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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: imagine43

Very nicely written, a perfect description of their new life, can totally picture Neil and Ragini in this story. Diving lessons we very nicely portrayed, it brought out the respect N had for is wife R.

I was a little sad, when N did not discuss with R his problems,


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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Read all part in one go
Awesome written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sampa79

Read all part in one go

Awesome written



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6 A
Morning 7am
Ragini woke up and looked to her side he was not in bed had he already gone to work she thought. She did not hear him come to bed last night. She got up and got dressed and went into the kitchen.

Kitchen
Pam was already there "morning pam" "morning ragini" "has nachiket left for work already pam" "no he did not come home last night" "what are you serious pam" "yes he just rung to tell ranbir to bring him a change of clothes to the hospital" ranbir walked in he looked tired. "Ranbir you look tired go back to bed" "no mum i have to take dad his clothes and some files and he said to make sure i dropped you off" "sit down i will make you breakfast" she turned her back nachiket was so stressed but he was still thinking about her she sighed and started making breakfast. Aarav and Aagham had breakfast and pam was dropping them off on her way. Suhanni was off today.

Bedroom 8.30am
Ragini had got nachikets suit out for ranbir to take and was just getting ready when her phone rang she answered "morning beautiful" "morning nachiket" "ragini you getting ready" "nachiket you sound so tired please come home and rest" "i will ragini" "nachiket please" "ragini i will make sure ranbir drops you off at work i love you" "i love you too nachiket" he hung up ragini sat there he sounded so tired "mum are you ready" she wiped her tears "yes ranbir take this suit and i am coming"

Evening 6pm
Ragini was getting ready to leave when her phone rang "hi" "hi mum are you on your way home" "yes aagham i am why is there anything wrong" "no just checking see you soon" "see you soon" she smiled aagham was the closest to her from all her children. She got her bag and went down the stairs she stopped half way down he was sat on the chairs waiting. She quickly went down the stairs. "Nachiket" he looked up "hi beautiful" he got up and hugged her she broke the hug "nachiket what you doing here" "i came to pick you up" "you should have gone home you need your rest" "i needed to see you" she hugged him.

Car
Nachiket was driving "nachiket what is going on at the hospital" "i will tell you ragini but not tonight i just want to forget about it tonight" he changed the gear and took her hand in his. Ragini looked at her nachiket she had never seen him like this.

Home 7pm
Ragini and Nachiket walked in together the kids were sat with pam "good you are home we can order food now" "why we ordering food aagham i will make dinner" "no mum we are celebrating tonight" "what are we celebrating" "i have got a job" "what" ragini and nachiket looked at each other "yes i am working at the biggest law firm in new york" "doing what" a intern first then hopefully a paralegal in the summer" ragini hugged him "i am so proud of you" nachiket hugged him "proud of you beta" "so aagham is paying for dinner" ranbir said "no dad is paying" nachiket said order the food i will just freshen up. He came back "dad what do you want" suhanni asked "whats your mum having" "a pizza" "fine make it a large one and i will share with her" "ok" they were sat waiting for the food when ranbir's phone rang he got up and answered it. He came back "dad they want to speak to you" "seriously i only left one hour ago" "they said its urgent" he got the phone and went into the other room when suddenly they heard a crash and something breaking pam and ragini got up and ran so did ranbir they told the others to stay.

Room
Nachiket was stood in front of the tv he had just broken "nachiket are you ok" ragini asked pam and ranbir just stood there "dad whats wrong" nachiket did not say anything. Pam signaled for ranbir to come out "but pam" "your mum will handle it". Ragini walked upto him and grabbed his arm "nachiket whats wrong please tell me" "i am going to lose everything cause of that dr stevens the medical council are sending inspectors in three weeks" "why" "cause two patients are saying he was drunk when he treated them" "but you did nothing wrong" "still i own the hospital so my responsibilty" "so the whole hospital will get punished" "yes because they think we let it happen"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6B

"but you did nothing wrong and they will not find anything you have to stay positive" he turned to face her "i just wanted one night where i did not think about this" "you still can the kids are waiting and you will not lose everything u still have me and our family" "i didn't mean it like that i meant" "i know what you meant now come on the kids are waiting and i am hungry" "you go i will be a minute just have to make a phone call"

