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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: skinnypal


today hopefully!! 😆

waiting waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello folks...
so updating in some time..
First of all this is the most anticipated update of my story and I am actually too embarrassed to even update it 😆 I have no clue whether i have gone way over board or under board with it, jo bhi hai abh kaam chala lo.. it has just eaten up my head! Most difficult thing that i have ever had to write!
So keep tuned!

P.S Have used an english song, and would love if you could actually hear the song too while reading! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

[Read the note above this post!!]

Part 34

Khurana Mansion

Siddharth had once again taken her up in his arms and says,

"If you guys are done with all these rituals, then can we skip to the one which involves only the couple?" he said playfully.

Simran pulls his ears hard forcing him to put Roshni down, and he gets a scolding from both his parents, on top of that he also received glares from his newly once again wedded wife.

"Kritika, why don't you take Roshni in the room?" said Simran.

Kritika and Roshni leaves, while Siddharth stands there helplessly.

"Raj ji.. please you only tell your son to behave himself!" scolded Simran and she leaves to do some work.

"Puttar..." started Raj.

"Please! Save your lecture!" retorted Siddharth.

"Arre main toh tips de raha tha..." teased Raj.

"Tips?" asked a confused Siddharth.

"Yeaa.. for tonight!" winked Raj and keeps his hand around Siddharth's shoulder.

"Chii.. Dad! I don't want to hear! Ughh.. leave me!!" he rescues himself and goes to his bedroom.

He enters his room and gets surprised seeing Roshni sitting on the bed with the veil over her head. He locks the room and comes slowly beside her,

"Kya baat hai, you are shying like a traditional newly wedded wife!" he said playfully.

She feels embarrassed and looks at the other side.

"Arre?? What is going on with you?" he continues and raises his hand to unveil her. But she immediately turns and picks up the glass of milk which was kept at the side table and hands out to him.

He looks at the glass and then at her, a bit confused that what was happening. She insists him to drink it; he takes the glass and then says,

"After getting married so many times, I think bura asar par gaya hai tumare upar.. but anyway.. if you want me to drink it then, anything for you baby..." he said mischievously.

He drinks the milk in one go, and keeps the glass aside. Suddenly his throat becomes dry and he feels a burning sensation in his mouth. At that moment he notices the legs of the girl sitting in front of him and he unveils her immediately,

"Kritikaaa!!" he screams as he gets up from the bed and searches for water frantically.

Kritika starts laughing uncontrollably and Roshni comes out from the washroom to join her.

"SURPRISSEEE!!" she shouts in between her laugh.

"Shit..Shittt...Mirchi...Paaani.. give me water!!" he yells and gulps down water from the jar. He keeps it at the table and shakes his head,

"I'm not gonna leave you two.." he warns them and runs to the washroom. Roshni takes the plate of sweets that she had kept for him; he was splashing his face with water,

"What are you doing? Yeh sab karne se kuch nahi hoga, here have this" she picks up a sweet and places it in front of his face.

He looks at that and then at her, who had very poor skills of hiding her smile. He pushes her hand away and wipes his face with the towel angrily.

"This was your surprise?" he asked angrily and goes to the cupboard to take out a shirt as his clothes were wet.

"Arre Sid, why are you getting angry on her? It was my plan!" Kritika tried to pacify him coz he really looked angry.

"She agreed right?" retorted Siddharth while taking out the shirt.

"Siddharth listen to me-" started Roshni.

"Roshni please! I did not expect this from you." he goes inside the washroom and keeps his shirt on the hook.

"Acha atleast have this sweet-" he gives a stern look to her and closes the door on her face. She rolls her eyes and turns to face Kritika who was staring at her with guilt,

"I'm sorry Roshni..meri wajah se.." murmured Kritika sadly.

"Arre.. don't worry.. I know how to manaofy him.. please don't apologize!" consoled Roshni.

Kritika leaves the room and Roshni locks the door. She bangs her head against the door and whispers,

"He is fuming with anger! What should I do now? I wanted him to be angry but this much.." she closes her eyes and thinks.

After sometime when Siddharth comes out from the washroom he gets surprised to see her and stays rooted at his place. She had changed her clothes and was wearing a black sleeveless night gown which flowed up to her knees. She was looking smoking hot and irresistible, but then he remembers that he was angry at her so he ignores her and goes to sit at the other side of the bed.

"The sweets are kept on the table if anyone still wants to have..." she said playfully sitting in front of the mirror.

He glances at the sweets and thinks to have it, coz his mouth was really burning with fire! But then he notices her smirk and he gets angrier on her.

"Umm... looks like no one wants to have it... main hi kha leti hu.. waise bhi its my wedding day and I am very happy I got married to the love of my life.." she teases further on and gets up to go to the table.

