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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Well,

They do have a flashback with small Ranbir that's for sure :)

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Loveleeennn
When are you writing? <3

Got Typhoid man! 😕 My life is revolving around orange juice and mausami right now. 🥱

But I've written the 2nd part of the drunk Ragini OS. Posting in a bit. *I am shit scared* *hope you guys like it*

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Loved this shikha they are in so much pain but still will not talk to each other the emotions so beautifully wriiten loved it

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Lovely❤️

It was seriously very beautiful

The whole picture that your writing painted was perfect

The hurt, the angst was all clearly seen... so clear as their eyes met...

I loved how the timer was still running between him and Rupali...

And I loved how Ranbir's picture reminded her of her past with him...

They just couldn't move on...

You have written is so beautifully... I seriously love it😳

Wonderful Shikha👏

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Shikha!

Pehle toh a big sorry for being so late! I read this just now and it made me emotional. Beautiful concept and some very deep emotions.

Good to see Ranbir being a part of Ragini's life instead of Nachiket's.

I could feel the pain in them; the long lost relationship, the parenthood and the longing for the other. Especially that last paragraph... excellent!

Thank you so much for this. A very pleasant surprise I did NOT see this one coming 😳

Free hugs today 🤗

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Shikha This OS is an absolute masterpiece of writing😊

Waise toh i am a fan of your creativity but this OS is amazing and very sweet to say the least. Adding Ranbir is an absolute surprise for me👏

Ragini wanting to soothe ears by listening to sea waves is an absolute magic😊

I can spend hours re-reading this O.S again and again.

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shabz50
Loved this shikha they are in so much pain but still will not talk to each other the emotions so beautifully wriiten loved it

Thank you Shabz! If they could just say what they felt, life would be so much easier! 😊

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
Lovely❤️
It was seriously very beautiful

The whole picture that your writing painted was perfect

The hurt, the angst was all clearly seen... so clear as their eyes met...

I loved how the timer was still running between him and Rupali...

And I loved how Ranbir's picture reminded her of her past with him...

They just couldn't move on...

You have written is so beautifully... I seriously love it😳

Wonderful Shikha👏

Aww thank you Tiana! I'm glad it brought a smile to your face 😊

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: metoyou
Shikha!

Pehle toh a big sorry for being so late! I read this just now and it made me emotional. Beautiful concept and some very deep emotions.
Good to see Ranbir being a part of Ragini's life instead of Nachiket's.

I could feel the pain in them; the long lost relationship, the parenthood and the longing for the other. Especially that last paragraph... excellent!

Thank you so much for this. A very pleasant surprise I did NOT see this one coming 😳

Free hugs today 🤗

Narges!

You're not late at all! I'm glad you liked it--it was damn hard to write, so your feedback means so much more to me 😊

Thank god you didn't see this one coming; don't expect things like this again! 😆 And my hugs are (almost) always free 😳 🤗

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Shikha This OS is an absolute masterpiece of writing😊

Waise toh i am a fan of your creativity but this OS is amazing and very sweet to say the least. Adding Ranbir is an absolute surprise for me👏

Ragini wanting to soothe ears by listening to sea waves is an absolute magic😊

I can spend hours re-reading this O.S again and again.

Oh gosh, you always make me blush with your feedback, MAK! 😳 Thank you so much for reading and liking it! 😊

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