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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Dear Shabz,
Just read the last two parts...that was sooo HAWT ☺️...it was everything I would expect from them being away from each other for that long. (And then the 2nd time with Ragini in control 😳)

Also loved N's reunion with his kids, he needs to get back home ASAP...hopefully that is what he's working on in that meeting??

Update soon please Shabz!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Dear Shabz,

Just read the last two parts...that was sooo HAWT ☺️...it was everything I would expect from them being away from each other for that long. (And then the 2nd time with Ragini in control 😳)

Also loved N's reunion with his kids, he needs to get back home ASAP...hopefully that is what he's working on in that meeting??

Update soon please Shabz!


Glad you like it will try and update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Part 5
Kitchen
"One minute please ranbir papa needs to talk to maa then we will go ok" he went out ragini turned her back on him "ragini listen to me please" "its ok nachiket i knew you were only here a few days i just thought it would be longer" she was trying hard not to cry. "Go the kids are waiting for you they have missed you" "come with us its your birthday ragini" "nachiket" he turned her around "do you love me" "yes" "do you trust me" "yes" "thats all i need now lets go we are celebrating your birthday and not thinking of anything else ok" "nachiket" "ragini i have missed you i want to celebrate your birthday with you please everything will be ok i promise" she looked at him she knew he would make everything ok "i will just get changed"

Living Room
Nachiket was sat in the room with the kids and Ragini walked in she looked beautiful. "Papa maa is here lets go ok" "where are we going" nachiket asked nishi and ranbir were shouting places "hang on your maa gets to choose its her birthday" ragini loooked at him "where ever the kids want to go" he smiled he knew she would say that. Nachiket got up and picked up the twins carseats up and told ranbir and nishi to follow him.

Car
Nachiket was driving they were going to the park first then shopping.

Shopping
They had been to the park but now they were shopping for presents for ragini but the kids so far had only bought toys for themselves and nachiket did not have the heart to say no to them. "Papa i am hungry can we eat something now" ranbir asked "yes we can" he stopped so ragini could catch up "ragini kids want something to eat" they stopped and had something to eat.

Car evening
They were driving home the kids were exhausted they had enjoyed their day and ragini had been so happy seening them enjoy their time with their dad before he left again. The twins were asleep and ranbir and nishi were nearly asleep. Nachiket stopped the car he had ordered food for ragini and him he had wanted to take her out for a romantic meal but she inisisted on staying at home spending time just with him. "I will just go grab the food do you want anything else ragini" no thank you" he went out the car and his phone rang ragini picked it up "dr khanna" it was a woman "no its his wife he is just busy at the minute" "hi mrs khanna its sonu dr khannas PA" "hi" "can you tell him his ticket is confirmed for tomorrow nights flight the flight leaves at 8pm and the job he wanted doing urgently will take a week" "yes i will tell him" "nice to speak to u bye" "bye". Ragini put the phone down and looked out the window the thing she had avoided thinking about all day was back she had tears in her eyes he would leave tomorrow again for 8 months. Nachiket came back and put the bags in the back and sat down. "You ok ragini" "your PA rang your ticket is confirmed" he looked at her she was fighting her tears "thanks" they drove home in silence.

Home
Nachiket took the twins in then ranbir and nishi and put them to bed they were all exhausted. He came into the kitchen and ragini had laid dinner out.

Kitchen
He sat down for dinner and so did she he looked at her she had been crying. "Ragini you ok" "i am fine" she got up "you have not eaten anything" "i am not hungry" he walked upto her and hugged her from behind "ragini" "nachiket leave me i need to be alone please" he watched her go he knew what she was sad and angry about him going back to USA but he could not see her like this.

Bedroom
She walked in crying she stopped when she saw the flower petals on the bed and on the floor and candles lit around the room and she saw a box on the table with Happy Birthday Jaan written on the top she heard him coming in and close the door. She turned around and looked at him "i wanted your birthday to be special" she turned away "are you not opening your present" "i don't need any presents i need you" he walked upto her and turned her around "i am here" "what for a few hours thats all" "ragini we decided together that i would go to the USA"
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
I am heartbroken, Shabz. You can't do this to my Ragini. Let her have her husband for forever, please! 😭 Update the next part sooner!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveleen3

I am heartbroken, Shabz. You can't do this to my Ragini. Let her have her husband for forever, please! 😭 Update the next part sooner!



I am sorry loveleen don't cry will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Shabz this is so sad but I can understand both of their viewpoints perfectly.. N is just trying to make the most of the time they have left together but R doesn't want to live without him for so many more months and can't help but think about their impending separation.
Beautifully done, thanks... Look forward to reading more soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Shabz this is so sad but I can understand both of their viewpoints perfectly.. N is just trying to make the most of the time they have left together but R doesn't want to live without him for so many more months and can't help but think about their impending separation.

Beautifully done, thanks... Look forward to reading more soon!


Thanks for liking will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww! Nachiket is trying so hard to keep his Ragini happy for these few days, but he's ignoring the heartbreak that will result when he leaves her...poor souls :(

Thanks Shabz for this wonderful piece and update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Shabz,
This is so beautiful.
But heartbreaking 💔

Please do not do this to my Ragini - she is heartbroken enough. And so sad.

Please don't make them sad.

Edited by poetic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: neiralove

Awww! Nachiket is trying so hard to keep his Ragini happy for these few days, but he's ignoring the heartbreak that will result when he leaves her...poor souls :(

Thanks Shabz for this wonderful piece and update soon!


Thanks for liking will try and update tonight if not them tomz deffo

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