SS New Life Part 11&Last Part PG 16,17 - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

157

Views

22.6k

Users

14

Likes

203

Frequent Posters

shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Shabz,
This is amazing! Ragini passing the driving test, small family moments, Nachiket deciding to go for a holiday.. All this makes me so happy! This story is full of warmth. Thank you for writing this. :D
I wonder what Nachiket thought would be in the paper.. :)


Thank you for reading and liking and yes they are getting away just them two. U will see in the next update what he thought 😉
sushmaArshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I m loving this story .Feel like keep on reading this... N I know what Nachiket thought would be in the paper 😉
Shabz plz post next update ASAP...
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi

I m loving this story .Feel like keep on reading this... N I know what Nachiket thought would be in the paper 😉
Shabz plz post next update ASAP...


Thank you for reading and liking u will find out soon if u were right😉

Next update will be soon
neiralove thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Shabz, wonderful updates once again! I really liked how Ragini shared her fears with her mother and how Nachiket immediately made her feel better 😳 And Ragini passed her driving test! 🥳
Now I'm eager to know what Nachiket thought was on that paper 😉 Let us know soon! 😃
ShyNomad thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic Shabz!! I loved all the small but important moments...Nachiket playing video games with the kids, their conversation in the car, Ragini passing her driving test (and surprising him with the good news), even Nachiket's conversation with Aarav.
I am so looking forward to their alone time...thanks for this Shabz :)
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove

Shabz, wonderful updates once again! I really liked how Ragini shared her fears with her mother and how Nachiket immediately made her feel better 😳 And Ragini passed her driving test! 🥳

Now I'm eager to know what Nachiket thought was on that paper 😉 Let us know soon! 😃


Thank for reading and liking you will find out tomz what he thought
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Fantastic Shabz!! I loved all the small but important moments...Nachiket playing video games with the kids, their conversation in the car, Ragini passing her driving test (and surprising him with the good news), even Nachiket's conversation with Aarav.

I am so looking forward to their alone time...thanks for this Shabz :)


Thank you for liking and reading and yes they are going away very soon
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 9
"like what" "like that paper you gave me when you were expecting aagham and aarav" she punched his arm "nachiket what you like" "well whats wrong with that" "we have 5 grown up children no more" "but" he moved closer "no more" he smiled ok "no more but you better pack your morning after pill then cause i am taking you away for a few days" "when" "tomorrow" she smiled "is this you making up for them three weeks" he kissed her "yes" "good" he smiled.

Saturday Morning 8am
Nachiket had already gone out no one knew where had gone or when he would be back.

Kitchen
Ragini came in the kids were having breakfast and talking about what they were doing today. "Ragini do you know where nachiket has gone" "no idea" ranbir and suhanni smiled at each other "you two know where has he gone" "no idea" ranbir said. It was ten when nachiket came back "dad its sorted" ranbir asked "yes sorted" "yay" suhanni hugged him ragini and pam looked at them puzzled. He walked upto ragini he held her hand "close your eyes" "nachiket" "do you trust me" "yes" close your eyes and no opening them till i tell you ok" she closed her eyes and he led her out the kids and pam followed them out.

Outside
Ragini stand here "can i open my eyes" "not yet" she heard pam say "wow" she was getting restless "nachiket" he went upto her and said give me your hand he took her hand and put something in it. "Open your eyes" she opened her eyes and what she saw she was shocked she looked at her hand it had a set of car keys in it and in front of her there was a beautiful brand new top of the range Sky Blue BMW with a ribbon wrapped around it in front of her. "Nachiket this" "its yours" she had tears in her eyes "mum come on lets look at it inside please" she still could not believe he had got her a brand new car and in her favourite colour. She went and sat in the drivers seat. Pam went up to nachiket "you did good" "thank you" the kids and ragini spent a good hour looking at everything the car had.

Bedroom
Nachiket was just putting some last min things into the bags when ragini walked in and shut the door. "Ragini are these the only bags" he looked up at her he walked upto her she hugged him "thank you soo much i love it" he broke the hug and smiled "good" "is this part of you making up to me" "no this is me being proud of you" she smiled at him "can we go now" they said bye to the kids and pam.

Car
Nachiket put the bags in the car and went towards the passengers side. "What you doing nachiket" "getting in the car" "who is driving" "you" "no" he sat in the car "yes your car you drive" "no its brand new and i don't know the way please" he stared at her "please nachiket" "fine i will drive" he was driving she was looking out of the window "what you thinking" she looked at him "just about the last few months how everything has changed" "good or bad" "very good" he smiled she took his hand and stroked it "i got you back and our family" he smiled and kissed her hand.

Hamptons
He parked up in front of a beautiful house. Ragini got out and "its beautiful" he got the bags and they went in. Ragini went to look around nachiket put the bags in the bedroom.

Living room
Ragini came in "you like" "its beautiful its yours" "no its ours" she smiled "sorry" he went upto her and put his arms around her waist "so what do you want to do" she had her hands on his chest "anything" he smiled "well" "we could go out see the hamptons" "we could or we could stay here" she smiled "talking of that did you see the doctors" "yes i went with pam" "and" "he gave me some pills for next time" "you are ok now" she kissed his cheek "i am fine honestly"

Evening
Ragini and nachiket had spent a lovely day together just the two of them they had done some shopping and just spent time together.

Kitchen
Ragini was making dinner nachiket had wanted to go out for dinner but she had inisited on making dinner. He walked into the kitchen "do you need help" "no thank you its nearly ready" "you know i brought you out here so you could rest and relax" "this is relaxing for me" they sat down to have dinner.

neiralove thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Aha! So my guess was right about the paper! 😳 Nachiket's expectations 😆

A new car! So thoughtful of him! 😃

I'm sure they're all set now for their making up sessions 😉 Thanks for writing this heartwarming story Shabz!
Edited by neiralove - 9 years ago
shabz50 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove

Aha! So my guess was right about the paper! 😳 Nachiket's expectations 😆


A new car! So thoughtful of him! 😃

I'm sure they're all set now for their making up sessions 😉 Thanks for writing this heartwarming story Shabz!



Thank you for liking and reading and yes naughty nachiket and yes the next updates will have warnings on

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".