F.F: Filmy NEIRA Final update (Neil Proposes Ragini on Page 19) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: MAK56



Thanks Chote Bhai for the feedback.

Fantastic! No not at all😆many talented writers here deserve that word😊

Will update the next part soon😃

Keep checking in chote bhai😉

Yes and you are one of them
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Santosh1999

Yes and you are one of them


Thanks Bhai for your praise. Honored😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: MAK56



Thanks Bhai for your praise. Honored😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Thanks zain di and mak for such butiful update 😊
Plz update soon as you can 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zuss

Thanks zain di and mak for such butiful update 😊

Plz update soon as you can 😳


Thanks for the sweet comment zuss😛😊

Next part will be updated soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Mak and Zainib,
This story is just so adorable...it reminds me a little of Ishq Vishq, which is one of my favorite comfort movies, so definitely a compliment!

It's interesting seeing these characters in a college setting because they are so young and carefree without any of this bakwas NB drama.

Love the filmyness with the wind blowing and the songs in the background 😃

One question - does your Karan have long hair or is he bald already? 😆

Thank you both for this!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Mak and Zainib,

This story is just so adorable...it reminds me a little of Ishq Vishq, which is one of my favorite comfort movies, so definitely a compliment!

It's interesting seeing these characters in a college setting because they are so young and carefree without any of this bakwas NB drama.

Love the filmyness with the wind blowing and the songs in the background 😃

One question - does your Karan have long hair or is he bald already? 😆

Thank you both for this!


Thank you so much ShyNomad for reading all the updates and loving the filminess in it😊

Spot on... This FF Story resembles Ishq Vishq but with slight changes😛

Bakwaas NB Drama... This cracked me up😆😆😆

Yes Karan have Long Hair in this FF *Tere Naam Style* 😆😆😆

Keeping checking in as Next update will be an awesome one😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Phantasticcc🥳

That debate between Nachiket's heart and mind was 🤣

Friendship done and Love is blooming 😳 Wow guys, Just superb and very entertaining 😆


Keep it up and update jaldi jaldu😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Phantasticcc🥳

That debate between Nachiket's heart and mind was 🤣

Friendship done and Love is blooming 😳 Wow guys, Just superb and very entertaining 😆


Keep it up and update jaldi jaldu😉


Thank you Raginey😃 for the lovely feedback😊

I am happy happy you were entertained😃😃😃

Your Phantasticcc cracked me up😆

Nachiket Baba ka heart and mind will continue their debate again😉😆

Yes Friendship done and love is blooming, pehle thodi love shove eye sharing chalegi😛😊 and of course thodi comedy bhi hogi😊😊😃

Will update jaldi jaldu😃

Edited by MansurKhan56 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

This is Mansur Khan back with the latest update...😊
Here we go...😉

Neil Face off Goons

Continued from last update.

Both Ragini and Neil stops dead in their track.

Unsure if that whistle was passed on her, Ragini asks "Neil did you just heard a Whistle"?

Being a smart guy from his infant days, Neil chuckles Naah! I guess it was some crow sound😆 not a whistle exactly.

Ragini: That was not at all funny. Bilkul bhi hasi nahi aayi.😡

In a hurry to avoid the chichora mess that Neil landed himself in, he grabs Ragini's hand "Wow! I didn't knew that my jokes sucks! Ab chalo class ka time ho raha hai.

While Ragini is walking away with Neil. Gunda 1 whistles again!

Now it was very clear to Ragini that she is being teased by some Road side romeo's. She goes in shock mode as this was the first time someone has teased her. Ragini recomposes herself and requests Neil "Chalo yaha se" as she doesn't not wanting any trouble for Neil who was furiously seething in anger on Karan.

Neil silent!

Ragini: "Neil Relax! tumhe ulaj na nahi hai mere liye Un logo se, chalo yaha se" said Ragini after cupping his face with her hands.

Neil starts cursing Karan with some 🤬 Dil hi dil me.