Living Room
Ragini came into the room pam and ranbir looked at her "is he ok" pam asked "yes just stressed" "mum is dad ok" suhanni asked "he is fine he is just finishing a phone call" nachiket came in and sat down pam looked at him he nodded at her she smiled back. "Aagham where is this food i am starving" "they said 10 min more minutes dad" ragini got up "i will just get the plates and glasses pam can you help" ragini walked into the kitchen with pam and told her what had happened she was crying "pam i can't see him like this" "ragini you have to be strong for him things will be ok" they went back in the food had arrived everyone sat down to have food "whats this Aagham" nachiket asked "your's and mums pizza" "but its veggie" "i wanted veggie" ragini said "i guess i will have to eat veggie then" they had their food and kids were playing on the video games with nachiket when ragini came back in "kids bedtime its late" "its only 10.30 mum" aaarav said "you have college and your dad has work tomorrow so bed" they got up and went to bed.

Bedroom
Ragini had changed and was in bed when nachiket walked in he grabbed his jogging pants cause thats all he wore to bed. He got into bed ragini was reading a book he took the book away from her and put on the bedside table "i was reading that nachiket" he pulled her into his arms "and" he kissed her on the top of her head she moved closer to him she had her hand on his chest "i am sorry ragini" "what for" "the next three weeks" she looked at him "i will be working long hours and will not see you properly and the kids" "its ok because you will just have to make it up to me and the kids when the inspectors have gone and cleared your hospital" "i will i promise" she kissed him on his chest "i will make sure" he smiled "i love you" "i love you too" they fell asleep.

Morning 7am
Ragini woke up and saw nachiket awake how long have you been up. "A while i was just watching you sleep" she went to get up he pulled her back "please 5 mins more" "nachiket" she did not protest much he looked at her and kissed her she opened her mouth to let his tongue in he moved his hand down to her legs she broke the kiss "nachiket i will be late" "i will take the blame" he looked at her and kissed her he was just about to kiss her again when there was a knock on the door he stopped and looked at her there was another knock "ragini are you awake" it was pam he shook his head "ragini nishi is on the phone she wants to speak to you" she kissed him "i am sorry" he moved back and she got up and opened the door and took the phone off pam nachiket got up and went into the shower.
Car
Nachiket was dropping ragini off at work he parked up. "Will i see you tonight" "i will try and not be too late ragini" she went to get out and turned back "don't stress too much" he smiled "i will try not to" he kissed her goodbye.

Afternoon
Pam had come to the hospital to see ragini "hi pam you ok" "no the college rung they want to see you about aarav" "why whats wrong" "i don't know they will not tell me over the phone". Ragini and pam went to the college and were told aarav had been suspended because been caught having a fight with another pupil and swearing at a teacher. Pam took him home because ragini had to go back to work.

Evening 6pm
Ragini was home ranbir had picked her up. She got home and asked pam about aarav "he is in his room where he has been all afternoon" ragini went and got him out of his room.

Living room
Aarav was sat down and ragini was stood up "well aarav do u have something to say" "no" "you got suspended from college" "so i will go back in a few days" "thats not the point".

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Nachiket! Things are only getting worse for him I liked how Ragini was right by his side through the whole thing though, and I especially enjoyed how Pam pulled Ranbir away when Ragini went in to handle Nachiket and his anger... 😳

And Aarav! 😡 God, I hope his mess resolves itself soon; Nachiket doesn't need any more stress, especially not from that useless boy!

A wonderful pair of updates, as usual! Thank you so much for showing us this side of their daily life; it's such a pleasure to read your work, Shabz! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: neiralove

Oh Nachiket! Things are only getting worse for him I liked how Ragini was right by his side through the whole thing though, and I especially enjoyed how Pam pulled Ranbir away when Ragini went in to handle Nachiket and his anger... 😳

And Aarav! 😡 God, I hope his mess resolves itself soon; Nachiket doesn't need any more stress, especially not from that useless boy!