Siddharth double crosses her path and reaches the table before her, taking the sweets and having it finally. She controls her laughter and sits back.

"Siddharth.. Ouchh.." she shrieks softly.

"Kya hua?" he comes near her. She indicates to him that her hair had gotten stuck to the hook at the back of her dress.

[ Good For You - Selena Gomez - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1TsVjvEkc4s ]

I'm in my 14 carats, I'm 14 carat

Doing it up like Midas, mmm

Now you say I got a touch, so good, so good

Make you never wanna leave, so don't, so don't

At first he resists, but then she stared back at him with a pout so he helps unhooking the dress from her hair. He slowly removes her hair from the back and places it in front at one side of her shoulder. They look at each other through the mirror. She keeps her hands on top of his and he understands her intention. He rolls his eyes and gets off her hold; she stands up immediately and stops him.

Gonna wear that dress you like, skin-tight

Do my hair up real, real nice

And syncopate my skin to your heart beating

She takes his hand and keeps it around her waist, while biting her lips mischievously; she runs her fingers up his chest and pokes his nose. He glares at her; she grabs his collar and pulls him towards her. She closes her eyes as Siddharth traces his hands upwards from behind, removing the little space that they had in between them while sending a tickling sensation down her spine.

Cause I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

She stands up on her toes and kisses his cheeks gently, one by one. She rubs her nose against his, as he cups her face between his hands. He pecks her eyelids and then opens his eyes to admire her; he could see that she was anticipating a kiss. But he wanted to tease her further on, so he just leans towards her ears kissing it and then whispers, "I'm still angry, baby." Immediately he leaves his hold on her and walks towards the washroom casually with a grin on his face.

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

She opens her eyes and pouts angrily, while glaring at him. She unties her translucent robe, which she was wearing above her gown and makes it fall on the floor. She hurries towards Siddharth and closes the door behind her, blocking his way to escape any further.

I'm on my Marquise diamonds, I'm a Marquise diamond

Could even make that Tiffany jealous, mmm

You say I give it to you hard, so bad, so bad

Make you never wanna leave, I won't, I won't

Siddharth had toothbrush in his hand; she takes it and throws it up in the air. "Roshni, what are you-" he started but she cuts him off by keeping her fingers on his lips. She leans up to his ear and whispers, "Are you still mad?" He closes his eyes to breath in her scent; he couldn't deny that he loved this new Roshni. "Yeaa" he said inaudibly a little unsure himself. Roshni understood that he was getting weak in his defense; she further kisses his ears and bites on his earlobe.

Gonna wear that dress you like, skin-tight

Do my hair up real, real nice

And syncopate my skin to how you're breathing

Siddharth gasps in astonishment, and opens his eyes. He could no more resist and leans down to kiss her. Roshni looks at the tap behind him and before he could kiss her she turns it on. She pushes him under the shower and starts leaving but he pulls her back towards him and their bodies collide. She wraps her hands around him and they embrace each other. He kisses her shoulders as she brushes her nose against the side of his neck.

Cause I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

She runs down her finger to the buttons of his shirt. His hands were around her waist not wanting her to be apart from him anymore. She trails her kisses down his chest as she opened the buttons one by one. Siddharth closes the tap from one hand and spins her over to pin her back down at the wall.

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh

He raises her chin and seals his lips with hers fervently. His gentle kiss brewed a burning desire within her, and she deepens it further running her fingers on his hair while pulling him closer. His hands travel back up at her back and gets hold of the thing it was searching. He unhooks the dress and it slips down on the floor.

Trust me, I can take you there

Trust me, I can take you there

Trust me, I, trust me, I, trust me, I

As they break apart from the kiss, she drops his shirt on the ground. He bends down immediately and picks her up in his arms taking her towards the bed. They stare at each other as he walked not wanting to miss out a single second on admiring the beauty in front of them. She caresses his cheeks, and he leans towards her face tracing the tip of his nose on her face.

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Baby, let me be good to you, good to you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

He lays her gently on the bed, and removes the stray strands of hair gently which were on her face. He bends down to kiss her forehead, when Roshni pulls his ears, "So, are you still mad?" she said playfully. Siddharth keeps his hand on top of hers and says, "No more" He roars like a tiger and pounces on her kissing her face playfully making her ticklish. She laughs out loud and rolls him over on the bed.

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh

Uh-huh, uh-huh

Trust me, I, trust me, I, trust me, I

He raises his hand to touch her when she pins his hand on the bed and says in a low voice, "Your punishment for getting angry on me!" His jaws drop open and before he could say anything she leans forward to kiss his neck. She trails her kisses on his face and neck, while not allowing him to touch her. He had had enough of the torture, he over powers her and rolls again on the bed, getting tangled in the bed sheet along with her. "Your turn for the punishment, baby" he said huskily and captures her lips into his ardently. He trails down his kisses downwards to her navel, making her squirm with desire.

