Tiana's Poems*New*: Desperate For.?@ pg 8 22/9 - Page 2

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

You write poems also? And that too such beautiful ones 😳

Loved it, Tiana. You've explained that situation so well. Too good. Please write more if possible. Situation based poems :) I'm actually noting this down in my diary, short and beautiful 😳

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: poetic

Tiana, this is way beyond beautiful. Deep feelings, deeper emotions, deepest desires.

The longing and the reality ... the mehndi ushering in love and hope and superlative realisations in their lives.

Originally posted by: neiralove

Beautiful! ❤️ Poetry is a very unique way to write and convey emotions; it has so much more potential than stories, but it is also so hard to write. Thank you for taking on this great task and please write more soon 😳

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Ha Ha, yes I do write short poems...😳

I sometimes write such short poems for Abhi and Pragya from Kumkum Bhagya😊

You wrote it in your diary😲? That's a real honour😃

I'll try to write more poems😃

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

I like to note down what I like. Quotes, poems, etc ;) Yes, add more to my list please😉

I Just Can't Stop Loving Him

Here I wait for him again,

People say after knowing him, I just wait in vain,

For all he knows is to give me pain.

I waited for him the past sixteen years,

And if I start to think of my tears,

They only will multiply my fears.

Every night I drowned my bed,

With tears that made my eyes red,

But I was to him as one dead.

With a new hope, every day I woke up,

Being the emotional fool, I never did give up

Though, he never ever did turn up

Then why do I ever wait for him?

When the chances of us being together is dim

Because... I just can't stop loving him.

Originally posted by: poetic

Tiana,

this is beautiful. But it breaks my heart 💔

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Ragini's heart broke too Poor girl