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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: saharsonu
Mayu love your OS as always 👏and asusual your OS was awesome fabulous😳 I so want these scenes may be in future we get these type of scenes.😕

Sonu🤗

Thankyou so much🤗

I had atleast wanted to see this before the separation. Now I want this as a FB😆

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nira_Mukherjee
Mayu my sweetheart... 🤗 What a lovely OS it is... ❤️

I just loved loved loved this idea of yours...Atharv's surprise. I was imagining the scenes while reading it. And the interesting thing is the other day Vividha did enjoy it when Atharv was doing it in front of everyone... 😆 I wish I could see this scene on my tv screen.

I always adore their love and possessiveness for each other. Their jealousy makes their love more cute and perfect. ViTharv's stolen moments are dreamy...

ViTharv for me, they define love, through their banters, jealousy, teasing and it just compels me to fall for them more and more.

Thank you so much Mayu for giving us this beautiful OS. It's so beautifully written by you. You described each and every expression of them so brilliantly.

Lots of love for you... 🤗 ❤️

Nira🤗 Awww my sweetie<3

I was thinking about this scene since the whole strip scene, it would be so wonderful to have these moments in private with the two of them enjoying. I so so love their possessiveness, their jealousy and their love is so pure! ❤️

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: prabharajani
beautiful OS mayuuu

love u

u know how to brighten my day

my all time favourite atharv and vividhas romance

atharv and vividha r both mad about each other and of course vividha likes atharvs surprises

what better surprise than he himself for her, atharv shirtless is the best gift for vividha , their private moments i always cherish

their beautiful moments are the USP of jaana na dil se door

atharv bringing her to the room, kissing herto the fullest, ur description says it all dear , its magical and they are magical

i would fefinitely like to see this scene in the show after atharv recovers or may be a flash back

your genre is romance and you excel in it

thks for giving such an amazing write-up

Prabha di🤗

Thankyou so much for the reply, albeit late😆

Yes, that's the beauty of them right? 😳 Their love, their possessiveness and their banter😳 Atharv exactly knows how to surprise her, doesn't he? 😆 But Vividha let anything happen na😆

Yes, I love romantic stories and love penning down and with a beautiful, soulful couple like ViTharv❤️

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: harmanjot
Love you Mayu 🤗

I was eagerly waiting for you OS. I love to read your OS & they are always amazing & awesome . But this one is beautiful & fabulous. While reading i visualise all the scenes. You written everything so wonderfully. 👍🏼

But my favourite part is atharav giving surprise gift to her. It give me goosebumps when he unbuttoned his shirt & reminds me of scene when vividha pass in history exam & atharav looses bet with her

When vividha kisses his bare chest it again reminds me of ang laga dena sequence

Atharav vividha ka pyar barha tofha ❤️❤️❤️

Mayu you bring old jndsd charm again with this OS ❤️ ❤️

Harmanjot🤗

Thankyou so much for your kind words😳

This scene had been playing since that very day. And I wanted to present it in my own very style. 😳

I miss this phase of the show, and I am glad that I could bring you the OLD JNDSD charm❤️

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: baubles
Mayuuu dearie🤗 Lovely lovely OS as always!

I'll never get tired of saying 'ViTharv are magical'. They just take you into their beautiful world and there's no escape!

I so so so love you for remembering that photo Vividha threw out. Trust me, when I had watched it, it had hurt. And it never came up again in the show. Love you brining that little thing in here...Vividha framing it for him again and apologising was so cute and genuine.

I liked Atharv's idea of surprise😆 Way to go dude! And Vividha did enjoy his stripping the other day, her expressions screamed it out! And here you kinda spoke my mind..you know the day it had aired, I had this thought about him doing it for her alone instead of doing it in public😆 Bless you for fulfilling my wish, though Vividha didn't let much happen.

Their love, possessiveness and jealousy when it comes to each other is endearing. I love them so very much! Thank you for this superbbb OS...ViTharv's stolen moments of love are what I live for!

Soumya🤗

Thankyou so much Hon😳 I always look forward to your lamba wala comments❤️

That episode was really heartbreaking when she slapped him and then threw out the photo frame😭 So I wanted her to apologise for the slaps too and give him back their memories😳

Isn't ViTharv love journey all about these little things? Their love, jealousy, understanding, their comfort level, their naughtiness and their playfulness? ❤️

This scene was playing in my head since the strip episode aired. I wanted to see Atharv doing an exclusive performance for her, and yeah Vividha let much happen but she got an idea what can this man do😆

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: NimJ
Mayu🤗

Sorry for replying late.The os is fab as usual.I loved it.I love your lighthearted ones just as I told you yesterday.

Vividha bringing him food.That was one of my favorite episodes of the show. She dressed up like a 70's girl and brought food for him.Even Atharv was surprised seeing her like that.It was for us to realise Vividha would do anything for Atharv.

Vividha is helping Atharv in his work.See that's the difference it makes.She would have lived her life as she wanted.The Vividha we see is merely existing.She has no hope,no wishes,no ambitions and no direction.

I loved the surprise, Mayu.Atharv doing the act just for Vividha.She is really very possessive and protective of Atharv and vice versa.I so love them.They're the only reason I am still watching this show.

I only remember Vividha threw some photo out of the window. Was it his childhood pic?I missed it.Oh and Vividha got it framed for him.I wish it was shown in the show as well.

Beautiful os.,Mayu.
Thanks to Soms for the pm

Nims baby🤗

Thankyou so much😳

That was one of the cutest scenes of ViTharv😳 The way Atharv was shocked seeing her in that get up. 😆 That and the reverse psychology scene after she fails in her exams. 😳 Can we get a cute scene again now that ViTharv are together in the show?

That's what I told Soumya too, their love is so pure and honest! Its just shows in everything they do. Its just amazing to watch their love story❤️

Vividha threw a photo, it was not childhood? Mujhe laga it was the childhood one😆 My bad then ")

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Africanqueenkel
Grade A OS mayu ... I let the scripts tell me what the dialogue are about... It was good... And you imagine them perfectly... Will think of a title and tell...

Kells🤗

Thankyou so much 😳

I am so sorry that I don't translate the dialogues in english because they lose their essence.

I needed a title, incase you find one, do let me know. 😳

Love,

Mayu

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Shweta13

@Shweta13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I am late to the party but Your OS is beautiful as usual❤️

@ Nim

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

This story is beautiful
Would've been nice to see this in the show
So creative you are: took a scene/pic from the show and showed its backstory
Lovely lovely read
Thanks
Hope to read loads more

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
This story is beautiful
Would've been nice to see this in the show
So creative you are: took a scene/pic from the show and showed its backstory
Lovely lovely read
Thanks
Hope to read loads more

Thankyou so much Pinky🤗

Would have loved to see Vividha's reaction in private.

Shall be penning down many more, for my own sanity too! Too ViTharv romance deprived😳

Love,

Mayu