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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7

"so you not going to listen to me" "not this time please let me do this for you please then i can say atleast i did something to help you" "you are with me thats all i need" he hugged her and kissed her "please look after yourself ragini"

The three days passed slowly for all. Ragini kept the fast for three days she knew nachiket was not happy about it but she was doing it for him. Finally the day arrived when nachiket would find out the inspectors verdict did they hold his hospital responsible or not.

Evening
Pam,Ragini and the kids were waiting for nachiket and ranbir to come home suhanni had come home but she had no news. They had been waiting a while when nachiket and ranbir came home.

Living Room 7pm
Pam and ragini were sat on the sofa with the kids when nachiket and ranbir came home. They all got up and looked at them "well nachiket what did they say" pam asked he did not say anything "ranbir what did they say" neither of them said anything ragini looked at pam when there was a knock on the door nachiket opened it and took a box off a man. He then walked towards ragini and made her sit down "nachiket what did they say" he opened the box and took out a rasgulla and looked at ragini "you can break your fast" he smiled at her and fed her the rasgulla ranbir smiled pam hit nachiket you could have told us "ouch that hurt pam" "good we were worried sick and you two think its funny" ragini smiled "right everyone get ready we are going out for dinner to celebrate" everyone went to get ready.

Bedroom
Ragini was getting ready he came and put his arms around her waist she leaned back into him he kissed her neck "i have a lot of making up to do" "yes you do" he smiled he kissed her again. She turned to face him "but at the moment our family is waiting to go to dinner and i am hungry lets go" he was just looking at her she touched his face "nachiket you ok" "yes lets go" they went out to celebrate the pressure was off nachiket he could finally relax.

Late Evening
They were back from the dinner everyone had a great time they were just happy to see nachiket relax and smile.

Bedroom
Ragini got changed and was in bed and he came to bed "are you working tomorrow" "yes i am" he leaned over her "ring in sick" he kissed her she smiled its only one day then we have the weekend. "Take some hoildays" "why" "because i have a lot of making up do" she smiled at him. "I can't in the next two weeks but after that" "why" "i have a few important thing lined up then i am free" "then only me and you" "what about the kids" "we need time away from them" "nachiket" he smiled at her and kissed her she pulled him closer he moved down to her neck and then the crook of her neck he was about to move back to her lips when they heard a crash outside. He broke the kiss and looked at her he then got up and grabbed his t-shirt and put it on and went out of the room and ragini followed.

Living Room
Aarav was laid out in the sofa and ranbir stood over him there was a broken lamp on the floor. "Ranbir whats going on" "he is drunk dad one of his friends rung me to pick him up" "he was in his room" "he sneaked out" "put him to bed ranbir i will deal with tomorrow" "ok dad" "ranbir i will help you" "its ok mum i will manage"

Bedroom
Ragini was back in the room nachiket came in he shut the door and went upto ragini she was crying he hugged her "ragini please stop i hate you crying" "all i have given you since coming is stress and hurt" he broke the hug "ragini what" "if i had given aarav a good upbringing he would not be like this" "this is not your fault ok this is aarav and i will sort it" he hugged her and promised her that he would bring the happniess back to their family that had been lost in the last few weeks.

Morning
They were all sat having breakfast when aarav walked in and sat down he did not make eye contact with anyone. Aagham got up to go to college "aagham wait let aarav finish his breakfast and you can go together" "i am not going today dad i am not well" "thats happens when you get drunk" aarav looked at his dad then his mum "no dad i was"
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Yay Shabz! So glad things went well at the hospital for Nachiket, his way of telling Ragini was so sweet (pun intended)...
That Aarav is just trouble, even after everything Ragini did to raise him and provide for him 😒
I am looking forward to them getting away soon, just the two of them. They need some alone time 😳
As always loved this, please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Yay Shabz! So glad things went well at the hospital for Nachiket, his way of telling Ragini was so sweet (pun intended)...

That Aarav is just trouble, even after everything Ragini did to raise him and provide for him 😒
I am looking forward to them getting away soon, just the two of them. They need some alone time 😳
As always loved this, please update soon!


