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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

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-harini-

@-harini-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shikha!!!what a brilliant one shot !! And if this is not the way you wanted it to turn out I can't imagine any more awesomeness being added to this ! This was perfect 🤗 made me smile throughout ..haha he burnt it yet again 😆
And the kids teasing them was so cute 😳 I got goosebumps while reading certain parts of it ,like "You know I can't see you in pain...", Ragini just looked at him,falling head over heels for him yet again...many minute details were so brilliantly written :)it was lovely !! I guess I am going to read it few more times 😃

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Shikha,

This was just wonderful - the way you used their memories of the past to inform their actions in the present - he still cares about her well-being just as much and I thought the way you illustrated that was beautiful. ❤️

It seems like such a simple thing, N making breakfast, but the concern and kindness with which he does so lets R see his true motivation, he loves her.

Also loved N shamelessly taking advantage of the situation, even in front of the kids! He is the reason for that permanent smile on her face 😊

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

So sweet this was, Shikha❤️

Totally Awww! The breakfast chronicle !😃

I love their kitchen scenes, don't know why😆 Maybe because that's NOT a place for TLC and they do it there also..That just makes me jump in aww😆

His concern for her is what makes the sweetest angle in him ❤️

Totally absolutely breathtakingly awesomely wonderful and beautiful🤗

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Shikha,
This was so our Nachiket and Ragini! <3 The flirt yet caring N, the beautiful R, super-naughty kids, this was sweet.. :D
The flashback was apt. Vaise, what did he end up cooking? Or burning? :P

I loved the direction you chose for writing on this prompt. I am sure Rachna will love it too! :D

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Haww!!

Be it their first chance or the second,they're as heartbreakingly beautiful as they always were.. this was so endearing! Love your take on the prompt, dear.. them recreating their memories and reliving all those moments close to their heart..

Please please let this be something on the show- I really hope :) His kiss on her palm <3 aww!! I love this Nachiket!!

Thanks for this Shikha! <3 ADORBSSS!!!

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Shikha

So sweet loved the flashback the caring nachiket and then the naughty nachiket loved it and the kids teasing them sooo good. This is our neira really hope to see something like this in the show

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks Shikha for accepting the prompt. 🤗

I will respond in details later, either tonight or tomorrow. This deserves unwavered attention

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iamcurious

@iamcurious

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

I have no idea what is this prompt thing but whatever it is, its great..one amazing OS this is.

Toast - old and new scene weaved together so well.

Somehow Neil and Ragini we visualise here are way more lively and beautiful than NB's version. These two are more humane here actually.

Good work! 👏

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AngelsFlyAlone

@AngelsFlyAlone

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

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Shikha di this was freakin gorgeous!!!!

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