SidNi 5S: It's Complicated Epilogue Pg 32 *Updated 20/12* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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chal starry isse pele tu ek aur baar behosh ho jald hi update karlena😆👏⭐️
starry 😳 update na it very interesting😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm proluge n love the idea..
N i knw U gonna rock again..
Egrly waiting for 1chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone. Oh i am sure you guys might have forgotten this!!😆 well that's good , coz i wrote something else only..so different from the prologue.I have really justified the title here and complicated it but if you guys like it I will make it a SS or if not then a TS!😊 And I am sorry for not replying to anyone's comments.


PART I

"Welcome the almost newly married but so in love couple Siddharth and Roshni."announced Rahul happily smiling at his friends and looked at Rithwik.

Rithwik saw both of them lost and went to the music console and switched it on. Ironically the most apt song played on it ,the song which defined their story now.

Paas aaye..

Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui

Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi

All asked them to dance together and at once they were pushed together. They both stared at each other ,their eyes told the pain they felt being so close yet so far.

Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi

Jaa mile.. jaa mile..

Ishq saccha wahi

Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Siddharth twirled her and she came back swirling on his chest. She stared at him longingly while he carefully tucked her hair back looking intently at her.

Rang thhe, noor tha

Jab kareeb tu tha

Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan

Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa

Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

At once he held her up in his arms and the past came in front of his eyes. The time they were together and happy ,how blissful their life had been and she remembered how he used to pamper her!

Hamari adhuri kahani..

Hamari adhuri kahani..

He pulled her down and tears were visible in the eyes of both. They had themselves complicated their lives ,they had lost in this battle of love. They had let the world win ,their egos win!

Roshni left his hand and went away hiding her tears from everyone. He followed her in concern ,he was worried for her! He saw her standing at the poolside.

He patted her shoulder and she at once swirled around. She looked breathtaking ,he couldn't take his eyes away from her but her swollen face made him guilty.

"Are you fine? I mean.." he started but she at once jerked his hand off. He was not shocked at her behaviour ,she always did this pushed him away.

"Don't!! Pehle give the pain and now you have come to give more?" she asked trying her best to control the anger that aroused in her because of this man.

"Shut up..If I had wronged you then so had you." he held her shoulders roughly and pushed her backwards. She was not one who would listen to him without a question.

"You behave with me. I don't consider you my husband and I never will." she pointed a finger at him ND the anger in him reached the peak hearing her say this.

"Since I am not your husband I can possibly do any damn thing with you so just back off before I lose my mind!" he warned her.

"Oh hello. I am not scared of you ,you bloody cassanova!" she pushed him back hitting on his chest and he at once caged her arms in his hold.

"Enough. Let's see what I can do." he said and threw her in the pool. She was shocked to the zenith! How dare he insult her.

She came closer to the edge and pulled his shoes making him fall too. Now they both were wet and suddenly concious and awkward as well.

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake

Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin

Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Suddenly they both started moving closer to each other and at once Roshni kept her head on his shoulder not being able to control herself anymore. He wrapped his arms around her and they both felt at peace.

Kitni chahat hai dil mein tu jaane na

Kaise dil ko samjhaaye dil maane na

How they both wanted the moment to freeze and to get together but their egos and conflicting nature didn't allow them to get back closer.

Meri tammanaao ka ehsaas tum

Main kahin bhi rahun mere aas-paas tum

Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..

He saw her dress which sticked to her body and he wanted to love her now. He leaned into her holding her face and she closed her eyes in acceptance. How she wanted to feel hid lips on her and call him all hers.

Ek pal bhi tumse door jaa na sake

Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake

Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Suddenly he jerked back to reality and left her face. She opened her eyes and his face made her remember the time he had proposed her and she couldn't have said no.

FLASHBACK

"What did you think haan?" he asked making her shocked at his behaviour. Shouldn't she be doing it?

"I will come, hold your hands like this and get down on one knee?" he asked doing all that he said and she couldn't believe this was happening. How could she say yes now?

"And will say Roshni Patel ,I really love you ,you are my breathe ,you are a gift I would cherish all my life ,you have changed my life. Will you marry me and make cute babies with me?" he asked completing his proposal making her awestruck.

