Originally posted by: neiralove
I really enjoyed this one Shabz! Especially Nachiket seeing Ranbir in the little boy and not wanting to risk taking someone's son away from them; that was very well done. I also really liked the way you captured the little moments between Nachiket, Ragini, and Ranbir; the kisses they shared, how Ranbir wakes Nachiket up...you take care of all the details in your stories, which is really what makes them such a pleasure to read. :)
Thank you!