Later at night, they were lying on the ground on top of each other. Roshni kept her head on his shoulder, cuddling him; their faces were lightening with the smile that lingered on their face.

"Siddharth.." she whispers.

"Hmm.."

"I can't wait to spend the rest of my life with you.." she gets up looking at him excitedly.

He chuckles and replies, "Baby, you don't have to wait... we are spending..."

She smacks him on his chest, "You just have to ruin it!" she scolded with a pout. He laughs and pokes her nose making her blink,

"I love you."

She flushes at his genuine words and looks down, escaping from his intimidating stare.

He makes her look up by raising her chin and whispers,

"Arre? Abhi bohot sharam aa rahi hai tumhe... when you made us fall on the floor tab kya hua tha?" he teased. She shoots her eyes up and glares at him, hitting his chest with both her hands.

"Ouuch!!" he cries out.

"And thodi der pehle jab tum mere se bematlab ka gussa the tab kaha gaya tha tumhara pyaar?" she asks him.

"Ahh.." he takes her hands onto his and pulls her towards him more.

"Abh, if you give me punishments and surprises like these... then I can be angry on you forever ..." he says in a low voice.

"Really?" she raises her eyebrows.

He nods a yes and the next thing he knows is that she hits him again on his shoulders.

"Owww... what is wrong.." he yells looking at her in surprise.

Just at that moment she bends down and kisses the place where she had hit him. She looks up at him and winks while he grins at her. He moves over on top of her and whispers,

"I love you so so much!!"

"I love you too." she said with a smile.

Now i am officially running away 😆 I hope it did not disappoint you 😕

Part 35 (Last Part) -->

Edited by skinnypal - 9 years ago
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oh it didn't dissappoint infact it was totally perfect in my view😃
The way you described all was awesome seriously ,the song and the situations , shower aww😳
At start the eay raj said giving u tips lol😆😆
Raj has lost it..then Sid being tricked by kritika fab👏😆
Sid angry and Roshni offering sweets to him , Roshni manofying him and their intense love!! oohh Pal wow I never knew u cud write this so well😉
I want to ask you one thing , do you read Nicholas Sparks' novels?? The scene u described was totally like he does , pure and perfect😊 Not saying u copied it okk , I just loved it..take it as a compliment coz he is my fav romantic writer!😛
I really really saw his book in front of me while reading this..great job pal!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 9 years ago
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I am first in your most anticipated update😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

I am first in your most anticipated update😉


lol.. congrats 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me 2nd..😛
U knw pal, it was much awaited update for all SidNians..finally u written SR part on SidNi..😛😳❤️ Hehe raj ji wanna give tips to sid..🤣but poor ji his son don't need any tips especially on this matter...😉 Wow he was full on romantic mood but this krithika just spoiled it..😆oh it was roshni's SUPRISE na..😛 Sid's angry and she try to monofy him😳 poor boy how can he resist her for a long.. SR part😲😲😲 I never thought that u would write like this.. I was and now too totally blushing while reading this part..☺️☺️ Fabulous written..😛😛 Shower and floor part..hawww...😳❤️

P.s: now eagerly waiting for SOL..😭
Edited by sidni4ever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super duper update pal..😛
"You are the best Jamai that I could ever dream of having!"- was DD says like that??😲😲 Haha love their banters..😆Pheras part wow it was really different.. Loved how he says n each round " I love u" and n final she says " I love u more".❤️That sindhoor part was funny and pandit shocked reaction on seeing a couple like this🤪 "But come and live with you here na... become a ghar jamai again! Coz I can't live without you...Sasumom you will have no problem, right?" Huh Pal😲,how Cum u knw abt him well see now he became a ghar jamai again in the show..but anyways Superp dialogue👍🏼😆 and dd's reply🤣 ring part, entire family supports roshni.. really cute.. Overall i loved all SidDu part more in this chappy..😛😆 Its really hard to write for them but writer ji written very well..👏🤗

P.s: now eagerly waiting for SOL😳😛
Edited by sidni4ever - 9 years ago
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Aww...seriously pal..it didn't disappoint...I m amazed at u...how could u write..I mean. Hats off to u...for our expectations u worked ur whole writing skill to write this...it was awesome.. Don't worry..it was wonderful...loved .it...is this d last part?..or ...u r gng to continue..DAT kri sid scene was hilarious... Nd lobed sid dialogue...I m still angry baby .lol.😛😉

Edited by Abinaya12 - 9 years ago
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U, naughty pal..I read this part will cmnt later once i read part 33 too..😛😉
This part was😳☺️ now i no need to wry for sidni ESR2..😉

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