MISSION SIDNI SS (completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Fabulous dear
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
thank u all for giving so much love well i m quite optimistic when it comes to stories so u would not be weeping they would all be light- hearted.
and abt english translations uh i'll try for sure.
now coming to part 3 it will be posted tomorrow but something can be done if i get nice feedback today only😃 very greedy i m..
so till then keep guessing the impossible that is going to happen.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
it was a change to see roshni jealous.. 😆
continue soon.. and can u change the fonts little bit separating the character speaking and their dialogues for better reading.. coz i got confused while reading it 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
part 2 is amazing
jealous roshni 😉
give long updates na
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesome loved the second part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
part 2
loved it
please give bit long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
both the parts are super
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Part 2 is amazing... It's so awesome to see Roshni's jealous
And in our show we never saw Sam blushing😆...
Luved this update too... waiting for the next😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Translations are in brackets nd it is a short update again..if ppl are angry will update at night..😆

PART 3-A
Before sidni could go out simran and raj come in through the door..
Everyone is shocked to see them and especially simran coz she was crying.
Sid(concerned)- Mom kya hua hai y r u crying?
Roshni- haan ma kya hua? (yes ma what happened)
Simran starts crying more hearing roshni call her as ma...and just goes n hugs her..now everyone is more than shocked!
Sid turns to raj- kya hai dad kya hua mom ko?( dad whats the matter? what happened)
Raj- pta nahi sid tabse roye ja rahi hai..(dont know sid she has been crying all time)
Roshni(worried)- kya hua ma?
Simran(turning to sid)- sid wo jhooti hai..(sid she is a liar)
Sid- kaun mom?(who mom)
Simran(sobbing)- sid kritika teri behen nahi hai aur na hi meri beti..(sid kritika is not ur sister n neither my daughter)
now she sinks on floor crying out..sid hugs her n cries along!
DD- tum kyun ro rahe ho tumhe toh already rajveer ki sachai pehle se pta thi.(y r u crying u already knew rajveer's truth)
Sid stands up n replies- Rajveer ki sachai pta thi kritika ki nahi.( I knew rajveer's truth not kritika's)
I thought of her as my own sister..
Nani consoles simran- Dont worry beta everything will be fine..
Sid- But mom aapko pta kaise chala sab?(but mom how dis u get to know all this?)
Simran- woh aaj subah..(today morning..)
to be continued...
3(B) tomorrow!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

interesting you did the impossible and made Kritika not related to that family which was super cool I really am loving where things are headed...great job btw

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