveness for each other. Their jealousy makes their love more cute and perfect. ViTharv's stolen moments are dreamy...

ViTharv for me, they define love, through their banters, jealousy, teasing and it just compels me to fall for them more and more.

Thank you so much Mayu for giving us this beautiful OS. It's so beautifully written by you. You described each and every expression of them so brilliantly.

Lots of love for you... 🤗 ❤️
Edited by Nira_Mukherjee - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS mayuuu

love u

u know how to brighten my day

my all time favourite atharv and vividhas romance

atharv and vividha r both mad about each other and of course vividha likes atharvs surprises

what better surprise than he himself for her, atharv shirtless is the best gift for vividha , their private moments i always cherish

their beautiful moments are the USP of jaana na dil se door

atharv bringing her to the room, kissing herto the fullest, ur description says it all dear , its magical and they are magical

i would fefinitely like to see this scene in the show after atharv recovers or may be a flash back

your genre is romance and you excel in it

thks for giving such an amazing write-up
Edited by prabharajani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love you Mayu 🤗

I was eagerly waiting for you OS. I love to read your OS & they are always amazing & awesome . But this one is beautiful & fabulous. While reading i visualise all the scenes. You written everything so wonderfully. 👍🏼

But my favourite part is atharav giving surprise gift to her. It give me goosebumps when he unbuttoned his shirt & reminds me of scene when vividha pass in history exam & atharav looses bet with her

When vividha kisses his bare chest it again reminds me of ang laga dena sequence

Atharav vividha ka pyar barha tofha ❤️❤️❤️

Mayu you bring old jndsd charm again with this OS ❤️ ❤️


Edited by harmanjot - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayuuu dearie🤗 Lovely lovely OS as always!

I'll never get tired of saying 'ViTharv are magical'. They just take you into their beautiful world and there's no escape!

I so so so love you for remembering that photo Vividha threw out. Trust me, when I had watched it, it had hurt. And it never came up again in the show. Love you brining that little thing in here...Vividha framing it for him again and apologising was so cute and genuine.

I liked Atharv's idea of surprise😆 Way to go dude! And Vividha did enjoy his stripping the other day, her expressions screamed it out! And here you kinda spoke my mind..you know the day it had aired, I had this thought about him doing it for her alone instead of doing it in public😆 Bless you for fulfilling my wish, though Vividha didn't let much happen.

Their love, possessiveness and jealousy when it comes to each other is endearing. I love them so very much! Thank you for this superbbb OS...ViTharv's stolen moments of love are what I live for!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗

Sorry for replying late.The os is fab as usual.I loved it.I love your lighthearted ones just as I told you yesterday.

Vividha bringing him food.That was one of my favorite episodes of the show. She dressed up like a 70's girl and brought food for him.Even Atharv was surprised seeing her like that.It was for us to realise Vividha would do anything for Atharv.

Vividha is helping Atharv in his work.See that's the difference it makes.She would have lived her life as she wanted.The Vividha we see is merely existing.She has no hope,no wishes,no ambitions and no direction.

I loved the surprise, Mayu.Atharv doing the act just for Vividha.She is really very possessive and protective of Atharv and vice versa.I so love them.They're the only reason I am still watching this show.

I only remember Vividha threw some photo out of the window. Was it his childhood pic?I missed it.Oh and Vividha got it framed for him.I wish it was shown in the show as well.

Beautiful os.,Mayu.
Thanks to Soms for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Grade A OS mayu ... I let the scripts tell me what the dialogue are about... It was good... And you imagine them perfectly... Will think of a title and tell...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ultimatevikku7

Mayu...another great OS...👏

really loved it..😳


Zuhu🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Love,
Mayu

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