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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: neiralove

I really enjoyed this one Shabz! Especially Nachiket seeing Ranbir in the little boy and not wanting to risk taking someone's son away from them; that was very well done. I also really liked the way you captured the little moments between Nachiket, Ragini, and Ranbir; the kisses they shared, how Ranbir wakes Nachiket up...you take care of all the details in your stories, which is really what makes them such a pleasure to read. :)

Thank you!


Thank you for liking i struggled with this one glad u liked was not sure it was that good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

OMG Shabz!

*HUG*

You did such a lovely job at that beautiful prompt.. her convincing him to have faith in him and being there for him in every way.. really sweet and moving.. the perfect bond of supporting, caring and understanding <3

Thanks so much for writing this!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


OMG Shabz!

*HUG*

You did such a lovely job at that beautiful prompt.. her convincing him to have faith in him and being there for him in every way.. really sweet and moving.. the perfect bond of supporting, caring and understanding <3

Thanks so much for writing this!



Thank you for liking i an now trying to work on her other prompt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabz50


Thank you for liking i an now trying to work on her other prompt


WOW!!

Can't wait! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


WOW!!

Can't wait! 😳


I would not get that exicted sukhi i don't think its going to be good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: shabz50


I would not get that exicted sukhi i don't think its going to be good


HAAHHAHAHAAH don't worry
I am sure it'll be lovely! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ronitfan


HAAHHAHAHAAH don't worry
I am sure it'll be lovely! 😳


Well i am hoping it will be romantic and steamy but lets see what happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayyy
That makes me so happy! =D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shabz, this was wonderful, thank you!
This is what has been missing in his life, his wife's support and her confidence in him that allows him to perform better than he even thought he could. You did a great job of showing how important she is to him.

I loved also how he saw his son in his patient, that compassion is what helps him do what's best for his patients.

Thanks also to Tiana for the lovely prompt :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Shabz, this was wonderful, thank you!

This is what has been missing in his life, his wife's support and her confidence in him that allows him to perform better than he even thought he could. You did a great job of showing how important she is to him.

I loved also how he saw his son in his patient, that compassion is what helps him do what's best for his patients.

Thanks also to Tiana for the lovely prompt :)


Glad you liked it

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