Vignette : The Dinner and After ... - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: neiralove

😲

Jadoo ❤️ ❤️ ❤️


Why 😲?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ShyNomad



😲

Just kidding...

🤗



Maska!!! 😲 don't try to fool me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53


Nidhi 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Fantastic movie...but wasn't he just a little annoying?

No?

Bueller?

No one thinks so?

Ok 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: metoyou



Maska!!! 😲 don't try to fool me


I don't know what you mean I am just being my charming self 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Jadoo [L]

It's fine Nidhi dear, just messing [:p]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad



I don't know what you mean I am just being my charming self😛



Hmm charming ... Apparently we have different definition of being charming 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
I guess I am too late to say that I am dazed... BUT that is exactly how I feel... For a few minutes I felt that I was in their world just witnessing the conversation... Oh how beautifully you write❤️

The whole conversation was so... so beautiful and Magical❤️

I loved how he just kept on gazing the moon in his arms❤️

And she used to gaze at the stars because she missed him...❤️ I loved this part of the conversation the best of all...❤️

See how bright they are. Do you think they miss somebody as well? From so far out in the galaxy, twinkling like small diamond beads? Do you think there are other living beings in the universe as well who look at those stars and think of their most loved and cherished ones?

She turned slightly and looked into his eyes

Like I have all these years? For you? For us? For our children? For our family together?

I tried to search for your smile, your touch, you ... in those stars, all these years.

Did you ever miss me, Nachiket? This bad?

Her voice was now overcome with unpolished emotions and she now choked on a sob. He pulled her tight across his chest, as his lips found her forehead, hers hands encircling his waist.

And now you will be gone soon. And my wait will start again. This time for eternity.

It was beyond beautiful❤️ It was heartbreaking to feel her pain💔 yet the whole conversation was beautiful❤️ This was more like a beautiful painting than words of a story... Such beauty in these lines❤️

I loved how he kissed her❤️

Their conversation is not yet ended that is a wonderful thing❤️... It means they have a chance to get back together... Lovely

Lovely, Lovely❤️❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Tiana 🤗
Such lovely comments. Made me happy after a stressful day.

I enjoyed writing this one for sure, and I am glad you liked it.

This is how I see NR - in simple situations, in everyday lives, communicating with each other.

As for their kiss, I believe they are both waiting for it - and it's their destiny. I am sure they don't even have to try
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Gorgeous stuff! This was heavenly.
This is exactly how it should be. They need it. They need to open up.

Loved the mature, sensitive Nachiket.

Loved the kiss.

I could totally imagine the whole scene. Fantastic writing.
Their conversation was beautiful.

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