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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: neiralove

Beautiful, as always, Shabz! I'm so happy that Nachiket finally told Ragini about his plan to bring her and the kids to the US. And the way they came together was gorgeous!


The punishment for the bite was my favorite... ☺️

Thanks for the quick updates! 😊


Thank you for liking hopefully you will like the next one it is a bit sad
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it Shabz, just beautiful! So happy that their family will be back together soon.
Loved Nachiket watching Ragini in her sleep, as well as of course their sweet love-making and Nachiket's revenge ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Loved it Shabz, just beautiful! So happy that their family will be back together soon.

Loved Nachiket watching Ragini in her sleep, as well as of course their sweet love-making and Nachiket's revenge ☺️


Thank you for liking next part will be up soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ah! I knew IF's Nachiket couldn't be a jerk. Show's Nachiket is enough. Get the twins' visa soon and update sooner! :D
I am loving every bit of it! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveleen3

Ah! I knew IF's Nachiket couldn't be a jerk. Show's Nachiket is enough. Get the twins' visa soon and update sooner! :D
I am loving every bit of it! :D



Haha thanks for liking will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Awesome shabz... All 6 part I read in one go... I just loved it.. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushmaArshi

Awesome shabz... All 6 part I read in one go... I just loved it.. ❤️


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Posted: 10 years ago
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What no comment rachana
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Part 7
3.45am
He had fed and changed the boys and he was hungry himself now so he went into the kitchen and grabbed some ice cream and sat down. Meanwhile ragini woke up he had been a while she got up and put his shirt on and went out she saw the kitchen light on.

Kitchen
He was sat there eating ice cream she went near him he grabbed her arm and pulled her into his lap she hit his chest he smiled at her "nachiket" she turned her head to face him "face me properly ragini" she knew what he wanted she got up and sat back down in his lap facing him he smiled "do you want ice cream" "no" he stroked her face and pulled her down and kissed her while his right hand was moving up her right leg she broke the kiss. "Not here nachiket" "why not" "the kids" "they are asleep they will not distrub us" "nachiket they will hear" "not me you they will hear" she hit him on his chest "fine u stay her i am going to bed" he grabbed her arm "i was joking" he kissed her and moved the chair back and picked her up with her legs around his waist and took her to their room.

Morning 6am
Ragini woke up in his arms she went to get up he pulled her back into his arms "nachiket" "five more mins please" he held her tightly she stroked his chest "i will talk to the kids" "no i will i am the one leaving so i should tell them" he just held her she kissed his chest she did not want this moment to end. She finally pulled away when she heard aarav over the baby monitor he let her go.

8am
Kids were having breakfast when nachiket walked in he kissed ragini good morning then the kids ragini gave him his coffee. He looked at ragini then said to ranbir and nishi lets go into the living room papa has something to tell you.

Living Room
He sat ranbir and nishi down on th sofa and knelt in front of them. Ragini was sat on the other sofa with the twins. "Papa loves you a lot you know that right" they both nodded "but papas work is far away and papa has to go back today" they both looked at him ranbir "but why papa" "because ranbir papa needs to work and it will not be for long papa will see you all really soon" ranbir got up and went into his room "ranbir listen" nishi got up "nishi listen to papa" "no" she was crying she ran to ragini nachiket was heartbroken. Then ranbir came out of his room with his new toys and threw them on the floor "papa i don't need new toys and i will be a good boy please stay" nachiket looked at ragini she was crying he knelt down and hugged ranbir "you are papas good boy and i promise papa will see you really soon i promise beta" nachiket broke the hug and wiped his tears "ranbir you are papas strong boy" he nodded "promise i will see you soon" "i promise beta". Nishi was crying nachiket went upto and tried to hug her "no" "nishi beta listen to papa" "no go away" she hugged ragini nachiket sat there heartbroken.

Evening
Nachiket was getting ready to leave for the airport ranbir understood now but nishi had not spoken to him since this morning it was killing him. He got his bag. Ragini walked in and hugged him "the kids will be ok i will talk to them" he broke the hug and looked at her "i know you will make them understand" he kissed her and hugged her "i love you" "i love you too nachiket" she did not want to let go he was her life and she knew it was only a week but still it was killing her. He hugged her tighter this hug had to get him thru a week of not being with her.

Living room
He hugged ranbir and the twins saying goodbye to them. He went to nishi and she went and stood behind ragini "nishi say bye to papa go on" she shook her head no "nishi" "its ok ragini leave her" he walked upto ragini and kissed her "i promise 7 days or i am back" she nodded he hugged her "look after yourself" she nodded he went to walk out when nishi came running "papa" he hugged her and kissed her "papa loves his princess i promise papa will see you soon" ragini picked her up he wiped nishi's tears and ragini's and kissed nishi she grabbed his hand and would not let go "nishi" she just shook her head she finally let go and he was gone.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Shabz! This was so poignant--I loved how Nishi refused to speak with Nachiket until the very last second...that's such a little kid thing to do 😳 😆 And I liked how Nachiket says "7 days or I am back"--that's just what Ragini needed to hear. Perfect! 😊

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