A wonderful pair of updates, as usual! Thank you so much for showing us this side of their daily life; it's such a pleasure to read your work, Shabz! 😊


Thank you for liking and reading and yes aarav is useless i have just finished the next update will post it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6C

"this affects your future" "one stupid suspension" "aarav" "what i don't even like the college or the work" "so what are you going to do" "i don't know i will start a business" "just like that" "dad will help" "aarav your dad has enough stress at min he does not need to worry about you aswell" "mum leave him he will not understand" ranbir said aarav and him started fighting ragini got in the middle to stop them and aarav pushed her and she fell and hurt her arm. Pam grabbed her and shouted at them to stop "you two fighting is not going to help" ranbir went to his mum "are you ok mum i am sorry" "ranbir you get the first aid box and ragini come on i will take you to your room"

Bedroom
Pam was putting a badage on her arm when nachiket walked in."what happened ragini" "nothing nachiket i fell and hurt my arm" "when have you started lieing to me" "i am not" "pam what happened" she looked at ragini "don't look at her tell me" pam told him what happened he went out of the room shouting for aarav and ranbir pam and ragini followed.

Living room
Ranbir and aarav come out of their room "what the hell were you doing fighting" nachiket was angry neither of them spoke. "Dad i am sorry" ranbir said "why were you fighting" "he was being rude to mum and i lost it" "aarav you have anything to say" he said nothing. "Both of you know i don't need this at the min aarav you are going to college and finish your studies your mum is right" "no dad i want my own business" "how are you going to do business you have no experience" "i will make it work" "you are finishing college and that is final and apologies to your mum now" "i am sorry" "aarav" ragini grabbed nachikets arm and shook her head he stormed off to his room. "Ranbir you know better you know i don't need this" "i am sorry dad it will not happen again".

Bedroom
It had been a tense dinner and nachiket and ragini were in their room. Nachiket was sat on the bed when there was knock on the door. Ragini opened the door ranbir was stood there "mum i am really sorry about earlier" "its ok ranbir i know go to sleep" she kissed his forehead she closed the door "ragini come here let me look at that arm" there was another knock on the door ragini opened it aagham was stood there "mum is dad awake" "yes come in" nachiket got up "whats wrong aagham" "dad i know i know nothing about the hospital but if there is anything i can do to help you please tell me" nachiket looked at ragini he walked upto aagham "beta you offered help thats all i need your papa will make everything ok" he hugged him "go to sleep ok" he turned to go ragini hugged him and kissed his forehead "thank you beta" he went out. Ragini hugged nachiket.

Morning 6am
Nachiket woke up ragini was still asleep he did not wake her up he got changed and went to work.

The next three weeks were hard on everyone nachiket was working 18hrs a day ragini hardly saw him. She was missing him he would phone her at work or at home. Ranbir and suhanni were helping their dad as much as they could. In these three weeks ragini had passed her written driving test she only had her practical test to go she only told pam she wanted to suprise him. The day had finally come when the inspectors came they would be at the hospital for three days.

Morning
Nachiket came into the kitchen he sat down ragini gave him coffee and his breakfast "ragini sit down and have breakfast" "no i have had it" he know she was lieing she never eat before him. She went out of the kitchen. He looked at pam "whats going on" "nothing" "pam" "she is fasting for three days only having water for your success" he picked the plate up and went into the room.

Bedroom
Ragini was infront of the mirror getting ready he came in and grabbed her and made her sit down. He sat down next to her and broke a bit of the toast and "have this ragini" "no nachiket" "ragini eat please" she got up "you know" he put the plate down and walked to her he turned her towards him "break your fast ragini" "no nachiket" "ragini please you have to work and fasting its not good" "i will be fine"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabz, this was so well written! I could feel Nachiket's frustration, Ranbir's need to be defensive and protective of his mother, Aagham's genuine desire to help his dad, and best of all, Ragini's pain. All I can say now is GORGEOUS! 👏

I really hope Nachiket doesn't fast because Ragini isn't eating--he needs all the energy he can get to deal with the mess at the hospital!
Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove

Shabz, this was so well written! I could feel Nachiket's frustration, Ranbir's need to be defensive and protective of his mother, Aagham's genuine desire to help his dad, and best of all, Ragini's pain. All I can say now is GORGEOUS! 👏


I really hope Nachiket doesn't fast because Ragini isn't eating--he needs all the energy he can get to deal with the mess at the hospital!


Thank you for liking i thought i was babbling on in this update and no nachiket will not fast

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