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loveleen3

@loveleen3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Sukhi,

This was so so amazing! And so like our Nachiket and Ragini! <3 <3

Agla part bhi likhio please... Please...

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Sukhi,
This was so so amazing! And so like our Nachiket and Ragini! <3 <3
Agla part bhi likhio please... Please...

Thanks a lot Loveleen!! 😃😃

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: neiralove
FAINT
(thank you! 😳)

Thank you for fainting 😉😃

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Filza.
LOVED IT!! Too good. the longing along with the awkwardness & discomfort, so very real.. And so Nachiket & Ragini..

I really want to see something similar to this one in the show as well.

Thanks so much for this!

Thank you so much dear 😳😳😳

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
And with this masterpiece you just proved why you should replace NB at any cost!

Hahahahah thank you thank you :D

If only!

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angel81

@angel81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

we have some fine writers in this forum

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: angel81
we have some fine writers in this forum

Thank you, we sure do 😳

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ronitfan

I would LOVE to do a series on it but I know I am really lazy and will end up disappointing you guys 😆
Thank you so much for all your lovely words.. I so want some sensitivity from them other than the usual verbal punches that they will be throwing at each other in the daytime.. I wish they show their softer side when they're alone.. if not to each other, then just confess to themselves.. 😳

You could never disappoint, you write with such heart and understanding of the characters. Please continue since you have more to say!

I have hope that they will slowly soften towards each other and one day despair over having to lead separate lives again. It would be so wonderful to see them fall in love again, since we were cheated the first time around.

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Thank you for fainting 😉😃

Sorry Sukhi Di, I had to take a little time to recover from this 😉

Nachiket in a tiny little towel 😳 I really needed that image 😳 😉

Ok, but seriously, this was just so gorgeous! I loved the little details, like the stray hair on Ragini's face when she slept, his concern about disturbing her sleep, her freaking out about him being her husband now...the magic of your writing is really in all the effort you put into the little things that count so much ❤️

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

You could never disappoint, you write with such heart and understanding of the characters. Please continue since you have more to say!

I have hope that they will slowly soften towards each other and one day despair over having to lead separate lives again. It would be so wonderful to see them fall in love again, since we were cheated the first time around.

I will definitely try.. thanks a lot for your encouragement 😳

And that slow process of rekindling their love.. oh.. if done well, it is going to be an absolute treat..