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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh wow! Chaitali, this is so good.
I had an intuition you had posted, and yes, here I am!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rachna di, shouldn't this be a fan fiction? Fo sho its not a short story haha. Btw I feel so bad I mean y'all are such dedicated NeiRa fans I didn't think of the show even once after it ended. Just came to see how's everyone going?
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Posted: 9 years ago
'Mom, wake up, wake up' Ranbir called as he shook Ragini awake. Ragini woke up with a start, she realised that she had fallen asleep with her head on the dining table, while waiting for Nachiket for breakfast.
Earlier, when she came into the living area, following her conversation with Dr Aman, she had been greeted with silence. Realising that Nachiket was still angry and upset with her, she welcomed the fact that he had gone down to meet the children. Their exuberance might change his mood and it would give her a perfect moment to talk. Really talk.

And now here she was, being woken up by her son.

'Nachiket?' she enquired.

Ranbir answered 'Its 9 am, Mom. Dad has already left for the Hospital, he has a surgery at 10'
He looked at her beseechingly.

'He asked me to give you a lift'

Ragini looked at her son, trying to understand the myriad feelings running through her, at that moment. She somehow controlled herself and said
'Thanks Beta. But you know what, you should go now. I will be a bit late.'

'But Mom ...' he started.

'Please ... ' Ragini's voice was now emotionless.

...

2 hrs later


Nachiket stood in his cabin, looking at the clock. His mind was in a turmoil. He squinted his eyes and ran his hand over the bridge of his nose, he was tired. And his heart was bleeding.

The surgery had gone fine and the lady would survive for sure. Dr Nachiket Khanna was a star cardiologist after all. Only that he faltered every time he desired to belong to that one person he loved the most. And true to age old saying, she was the one person he hurt the most. And in return, craved her even more, if that was even possible.

He paced inside his cabin for a while, he had case files to go through, but he couldn't concentrate. The image from the morning haunted him, he had left her dozing off on the dining table, in front of the breakfast that she had prepared for themselves, properly laid out. He had still been mad at her when he had returned upstairs later, he had had breakfast with the children downstairs. He had quickly gotten ready and left.

He stepped out of his cabin, a little later, he had to use the restroom. And then he saw her speaking to Dr Kumar, who had treated her earlier during the accident.

'Mrs Khanna, you need to take more care of yourself' Dr Kumar said, as he handed over a file to her.
'The fractures have healed nicely, but you are exerting yourself. I think you should go slow for a bit, and then pick up pace. Also I need you to take those calcium capsules everyday'

Ragini nodded obediently as they walked away to the other side of the corridor. She looked as beautiful and elegant as always, in a deep blue printed silk saree, Nachiket noticed.

The kiss from the morning invaded his mind and his lips tingled.

His eyes drank in her sight and then suddenly his heart lurched.

His eyes were now stuck on the dark blue hairpin that held her hair together, in a bun ...

... The first time since their marriage
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ragini sat alone in her cabin, going through the file that Dr Kumar had given to her. The file contained reports of some tests that she had undertaken last week. There was a slight niggling pain, almost like an irritation, in her leg where the fracture had happened earlier, and she thought best to get it checked.

She knew she needed to take rest, but she was needed here as well. The operations and reach of the Hospital were growing in leaps and bounds, and they had plans to introduce two new wings. She looked up from the file, her eyes now fixed on her eldest son, standing outside her cabin, speaking to another Doctor.

She smiled at him fondly, wondering how the kids have grown up all o a sudden, and how she has lost so much time being away from them.

She looked by her left side, there was Nachiket smiling at her from the framed photo. She wondered when she would see him smiling like that once again. The incident in the morning jolted her back to a rude reality - those 15 years had fundamentally changed them both as individuals, and romance wasn't going to guide them through.

The hurt still lingered on, in her mind and heart, and all she wanted was to hold him tight, and cry her heart out.

But she knew that was not what he wanted, crying was not the solution to the problem, but she was at a loss.

She looked outside once again and got up. Walking towards the door, she looked out, she could see Nachiket walking towards the staircase, speaking to two other Doctors.

She sighed!

Her whole world was around her, but it was still out of her grasp.

She turned around, she had to make a decision.
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Rachana thank u 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
She had to make a decision now,
She came to her seat again...
Sat in and lost in a deep thoughts...
She thought about her world
Her nachiket
"Is this distance is needed now"?
"Is there love is that much weak"?
"Is their ego is greater than their unconditional love"?
Ragini decided to solve everything
As she don't want to grow this distance more
Suddenly ragini opened the door of her cabin and went out
Nachiket to entering into her cabin ...
They clashed , their force really hurted them
Ragini just placed her hand on nachikets forehead
Nachiket reciprocated too...
"Is this Love?"
We are still caring for each other ?
Yes this is love!!
Their heart tried to cry out loud...
They didn't speak anything just stared in each others eyes ..
There is an answer for every questions ...
Yes this is love ...
U r my love ..
Raa...
Na...
They started to speak at a same time...
Then nachiket stopped ..
He is still angry on her
But the closeness between them made him yo forget about anything and everything except ragini...
His ragini ...
Ragini just staring him ...
Holded his wrist and pulled him inside her cabin ...
Nachiket ghar chalo... She said.
Ragini its time for lunch only...
Yes nachiket I knw
That chalo... Now this min we have to leave from here ...
She grabbed her bag in left ,
And his wrist in right
"Come nachiket we have to leave now "this time an extra pressure in her words leave now...