Ragini: Neil tum kuch bolte kyu nahi!

Neil: Sorry! Mein thoda kho gaya tha.

Ragini chuckles "Wah! Yeh bhi koi kho jaane ka time hai. Tumne sunna jo meine kaha!

Neil: Theek hai nahi ulajta! Jaisa tum chaho!

Ragini: Please chalo!

While both Ragini and Neil were walking away holding each other's hand like a couple!

Gunda 2: Dekho Hero woh to darpok nikla. Dekho kaise darr kar ja raha hai.

Now Ragini is angry as those Gundas has called Neil coward. She can bardastofy anything on her but won't allow anyone insult Neil. She says "How dare you to call him Darpok! You all will pay for this.

Gunda 3: We are followers of the MP of this area. Even police can't even dare to touch us.

Ragini in fit of rage dials a number for help but Neil snatches the phone and disconnects it as it would have landed Karan in trouble.

Ragini: Neil! Please let me call my ACP uncle.

Neil rues his own luck as Karan has paid wrong persons for the job.

Neil: Let me talk them out!

Ragini: What! Yeh log baat cheet se toh sunkar nahi jaane wale. Nahi sunne to Kya karoge, Fight karoge"

As expected, Neil responds "Yes woh bhi karunga hua toh! Mein kya itna bhi nahi kar sakte woh bhi tumhare liye Ragini!😉

A Shy Ragini😳 puts her hand on Neil's broad shoulders and says "Nahi aisi koi zaroorat nahi, mein to bas yuhi bol rahi thi.

Noticing that Ragini is feeling shy on his *itna bhi nahi kar sakta woh bhi tumhare liye* salvo, Neil replies "Tum meri fikr mat karo. Yeh to aj gaye mere haatho se!"

Ragini (Irked): Mujhe ghussa mat dilao😡. Meine jo keh diya so keh diya, tum nahi ladoge bas. Chalo ab yaha se, End of Topic!

Neil: Magar Ragini!

Ragini (Threatens😡): I hate people who argue with me. You want to be in that list?

Neil: Meri itni himmat!😕

Ragini: Good Boy! Ab chalo!

Again while both were walking away!

Gunda 3: Kash hum bhi iska haat pakad paate!

Neil: Ragini!

Ragini: No Neil. You will not fight them!

Neil puts his finger on to Ragini's lips "Shhh... Kuch na kaho!😉

Ragini (Blushed😳): Kuch bhi na kahu?

"Sirf suno Ragini. Us gunde ne kaha woh tumhara haat pakadega. Tumhara haat toh sirf mein hi pakad sakta hun. Hain na?" responds Neil with a wink!😉

Unable to handle Neil's salvo, Ragini snoops her eyes down😳 and says "Tum toh kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho Neil"

Neil: Mein toh bachpan se aisa hi hoon.😉

At the other end, having enough of Neira dreamy song sequence! One of them murmurs "Yeh dono toh hamme bhaav bhi nahi dere.

Gunda 2: Ab kya karre!

Gunda 3: Boss! Kuch toh karo😆

Both Neil and Ragini goes into dream song sequence😆 of a classy song from 1942: A love story😉

Kuchh na kaho kuchh bhi na kaho

Kya kehna hai kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai tumko pata hai
Samay ka ye pal thamsa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon
Bas ek tum ho
Kuchh na kaho kuchh bhi na kaho

Both Neil and Ragini are brought back to reality by Gunda's Boss screams "Hello Romance Khatam hogaya hai toh hume bhi value do"

Irked that the Dreamy song sequence is shattered, An Annoyed Neil says "Aatha Maaji satak li"😆

Ragini: Theek mein ja rahi hun. Lado jao😡

Neil (Smart): Meine kab kaha k mein ladne wala hun.

Ragini: Mujhe Marathi aati hi. You said Mera Dimaag satak gaya hai.😆

Neil (Embarrassed😕): I mean thoda dara kar aata hun.

