Hey guys, I am new to the forum. I am Mayu. I am not new to IF though; many of you might know me from DMG, Geet and MEIEJ forums. I was super active in those forums and was an active OS/FF/SS writer. 😳
I am sure after watching today's episode and where the story is heading everyone is heartbroken So I hope this OS cheers up you❤️
This is a very different take on the characters and story. In my story, the current scenario is that Sujata has come home after surviving a mild heart attack. Atharva is visibly upset, but shows that he is normal in front of everyone. This is my take on a Vividha and Atharva conversation, in the famous bunk bed.😳
ViTharv OS- Hope
Vividha stood standing near the cattle shed, seeing him toss and turn in bed. She knew he was hurting inside; his heart was bleeding seeing his mother in this condition. Yesterday he was rock solid, in the hospital when he had to be. He hadn't crumbled, he hadn't fallen weak and he stood there in the hospital room, giving the much needed strength to her and his mother. These two women were the only ones who mattered.
She slowly climbed up the ladder and gently took his head in her crook. He was resistant at first, but slowly melted with her touch. She slowly took his entire being, his eyes were red and brimming, his body was shivering, and he was hurt beyond words. The incident had deeply impacted him, making him aware that death could strike at his door too. She gently pecked his lips, he surrendered to her love. She broke the kiss to see him faintly smile, acknowledging her presence around her.
Atharv: "Aapko yahan aana nahi chahiye, aapke papa ne dekh liya to problem hogi."
Vividha: "Aaj na mujhe mere papa ki fikar hai na kisi aur ki...fikar hai to bas tumhaari Atharv."
Atharv: "Aap jayiye yahan se...mujhe akela chod dijiye..."
Vividha: "Iss halat main? Iss halat main tumhe akela chod doon?"
Atharv: "Haan, yahi behtar hai..."
Vividha: "Yeh to nahin honewala hai. Tum bhi jaante ho aur main bhi, tumhe meri zaroorat hai...to kyun itna natak kar rahe ho..." she asked him threatening him.
He caved in and hugged her tight; he finally shed those tears he had held back from last night. He finally felt relived, relived that she was here and he didn't have to be strong in front of her. He could peacefully cry, and she would take care of him.
Vividha gently made him lie down on the bed and slid next to him. She gently patted his forehead, and looking into his eyes, she spoke, wiping his tears away.
Vividha: "Atharv, Sujata chachi ko kuch nahi hoga."
Atharv: "Sahi main na..."
Vividha: "Haan...sab theek hoga...main hoon na tumhaare saath"
He looked in her eyes, eyes which showed the love she had for, eyes which showed the warmth she had for him, the love shining through, as long as they were together, they would come out of this period of sadness.
She continuously kept patting his forehead, in between playing with his hair, relieving him of the tension and the stress that he had faced during the past two days.
Atharv: "Main maa ko nahi kho sakta..." he said, pain evident in his voice.
Vividha: "Nahi khona padega. Chachi ko kuch nahi hoga...it was a mild heart attack."
Atharv: "Haan, par doctor ne kaha, iske baad kuch heart problem hoga to bahut serious hoga"
Vividha: "Haan, par hum dono chachi ka khyaal rakhenge, tum tension mat lo."
Atharv was unsatisfied with her answer, he clasped her hand tightly. Vividha understood the turmoil he was going through. She gently bends down and kissed his forehead.
Vividha: "Atharv main jaanti hoon ki chachi tumhaari kamzori hai, par main to tumhaari takat hoon na..."
He smiled at her innocent reply. This lady only had the right to give him pain and then soothe away his pain. He was amazed as to how much she had come forward and had thrown her fears out of the window. He was amazed at how she had irrevocably fallen in love with him.
Atharv: "Kehte hai ki ladke rote nai hai...par mujhe koi sharam nahi hai aapke saamne rote huye..."
Vividha: "Main jaanti hoon tumhe, bahut dard chupaye hai tumne Atharv. Is dard ko bahar nikal do...main hoon na..."
Atharv: "Haan...nahi dekh sakta maa ko takleef main...aur aapko bhi..."
Vividha: "Aur main tumhe takleef main nahi dekh sakti. Kisne kaha ki ladke rote nahi hai...hum insaan hai Atharv, machine nai ki jiski koi emotions nai hoti. Aur mujhe to garv hai ki tum apni maa se kitna pyaar karte ho. Tumne unki takleef dekhi hai, unka dard saha hai, ab hum dono is takleef se ladhenge...I promise."
Atharv: "Main ab theek hoon, aap jao, warna aapke papa..."
Vividha: "Sshhh...papa aayenge to aane do...I am not leaving you all alone. Maine chachi ko sula diya hai...ab tumhe sulati hoon."
Atharv smiled gently. This girl could melt his heart literally.
Vividha: "Atharv, tum jaante ho main tumse pyaar kyun karti hoon...?"
Atharv: "Mere hot looks ke karan..."
Vividha: "Idiot! Main tumse pyaar bahut baad main karne lagi, main pehle se tumhaari izzat karti thi...jo ladka itni shidat se apni maa ko pyar karta hai, wo mujhse kitna pyar karega...samjhe...ki main tumse kyun pyaar karti hoon..."
He laid all his thoughts to rest, knowing she will be with him to take care of him, to wash away his pain, to soothe his pain and to ultimately comfort him in his times. She gently pulled over the blanket over him, and slept in his arms. Her fingers entwined with his, her one palm gently patting his chest.
Vividha: "Atharv main jaanti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari kamzori hai, par main chahti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari takat bane..."
She knew he heard this even in his sleep, as his lips gently touched her forehead. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.
As they had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of love, a relation of respect.
I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳
Positive criticism welcome!😃
Love,
Mayu
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