The heart wants what it wants..(NiVi FF)Cht 7 pg 23 - Page 11

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unreserved😛
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PART - 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jamai-raja/4575423/the-heart-wants-what-it-wants-nivi-ff-cht-7-pg-23?pn=15

PART - 2

They drove a long way and when they entered the city of beaches, it was around 4 pm. AD had told them, they got shoot with the sunset near the beach. Nivi was all up for a wonderful time with each other in Goa. Nia had promised herself to give the man she loves, all the happiness in the world. Ravi had thought, what come may, "I am gonna live my life here with Nia, and rest left to God". Nia screamed, "Come, let's Go Goa!!!!" Ravi replied, "Yah, Go Go, all r waiting for us". They joined the crew and got their costumes and blew a kiss in the air for each other and went to their respective green rooms.

Ravi came out first, wearing a Bermuda with Goa's famous orchids printed on it coupled with a white T-shirt, he was looking dashingly handsome any women would go weak on their knees, he so wanted to see what she is wearing and kept looking at her direction while talking to the AD about the next scene... AD explained, " You and Nia mam just walk to the shore and started enjoying the sunset holding each other and then playfully, drag her to the beach". Ravi, was overwhelmed to hear this and thought to have a nice time... When he looked at Nia's room, it magically opened.. his heart starts to beat fast... and he felt like he has seen some angel stylishly dressed in her Poreo, her hair flew sensuously in the air and she was staring at him too... they smiled, he so wanted to go lift her and kiss her then and there... but controlled. She came running to him and hugged him, he was like, "Oh, My Gosh, this girl is something... She knew exactly what I want", while thinking this itself, she hugged him and kissed him in his cheeks, he too reciprocated... "Hey, its so lovely here nah, I am like, in heaven, by the way, How am I looking??? You look dashing man...Ohhh" she astonished him every minute... The AD was so embarrassed and thought not to disturb them, he moved away slowly... Nia gave a look at him and then turned to see Ravi, who still looking at her lovingly, she gave a dash to his shoulder and brought him to reality... "You look amazing and this place is verrryyy gud"

" Come, we'll go join the crew but before that I really wanna do something, plz don't think bad of me..." he turned her face, his hands at the back of her head gripping her hair sensuously, she was shocked and shy too, she waited and looked around to check if anybody from the crew watching them, but No... they were busy setting things on the shore... Ravi just dragged her to the side of her room and went so close to her pink lips which was twitching and aching for his lips to meet... he knew it ... he gave a soft passionate kiss to her, she gripped his hair at the back and brought him near closing the distance. Their other hands were at their respective waists drawing patterns at their back...They lived every second... they lost themselves shouting eachother their love for the other. Their kiss turned wild and passionate, tongues reaching new heights when Nia pushed him for air and panted... Ravi looked at her wanting more, whereas Nia showed the crew searching for them...


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Edited by babithaj - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow so wonderfully written dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both the parts are so beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow such a fabulous part
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. amazing 2nd part😳😳 The kiss❤️ NiVi in Goa.. very beautifully written😳 U describes romance very beautifully write more stories na😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
@nishalholic, @ Nia _doll, @ tehreemsajid,@niadiva,@appu and dear Rose, Thanks a ton for all the nice words.
Who should I nominate as backup??? Should I PM Steph about this?
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Posted: 9 years ago
fab updates Babi 😳👏👏 u wrote it brilliantly 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG , NiVi kiss😆😳☺️

Aww I loved how they were both wanting the same thing , had the same feelings and gave into what they felt!😉

Although Ravi is supposedly cheating on shagun but still who cares😛

Loved the AD being embarrassed btw , wonder what would have happened to him had he seen the kiss , he would have needed a doctor🤣

Awesome updates yaar! Loved them!❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME update..loved it a lot😳❤️😳
NiVi kissed..☺️😳❤️😳☺️

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