Ragini: kaise darao ge!

Neil: Watch me!

Neil says "Aae Loafer idhar aa!😆

Gunda Boss with a lump comes toward Neil.

Neil: Kuch zyada nahi bol rahe ho bhai paise liye baad bhi. Sirf whistle karne k liye bola tha.

Gunda Boss: Kya! Kaise paise. Yeh toh hamara roz k kaam hai

Neil: I mean mere dost Karan ne tumhe paise diye hai yeh kaam k liye.

Gunda Boss: Kaun Karan!

Neil: Aarey woh Mota sa😆. Face dekhe toh peetna dil bolna apka.

Gunda Boss: Mujhe kya Malum kaun hai woh.

Neil: Oh I get it. You guys are actual gundas. I guess I need to bash you all up for teasing my future wifey.

Gunda Boss: Tu hame maarega. Yeh dekh meri body!

Neil: Damnn!!

Ragini intervenes and says "Sheee! Neil dekho iski body bhi iske face k jaisi black hai"

Neil: Lagta hai tumhe pasand hai woh.😆

Ragini: Yuckk! Not at all.

Neil: Mujhe isse peetna hai.

Ragini: Tum nahi ladoge!

Neil: Ragini meine ek baar koi commitment kardi toh phir mein apne ap ki bhi nahi sunta.

Ragini: Suchaa bad filmy dialogue Neil in this situation.

Neil: Sorry!

Ragini: I am Jealous now.😡

Neil: Y?

Ragini: He took off his tees to show off his body. So you need take off yours!

Neil: What. M... Mein...

Ragini: Stop stammering... Take off your tees else I will?😆

Neil: Tumhara Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai Ragini😕

Gunda Boss: Hehehehe

Ragini: Look he is laughing on you😡

In competition, Neil takes off his tees too and the safely hidden 6 Packs/Abs + hard biceps😉 are out in the open. Ragini is shocked in amazement just like college girls as they all have never seen such hard and a perfect body before!

After noticing that Ragini is staring at his body, Neil covers his modesty with both hands and says "Ragini control your eyes! I am embarrassed

Ragini: Sorry!

Neil: Kya Sorry! Because of you all those Girls! They are drooling all over me

Ragini looks at the other girls and says "Sheee Aj Kal k Ladkiyaan bhi na. Neil Tees pehen lo

Neil: Ab semi naked kardiya tumhne mujhe. Ab kya pehenu😆

Ragini: Mujhe ghussa mat dilao.

Neil: Yeh kya har baat par ghussa ho jati ho.

Ragini: Meine aisi hi hoon.

Neil (Winks😉): I know how to cool you off. But first this black beauty has to be knocked off!

Ragini (Blushes): Wait😳

Neil: What now.

Ragini: Khayal se!

Gunda Boss tries to intervene in the Neira convo only to take a Punch *Gob smacked* from Neil. The Result *Unconscious*😆

Neil: Aarey Ragini! yeh to ek haat ka mehmaan nikla.

A proud Ragini hugs Neil and kisses him on cheek in excitement.

Neil (Winks): Ek bas nahi hua.

Ragini (Pink Cheeks): Sharam nahi aati. Lo ab tees pehen lo aur chalo .

While both were on the way to class, Neil is again in the center of all appreciations, whistles, claps, starry eyes & he is so macho comments.

Ragini (Irked): Yeh Ladkiyaan bhi na. Suchha... Thodi bhi sharm nahi hai.

Neil (Smart): Aarey yeh toh in sab ka pyaar hai. tum kyu jealous ho rahi ho...

Ragini (Irked): Shut up Neil. Khamoshi se chalo class ko.

@ In class:

After for a while, Pam enters along with towing R.K

Pam: Ragini my honey. You are fine na. I just heard that some road side romeo's teased you.

Ragini: Relax Pam! I am fine. Your brother saved me. Thank you Neil.

