Tiana's Poems*New*: Desperate For.?@ pg 8 22/9

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I wrote this based on the mehendi flashback😊I posted this on the Episode Discussion thread initially.


In My Heart

They push me to find my name hidden,

Somewhere in the beautiful curves of your hand,

I would rather enter your heart, now to me forbidden,

And carve my name with a magic wand.

I find my name the minute you stretch your palm,

But I pretend that it's hard to find,

Hiding disappointment inside, you pretend to be calm,

Sweetheart have you forgotten how well I read your mind.

Oh Baby, why don't you understand still?

Can't you just see into my lonely heart?

The heart that once beat for you and always will,

For Darling, I have your name etched in my heart.


~Tiana


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Originally posted by: shabz50

Love it this is beautiful


Thank you😃
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Originally posted by: hamna19khan

👏👏👏 No words


Thank You😃😃
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👍🏼 @tiana as usuall you are fabulous 😃
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Originally posted by: Santosh1999

👍🏼 @tiana as usuall you are fabulous 😃


Thank You😳
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You are so talented Tiana..hats off and thanks for this wonderful poem! 😳
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You write poems also? And that too such beautiful ones 😳
Loved it, Tiana. You've explained that situation so well. Too good. Please write more if possible. Situation based poems :) I'm actually noting this down in my diary, short and beautiful 😳

Thanks :)
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Tiana, this is way beyond beautiful. Deep feelings, deeper emotions, deepest desires.
The longing and the reality ... the mehndi ushering in love and hope and superlative realisations in their lives.

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Originally posted by: metoyou

You are so talented Tiana..hats off and thanks for this wonderful poem! 😳


And thank you for such a lovely comment🤗
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Beautiful! ❤️ Poetry is a very unique way to write and convey emotions; it has so much more potential than stories, but it is also so hard to write. Thank you for taking on this great task and please write more soon 😳

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