Nachiket didn't know what to do he just followed her instructions ...
Nachiket went to his cabin and got the keys ,, as ragini waited in parking area...
"Aaj sab bataadhungi , I will clear all this prlm by now" she talking to herself ...
While nachiket came and started the car...
Wear your seat belt ragini,
No nachiket its OK ,,
Ragini seat belt pehno...
Mujhe nahi chahiye nachiket...
"Raginiii" he uttered ...
As she freezed now
Nachiket went close and made her to wear the seat belt...
After a few seconds he felt a hottness in her breath ..
Then he realised how close he is to her...
The hottness of her breath drives him crazy..
But the morning scenario flashed in front of his eyes..
He don't want to hurt her again, in fact he don't want to hurt himself again..
He just want to return to his seat, while return he crossed touching a soft cheeks of his beloved wife,,
His heart just wanted to give a peck,,
His cheeks felt a sudden warmth, as the lips of his love pecked his cheek...
He is totally confused now,,,
What's going on ...

Is ragini really kissed me..
Or I imagined anything ...
He wanted to ask ragini , is she kissed him or not ...
But he didn't ask...

Ragini felt guilt for making her husband this kinnda mad...
The warmth of him is still inside her...
A tears rolled down in her cheeks...
At the same time a sound of weeping came from her right side...
She gave her kercheif to him...
But he is already wiping his tears with a tissue , and gave another to her...

"Ohhh nachiket tumhe to mere bina jeene ke aadat padgaya"
Itni aasani se merebina jeena seekhgaya...
Now she wanted to cry out loud...
But she can't infront of him...
Make it fast nachiket, its getting late
(In her mind, yes its getting late im not able to control my tears anymore nachiket)

They reached the flat,
Nachiket went to parking, ragini leaved from there, she went near lift but she can't wait even minutes,
She started to walk through the stairs ,,
She directly went to their flat,
Nqchiket reached the flat and saw the living room door is open,
Her bag is on floor,,,
He went near their room ...
She locked it from inside...
She weeped ..
She cried out loud...

I'm sorry nachiket ...
I'm sorry ...
I hurted you soo much ...
I'm sorry ...
Nachiket can clearly hear her...
Ragini ...
Ragini open the door...
Ragini pls
Rona band karo aur dharwazaa kholo ragini...

She came near the door ...
She heared the voice of him ...
Ragini pls...
Her heart melted
She sat near the door ...
He also sat another side of the door...
Nachiket she murmurmed...
Ragini he uttered...

He started to speak...
What is this ragini?
Yeh Sab kya hai...
I'm sry nachiket ...
Its all because of me...
I'm sry ...
No ragini nothing is happened .. Why u r hurting yourself...?
I knw nachiket I gave you pain only pain all these years ...
Youre always right I'm always wrong ...
and now , Abi bhi mai hi galat hun nachiket ...
I hurted you..
I hurted myself
I hurted us...
I'm sry nachiket
I'm sry for everything ...

Its OK ragini ... Its OK
You first open the door pls.. I'm dying out.. Pls open the door...
As she opened the door... She slipped in his arms...
She is still weeping ...
Her eyes are deep red...
She cried...

He took her in his arms ...
And made sit in bed...

He didn't spoke anything ...
She started ..
I'm sr...

He suddenly locked her lip...
He don't want to hear that sry anymore...
He knw that she is hurted herself so much
He just want to heal the pain...
He is the only medicine to her ,, he knows that very well...
He didn't do anything just placed his lips over her lip...
He just caressing her cheeks...
And wiping out the tears...

She slowly started to suck his upper lip...
Then he started to suck her lower lip...
They deepened this kiss...
Not a lust, but it is full of love...
He caressing her cheeks with one hand & the other hand is around her waist...
She massaging his scalp...
And another hand his around his neck...
The deep kiss ...
A healing of pain...
He kissed her with a passion...
He wanted this ..
Yeah, he really wanted this ...
Not only to make love..
But also to make her feeling love...

Their tongues didn't speak anything , but exchanged everything...
They kissed like this is their last kiss ...
Nachiket kissed her deep red eyes, her pink nose,
And just went near her eyes , and whispered "I want to make you feel love, make you feel my love"
She blushed ...
She whispered im sry nach...
Again He suddenly closed her mouth this time it is very wild...
She knw he will definitely do this ...
That's y she said sry again ...
He kissed her forehead , ears, eyes, cheeks, chins , he went till the blouse v-neck...
He teased her ..
She knw that he is seducing her..
It is his fav game in making love...
He left a love marks in her neck... Shoulder... Even in her waist,,
He is roaming through her body...
He didn't do anything except seducing...
She didnt do anything except enjoying...
Her nail marks in his chest ...
Oouchhh it's really painful, but he took a revenge by biting her navel too...
She lost in her thoughts as she is lost in an enjoyment...

A sudden pat in her shoulder ..
Ragini ! Ragini ! Kahan khogayi...
Im standing here for more than 15 minutes ...
Her world again came into the darkness...
The love of her life is right next to her, but with full of disappointment and misunderstanding ...

Take this your vitamin & calcium capsules
Dr. Kumar said to give you...
Nachiket left after giving it...

This is medicines are not enough to heal my pain nachiket...
I want you...
You are the one ...
You are the only one ...
Who can heal my pain...
The tears started rolling down from her cheek...


Definitely , she had to made a decision now...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww ArSha love u yaar its awesome part dear 👏 but not fair all of them was just dream 😭 now i want some one continue but pls let them talk to eachother and make love also hott one 😳😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u zohal...its glad u liked this part...
Yeah I'm also waiting anyone to continue this... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok, the story took a different turn 😆
Have to re-think

Thanks Arsha 😊
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Ok, the story took a different turn 😆

Have to re-think

Thanks Arsha 😊


This was a dream sequence you can still write what you thought

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