Neil: You are welcome!

R.K: Ragini you are fine?

Pam: R.K Of course she is! My Bhai is the best

R.K: I am also best for you Pam!

Pam (Trade Mark): Shut up R.K!

R.K: Pam aise gunde mujhe kyu nahi milte. Tumhare liye mein bhi unse fight kar sakta hun

Pam: R.K mujhe tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai. I am well trained in self defence!

R.K: Acha! Kal cockroach ko dekh kar self defence kyu yaad nahi aaya.

Pam: Cockroach toh hum girl's ka traditional fear hai. Saamne koi mard aaya to I can beat him up.

Neil: R.K tu kya yeh sab lekar baith gaya. Karan kaha hai. Ab tak woh college kyu nahi aaya.

Pam: Aarey haan! Dimpy bhi nahi aayi.

R.K: woh to subah hi nikal gaya. Kyu?

Neil (Angry at the mess up): Nahi bas aise hi. Bahut din hogaye karan ko dakshina nahi dekhar.

****************************************************************************

After a while, Professor Khurana enters and starts to take the class as per his schedule but Neil and Ragini are lost in their own world of exchanging notes.

Neira Notes Convo:😃

Ragini Note: Neil *I am feeling bored*

Neil's Note: Kyu?

Ragini's Note: Pata nahi, let's play antakshiri*

Neil Note: U kidding me! Mein aur Antakshiri. No way.

Ragini Note: Yes. Tum kheloge.

Neil Note: Bilkul bhi nahi. Meri ek image hai.

Ragini Note: Mujhe No sunne ki adat nahi hai.

Neil: Ragini! Kisi ko pata lagya to sab hasenge mere upar.

Ragini Note: Mujhe ghussa mat dilao.

Neil Note: Aarey yeh kya baat hui. Har baat par dhamki. Kisi k himmat nahi hui mere se aise baat karni.

Ragini Note: Meine ki hai na Himmat.

Neil Note: Do not act cute with me Ragini.

Ragini Note: Do I need to?

Meanwhile... The other Love Story...

RK: Pam tumhare bhai ko dekho. Wo Ragini se pyaar wale notes exchange kar raha hai.

Pam: Tum itna sure kaise ho sakte. It could be about the lecture also?

R.K: Lol! Neil aur padhai😆

Pam: Don't insult my Bhai!😡

R.K: Aarey I am not insulting him. I am highlighting his talent. Chalo hum dono bhi pyaar bhaare notes exchange karte like Ragini and Neil😆

Pam: Shut Up R.K. Mujhe koi interest nahi hai.😆

Back to Neira...

Neil Note: Ek condition par khelunga.

Ragini Note: Kya!

Neil Note: Winner Wish milegi!😉

Ragini Note: You are suchaa flirty character.😳

Neil Note: Flirt nahi kar raha hun.

Ragini Note: Chal jhutte!😆

Neil Note: Aarey dil k cheer k dekho tumhara hi naam hoga.

Ragini Note: You are so filmy.

Neil Note: Sirf tumhare liye. Ab bol bhi do.

Ragini: "I"...😳

Neil: Haan Haan Aage!😉

Ragini: Khurana

Neil (Shocked): Kya tum khurana se...

Ragini: Shut up... I mean Professor Khurana is coming towards us.

Neil: Is khurana ki toh 🤬

Ragini: Sheee Neil...😡

Neil: Sorry Ragini. Slip of Tongue😕

Professor Khurana interrupts and says "I am explaining a very important lesson over here and you both! Particularly you Handsome Young Man, you still behaving like a road side Romeo! Staring at her instead of concentrating at what I am teaching.

Ragini: No sir! Actually I was taking notes from him.

Professor Khurana looks at the pile of notes strewn below and "Oh ab samjha! Kaunse Notes exchange ho rahe the.😆

To be continued...

Edited by NeiraHolics - 9 years ago

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