TS: Habits (Part 2/2 Updated Pg 5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: shabz50

How did i miss this just read it nidhi and loved it nachikets POV.

Beautifully written how he notices the changes.

Wonderful writing

Originally posted by: neiralove

Oh Nidhi! Thank you SO SO SO much for this wonderful continuation! 🤗

But as he squeezed back the tension left her frame. It dawned on him that some wounds would need more than promises and phere to heal.
This is so true for them and you described it just perfectly--her possessiveness over him that she has waited for so long to assert and the way he lets her claim him in the subtlest of ways 😳

Sometime in the middle of the night he awoke to find her feet sandwiched between his once more, her perpetually icy skin seeking comfort and warmth.
As someone whose feet are always freezing...

Nidhi, once again, this was just phenomenal. The little details that you have Nachiket pick up on are so exquisite and so divine and it brings the whole story together perfectly. You are such a talented writer and I'm so happy that you wrote this, especially despite your busy work schedule! Thank you thank you thank you! ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Nidhi... I am back to re-read this POV once again...😆...Utna thoda sa feedback kaise enough hoga😆...

This update was so sweet, delicate and brilliant👏... Thank you for writing Nachi Baba's POV... It was amazing and very subtle...😳...A perfect flow of narration from N's point of view😳

My Favorite parts... 😃

he heard humming and found her in front of their mirror, putting on her earrings (the left one first, always) before dabbing on her perfume (her delicate wrists, the pulse point on her neck he knew all too well). His heart rejoiced at the clink and rustle of her bangles, the soothing sound filling a void that had been carved out during years of silent days and nights...

Sometime in the middle of the night he awoke to find her feet sandwiched between his once more, her perpetually icy skin seeking comfort and warmth...

And when she caught his eye, lips turning up into a smile, her countenance blossoming...

These lovely parts got me in a spot imagining RR & PKN nailing it with all their bountless talent ...Beautiful explanation of Neira's delicate yet infinite love😳... Totally exquisite👏

I am toh floored and totally speechless😳 ...This P.O.V is a total MASTERPIECE⭐️

Coming to the N/R of my filmy story Nidhi.. You and others will know soon what exactly happened to N/R in a couple of days...😉

Originally posted by: poetic

Nidhi,

Thanks a lot for writing this. A fitting second part - thanks a lot. 👍🏼

Now, coming to the piece, what do I say about this? This is like a fountain, overflowing with feelings, emotions and love - all in place.

What a lovely read about Nachiket's perspective! This part provides us with a much needed insight into the Man's mind and his heart ❤️

And of course, this is only for Ronit and Pallavi. I can't think of anybody else in this sequence They are LOVE

Originally posted by: loveleen3

I just want to find someone who would write something like this for me. This is extremely gorgeous, Nidhi. But I just loved this line-

Once when he heard her singing in the shower (she still couldn't carry a tune) he smiled.

Thank you so much for writing this part. This glimpse into Nachiket's thoughts is a comforting. Ragini is safe. <3 <3

Originally posted by: Santosh99

So Sorry i'm terribly late,😭

Wow Nidhi DI ... 😃Such along, beautiful, lovely, sweet, , hearty update...😊 Can anything be better then ths??? Oh god...am just so lost in them ..they are sooo perfect with each other!! Well i read it yesterday and it took my almost half an hour!! means an full episode like update it was!!! would commented yday itself...but couldn't... sorry... :-(...par seriously... its really amazing they didnt confessed yet... they made it prove that just confessing those 3 words are not imp...u have to feel the feelings deep inside.. :-) suprb imagination.👏

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

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Shikha, I am so especially happy that you liked this...❤️❤️

Thank you for your fantastic feedback once again...and my feet too are cold all the time 😆

Best of luck tomorrow...I am all ready to party afterwards! 🥳

Originally posted by: neiralove

I loved it! And how could I not, it was so gosh darn adorable! 😳

You're all set to party, huh? 😆 Now what exactly does that entail...? 😉