"And what did you think I would say yes? I am laughing at the situation ,even after what all you did you think I'll accept your proposal?" she asked being sarcastic.

"What I did? Really it's what you did if you remember." he said trying to get up but she pushed him down and said "Wait."

"Yes." she said simply and he smirked seeing her speaking that. How dumb could she be? "I break up with you."

Her words left him wondering the reason she said them and he was stunned to say the least. She celebrated her sweet victory.

"So Mission Siddharth Khurrana accomplished finally!" she said clapping her hands but they are interrupted by a woman who was super happy and it reflected on her face.

"My Sid and Roshni are in love. Oh my god and he proposed you and you accepted na? That's such a nice surprise ,I am happy for both of you!" she said and they both stood up looking at the other to explain.

"No ma actually!" Siddharth started but the woman collapsed down on the ground. They both panicked and took her to the hospital at once.

After Sometime

"Bachon I am so happy you decided to marry. I don't have many days so after me please take care of the orphanage and before dying I want to see you both married." she said holding their hands and making them hold hands.

They both looked at each other hurt ,the thought of their ma leaving them shattered both! She had been like a mother to them ,she had got these two young small kids grow up into what they were. They couldn't refuse her!

They left the hospital room holding hands still and said together ,"I hate you!". Hatred was visible in their eyes ,unadulterated hatred for each other.

"But for her ,we have to do this." Roshni said and Siddharth nodded mutely. They left hands and turned way going in separate ways.

Their ways were different but the path to reach there was same. The destination named marriage awaited them.

PRESENT

That day resided in them and Siddharth could never forget why he was there to reject Roshni and Roshni never wanted to remind herself of what she had seen that day.

The misunderstanding between them was so big that they never sorted it out. It was a forced marriage , a marriage which they both wanted deep down but somehow circumstances made it forced!

It was their marriage anniversary. 1 year had passed they lived together but were never really together!

"I will go and change." Siddharth's voice broke Roshni's chain of thoughts. She realised they both were still in the pool and tears were rolling down her cheeks.

His face depicted he had cried too. They got out of the pool and walked on different ways but again towards the same destination.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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res ;)
unres

wow.. totally loved this one! i think first time reading a story of forced marriage on sidni 😆 i liked their conversations, and you made them fall in the pool 😳😆 the flashback was nice, so they were arguing on something? did she see him with some other girl?? 😉 whatever it is, continue the story! loved it. you wrote it down well! 😊

and not to say, im first again 😛
Edited by skinnypal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

res ;)

n yea i forgot this ! LOL



🤣even i did..pta nahi kya likha😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starsfireflies



🤣even i did..pta nahi kya likha😆


hehe.. i will read the prologue now n see what it was 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

res ;)

unres

wow.. totally loved this one! i think first time reading a story of forced marriage on sidni 😆 i liked their conversations, and you made them fall in the pool 😳😆 the flashback was nice, so they were arguing on something? did she see him with some other girl?? 😉 whatever it is, continue the story! loved it. you wrote it down well! 😊

and not to say, im first again 😛


hey thanks pal!! ya i know even i thought the same forced sidni marriage 1st time😉
glad u liked their convos😳 well maybe she saw him with some girl! you never know..
hehe wrote it in metro😆 oh and u are always first!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starsfireflies


hey thanks pal!! ya i know even i thought the same forced sidni marriage 1st time😉
glad u liked their convos😳 well maybe she saw him with some girl! you never know..
hehe wrote it in metro😆 oh and u are always first!


hehe good na, we will get to see something new 😉 wrote in metro? wow.. donno how you write in such short time! i take so much of time writing 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal


hehe good na, we will get to see something new 😉 wrote in metro? wow.. donno how you write in such short time! i take so much of time writing 😆😆


yay😉 i don't know when i start writing it keeps coming and no sooner it gets over!!😆 you write so nice coz of that only😳 pal what about your other ss??? (the one i loved)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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addicted? sorry aayu but i couldn't update that one! will continue it after my break! im cursing myself for starting it in the first place! 😆 and all wanted SOL update so i have been updating that one 😛

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