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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: poetic
Sukhs, I still have to comment properly. I am totally messed up right now, so I guess I will have to wait till tomorrow.
Sorry Dear

Hey! Don't be sorry yaar..

take your time, I understand 😊

*HUG*

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Not the writing? 😡

Not the WRITING?

Sukhi,

The writing was so poignant, I felt as if I was sitting there watching R cradle her husband in her arms as he cried.

I mean, these lines:
Doing all these things with Ragini..these rites and rituals enthralled him to no end, his family finally being one unit.. this was nothing less than a dream for him.. but the transiency of it all was like a dagger stuck in his heart that threatened to twist and turn with every memory he unwittingly recalled.

👏

Please don't sell yourself short ever again

Thank you for the poem, it is so true.

Aww Nidhi! Thanks again.. you're right.. I'll not short myself 😊

🤗🤗

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: goldstar678
Speachless.Touched my heart.Not in a position to comment furthur.

Thanks a lot Pavan! 🤗🤗

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Santosh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Sukhi di! Stuck with my words speechless! Tooo goood!

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Thank you so much Santosh! :)

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Re read this story again, and the poignancy strikes you every time.

The importance of the story lies in the fact that this is the first step for N to really see the side of R's life that he has not even comprehended. The life that she led with two young kids, and an old grandmother, a stay at home Mom and Sunny Tai.

And am happy that the realisation happened on front of the person it mattered, and not the entire world.

Thanks, once again.

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

This was so heart breaking💔

It was a simple event that brought out their years of hidden pain

I actually ended up having tears in my eyes...

She used their joint account all these years... Even after he left her... I guess somewhere deep inside, she had a hope that he will come back... True love it is❤️

And she spent so much for him... Even after having so little for herself❤️

And you wrote Nachiket's breakdown so beautifully... I could almost see that happening in front of my eyes

I am glad that he finally saw how difficult it was for her to make ends meet...

And the ending... Nachiket's Ragini and Ragini's Nachiket was❤️

I so loved it❤️

Thank you so much for this simple yet so beautiful piece😊

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Oh Tiana,

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much for those words - they warmed my heart more than you know!

I am so happy my writing could touch you.. *HUG*

❤️

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sun29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

this is so so so beautiful...and it is ragini for you...thank you so much ...yes she would do something like this for her nachiket...for all the loss of words ,it is her acts that make up for it ...she does love him a lot and those who understand her do understand that ...

this was so touching ...andi really loved that nachiket realized it was never easy for her ...and i wish te one in the show too would realize soon...

absolutely loved it Sukhs...thank you so much and the end was awww..speechless😭 ❤️

Edited by sun29 - 9 years ago

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roneeta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: poetic
Re read this story again, and the poignancy strikes you every time.
The importance of the story lies in the fact that this is the first step for N to really see the side of R's life that he has not even comprehended. The life that she led with two young kids, and an old grandmother, a stay at home Mom and Sunny Tai.

And am happy that the realisation happened on front of the person it mattered, and not the entire world.

Thanks, once again.

Aww Rachana! 😳

Thank you so much! For N to realize that she has this side to her in itself will be a huge step.. to come to terms with it is another thing altogether.. to break through the facade of self-sufficiency and a sort of emotional invincibility she portrays, he will have to gain ALL of her trust..

Thank you for always inspiring me by what you write! 😃

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