Thank you for liking and reading and yes they need to get away and have some alone time😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Hi, Shabz u r going great with the story. I am really sorry as I was not able to give my feedback before because of somethings, but now I am her ;D

So thank God everything is ok at Neil's hospital. :)

Aarav is seriously the most unwanted member of Khanna Family :D :D
Lets see what happens next. :)

U r doing great Shabz and I really like reading your stories :)
Please update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Hi, Shabz u r going great with the story. I am really sorry as I was not able to give my feedback before because of somethings, but now I am her ;D

So thank God everything is ok at Neil's hospital. :)

Aarav is seriously the most unwanted member of Khanna Family :D :D
Lets see what happens next. :)

U r doing great Shabz and I really like reading your stories :)
Please update soon :)



Thank for liking and reading and aarav causing them stress but neira will get away soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm so sorry I'm late dear! I read this in the morning but didn't get a chance to comment until now.

I really liked the way Nachiket broke Ragini's fast, telling her that everything was resolved at the hospital. 😊 Ugh Aarav! 😡 Problem child is too light of a phrase for him; he is just a good-for-nothing oaf! I hope Nachiket and Ragini will be able to get their alone time away from him and the rest of the family soon--they both deserve it! 😳

Thanks for another lovely update! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove

I'm so sorry I'm late dear! I read this in the morning but didn't get a chance to comment until now.

I really liked the way Nachiket broke Ragini's fast, telling her that everything was resolved at the hospital. 😊 Ugh Aarav! 😡 Problem child is too light of a phrase for him; he is just a good-for-nothing oaf! I hope Nachiket and Ragini will be able to get their alone time away from him and the rest of the family soon--they both deserve it! 😳

Thanks for another lovely update! 😊


Thank you reading and liking and nachiket will sort aarav and they will get away soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8
"i saw you aarav last night" "dad that was" nachiket put his hand up " i don't want to hear anything now go to college we will talk in the evening" he finished his breakfast and went to college.

Bedroom
"Ragini are you ready" nachiket said he went to the room she did not notice him come in she was on the phone to her mum he quietly shut the door and stood there. "Maa i am fine yes everything is ok at the hospital we found out yesterday it was such a big day for him and aarav ruined it he came home drunk maa did i do the right thing coming to the USA all i brought him is stress and worry no i am fine mum just thinking i will ring you later" she hung up and got up and turned and he was stood there "nachiket how long have you been stood there" "long enough" he walked upto her "you regret coming to the USA marrying me?" "No i don't" "thats what i heard" "no nachiket i didn't mean it like that honest" he looked at his watch "you are getting late for work i will drop you off" she grabbed his arm "nachiket" "tonight" he dropped her off at work.

Evening
Nachiket picked ragini up "how was work" "it was ok only next week to work then i have two weeks off you can do your making up then" she smiled at him "if you still want me to" "nachiket i do" he looked at her he stopped the car and turned to face her "then why did you say that to maa are you not happy here or with me" "i am happy here and with you nachiket its just this last month i felt useless i could not help you take away your stress or our familys stress" he grabbed her hand "ragini you kept everything together this last month the family the house you looked after everyone how can you say you did nothing and you are my biggest stress buster" "how" "i just have to hold you in my arms and my stress is gone" she laughed "its true" his phone rang it was ranbir "hi ranbir yes ur mum is here" he put the phone on speaker "we are ordering food what do you and mum want" "no one is ordering food i will make dinner when i get home" "but mum" "no we have had enough takeouts these last few days" "ranbir wait till we get home"

Home
Nachiket and ragini arrived home the kids were sat looking at menu's "you can put them away i am making dinner" "but mum you are tired we will just order" "i am fine aagham" aagham and suhanni surrounded their mum "i said no" "please mum please" nachiket was stood with pam "how long before she says yes" pam smiled "5 mins" nachiket smiled "no 2 mins" they both laughed "where is aarav" "in his room" the kids were still trying to get ragini to agree when ranbir spoke "mum please only today promise" ragini looked at him "ok only today" nachiket and pam smiled they knew ragini could not say no to the kids. "Aagham let ranbir order you go get aarav" "ok dad" nachiket sat down aagham and aarav came "aarav come sit here" "yes dad" "why are you in your room when everyone is out here" he did not answer "aarav whats going on are you not happy here or what you fighting with everyone getting drunk" "no dad its just" "just what" "i want you to be proud of me like you are of ranbir,aagham and suhanni" "i am proud of you" "i don't want to go back to college i want to work and earn money" "you will have plenty of time to do that but before that you need to finish your studies cause no one can ever take your edcuation off you ever" aarav looked at his dad and nodded "and if you want get a part time job" "ok dad" "but one thing i will always support you but if you ever disrespect your mum or pam like you did yesterday there will trouble and that goes for all of you" he said looking at his kids aarav got up and walked towards pam "i am sorry pam" "its ok beta" he then went to his mum "i am sorry i hurt you mum" "its ok aarav" she hugged him. The food came they had the food and nachiket was playing with the kids on the PS2 "mum mum" aagham shouted ragini came in from the kitchen "whats wrong" "tell dad to stop cheating" "nachiket let the kids play why are you playing" "i am showing them how to play properly" "leave them ragini they always do when the play" pam said.


