TS: Rings (Pg. 1 and Pg. 10) - Page 6

Originally posted by: metoyou

Hahahaha! You did it yourself 😳

Attitude, woh bhi Didi se... accha 😈

Originally posted by: neiralove

I know, and now you'll never let me live it down... 😕

Attitude toh pehle se hi tha 😈

Originally posted by: metoyou

Ab meine kya kiya?! 😲 I just did my social service 😳

Bring on the attitude, men bhi dekhti hoon 😈

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Shikhaaa

This was beautiful, how you took such a simple act and made it so meaningful, honestly I'm not sure how but it was so lovely.

One of my favorite lines:

She felt it, that which he would never actually say. The fact that his heartbeats still only had her name on them.

Of course they do and will always do so

Her flashback was beautiful, a return to a more innocent time where her future was bright and full of hope - contrasted with her reality now, a sham of a marriage with an end date.

It breaks my heart that she thinks he wants Nivedita instead of her...of course he hasn't told her anything to dispel that notion. But one day, maybe...

I too would like a companion piece if possible - what was N thinking as R fell asleep on his shoulder?

Originally posted by: neiralove

Nidhiii! 😊

This wonderful comment just made my evening! I'm so happy you liked it! 😳

A companion piece...I'll definitely try writing one, but please keep your expectations low. I really have no idea how it will turn out! 😛

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

I loved it 🤗

It's too late, my expectations are already sky-high where you're concerned...the only thing you can do is keep writing to keep me happy 😛

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

No no no THAT would break my heart 🥺

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Oh yeah I guess I should work on that 🤔