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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Shikha! I knew you would come up with something 😃

Just for his effort this man deserves a hug 😳

The flashback was very sweet. Such a caring husband Ragini has; taking care of her during her last semester and doing whatever she says. How can you not love him!

Nachiket mauka dekhte hi shuru ho jata hai but this the kids caught them red handed 😆 Such shaitaan bacche they are!

"Hum jayenge tabhi toh kuch ban payega na'' (I loved this one)

The transition from present day to the flashback and back to now was done very smoothly. I really enjoyed this one a lot, it was simple and cute yet very lovely.

A (burnt) toast has never tasted so good! 😉😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

🤗 Shikha for taking up the prompt.

Burnt toast has never felt this good and delicious. The idea of Nachiket trying to make breakfast for his family is so cute.

And then the slight moments of romance are like a double blessing. ❤️ Just that they got caught by the kids. That was so funny.

The best part was them reminiscing the moment after so many years, even while the feelings are totally intact.

Lovely, take a Bow, Sweetie.

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Santosh

@Santosh99

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Shikha this was totally outstanding 👏

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Bumping this up - I think some people missed this! :)

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -harini-
Shikha!!!what a brilliant one shot !! And if this is not the way you wanted it to turn out I can't imagine any more awesomeness being added to this ! This was perfect 🤗 made me smile throughout ..haha he burnt it yet again 😆
And the kids teasing them was so cute 😳 I got goosebumps while reading certain parts of it ,like "You know I can't see you in pain...", Ragini just looked at him,falling head over heels for him yet again...many minute details were so brilliantly written :)it was lovely !! I guess I am going to read it few more times 😃

Aww Harini! Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment dear! It really means a lot to me. 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Shikha,
This was just wonderful - the way you used their memories of the past to inform their actions in the present - he still cares about her well-being just as much and I thought the way you illustrated that was beautiful. ❤️

It seems like such a simple thing, N making breakfast, but the concern and kindness with which he does so lets R see his true motivation, he loves her.

Also loved N shamelessly taking advantage of the situation, even in front of the kids! He is the reason for that permanent smile on her face 😊

Nidhi! Thank you so much for liking it--the little details kinda just fell into place...I had wanted to write about the flashback moment for a while now and after seeing Rachna Di's prompt I figured I'd just tie it into the present. So I'm glad you enjoyed that! 😊

Our Nachiket is most definitely shameless when it comes to Ragini! 😆

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
So sweet this was, Shikha❤️

Totally Awww! The breakfast chronicle !😃

I love their kitchen scenes, don't know why😆 Maybe because that's NOT a place for TLC and they do it there also..That just makes me jump in aww😆

His concern for her is what makes the sweetest angle in him ❤️

Totally absolutely breathtakingly awesomely wonderful and beautiful🤗

Ragini! ❤️

Haha these two have an old friendship with the kitchen! 😆 I love when Nachiket takes care of her too; he's more than a lover, he's her husband, her friend, and her entire support system. 😳

Awww shucks--that last line is making me blush... 😳 Thank you so much for reading dear! 🤗

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Shikha,
This was so our Nachiket and Ragini! <3 The flirt yet caring N, the beautiful R, super-naughty kids, this was sweet.. :D
The flashback was apt. Vaise, what did he end up cooking? Or burning? :P

I loved the direction you chose for writing on this prompt. I am sure Rachna will love it too! :D

Haha thanks a bunch Loveleen! ❤️

You mean for the kids? Toast (using the toaster this time 😛) and then Ragini helped him make the rest of breakfast (helped as in made it herself). 😆

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Haww!!
Be it their first chance or the second,they're as heartbreakingly beautiful as they always were.. this was so endearing! Love your take on the prompt, dear.. them recreating their memories and reliving all those moments close to their heart..

Please please let this be something on the show- I really hope :) His kiss on her palm <3 aww!! I love this Nachiket!!

Thanks for this Shikha! <3 ADORBSSS!!!

Oh Sukhi Di, thank YOU for reading and the wonderful words! And that GIF is so adorable--I can't wait to see the live-action version of The Jungle Book! 😃

I'm sure they'll share a cute flashback moment soon, especially with Nachiket taking care of Ragini after the fracture. 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shabz50
Shikha
So sweet loved the flashback the caring nachiket and then the naughty nachiket loved it and the kids teasing them sooo good. This is our neira really hope to see something like this in the show

I love how he can transition between caring and naughtiness so easily! 😆 Thanks for reading Shabz! 😳

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