Edited by shabz50 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8B
Bedroom 11.30pm
Ragini was already in bed when nachiket came in "who won" "i did of course" ragini smiled. He went into the bathroom to change. He came back and got into bed she was laying on her back he leaned over her and put his left hand on her stomach and with his right he stroked her hair he was just looking at her. "Nachiket you know i am happy with you right" "yes i know" he was still just staring at her not saying anything. "What are you doing nachiket" "looking at my beautiful wife which i have not be able to do properly these last few weeks" "i am not that beautiful" "yes you are" he kissed her and moved to kiss her on her neck "nachiket" "hmm" "not tonight please" he broke the kiss and looked at her "ok" he went to move away she grabbed his arm "nachiket" "its ok ragini" she hugged him and while hugging him "i want to but" he broke the hug "whats wrong ragini" she hugged him and whispered in his ear he held her tightly "how long" "a few days" he broke the hug "have you taken anything for the pain" "yes" he stroked her face "its ok" he kissed her "go to sleep i am here if you need anything" she cuddled upto him he held her tightly and she fell asleep.

3.30am
Nachiket woke up ragini was not there he looked at the time and then saw her come out of the bathroom. She sat down with her back to him she didn't know he was awake. He rubbed her back "are you ok" "i didn't mean to wake you" "its ok" he took her in his arms and kissed the top of head "do you need anything" "no i am feeling better" "good" they fell asleep.

The next few days ragini was better and she only had a few more days to work and she had her driving test booked for friday only pam knew about her test.

Friday Morning
She was getting ready she was nervous he came in "ragini do you need a lift to work" she did not answer she was stood staring at the mirror he walked upto her and tapped her shoulder "where are you lost" "nowhere did you need anything" "i asked do you want a lift" "no ranbir will drop me" she went to walk out when he grabbed her "you ok" "i am fine nachiket" she was gone.

Kitchen
Nachiket was sat having coffee with pam the kids had gone to college and work and ragini had also left for work. "Pam i need a favour" "whats that" "i want to take ragini away for a few days just me and her" "finally" "what do you mean" "i have been waiting for you to ask for last two weeks ever since the inspectors left what took you so long" "well ragini was working thats why" "don't worry i will look after the kids" "thanks pam"

Friday Afternoon
Pam came to pick ragini up to take her to her test "no need to be nervous you will be fine" "thanks pam" pam waited will ragini took her test finally after a hour she drove back into the test centre. Pam was stood waiting when ragini came she had been crying "well ragini" "i passed" pam hugged her "thats great time to celebrate" they both laughed.

Home
Nachiket was home with the kids when ranbir came in "hi" "hi i thought you were picking your mum up" "no she said she had somewhere to go with pam" "oh right ok" "dad u want another game i will beat you this time" "you just like losing aagham come on" nachiket was playing video games with aagham and aarav and ranbir,suhanni were just on their phones. Pam and ragini came in "hi mum,pam" nachiket looked up. "Listen your mum has something to tell you" pam said "one minute pam just let me beat dad" pam went and switched the game off "pam" listen to your mum. Nachiket got up "whats going on" "pam will tell you" "ragini tell them" "tell me ragini whats going on" she gave him a piece of paper he read it he smiled "serious when today" "yes" "what is it dad" ranbir asked "your mum passed her driving" the kids got up and hugged her nachiket stood there smiling after the kids had finished hugging her he hugged her "well done i am proud of you" she smiled "thank you".

Bedroom
Ragini was just finishing talking to her mum when nachiket came in. "I bet maa is happy" "yes she is" "good" he sat down next to her "you know when you gave me that paper i thought it was something else"
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shabz,
This is amazing! Ragini passing the driving test, small family moments, Nachiket deciding to go for a holiday.. All this makes me so happy! This story is full of warmth. Thank you for writing this. :D
I wonder what Nachiket thought would be in the paper.. :)

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