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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Finally read all parts at one go...

Absolutely loved the explanation given in first part as to how a mother protects while a father pushes a baby to stand up and learn. Wonderful to way to convey how both his parents were right and its ok if he failed..one can learn.

Aman is a much sensible and likeable character her. Loved his explanation and acceptance of the fact that Ragini's life is in her kids and he can never be a father to them. Also the last bit of Nachiket wanting to give her space...very well thought! 👏

"Tum bahut cute dikhti ho. Especially when you spin in circles like a puppy."😆 This was so cute. I loved her reaction too. And Dr.Nachiket flirting khule aam..how cool is that. Its actually cute to see parents to grown up kids behave like teenagers and flirt discreetly.


Wonderful ankhon ankhon mein communication happening. Also loved the way just in a sentence Nishi and Jiggy's issue is solved. Oh and the smoking hot romance that followed that tooo in a train!!! 😉. From wife to mother to wife again. Do I love this Ragini more? 😳 And Nachiket is ❤️😳
Also I liked how Arav and Suhani were swapped with the other parent and yet it was all same.

This is fun...Train mein kya kya kar rahe hai ye dono? Imagine kids teasing you and you blush? 😆 Love the way he walks after her knowing she hasn't eaten. So much care!! *sigh*

Romance in coupe and the little date - perfect! Full marks for that 😳👏

And the beautiful train journey ends so well. Loved the way she curled up to him and slept peacefully...its so true all you need is that person to be comfortable and nothing else matters.

The whole thing had an amazing flow and beautiful moments between the two. Why are you ending it? Please do continue. The two need to get married and the marriage can a lengthy affair with lot of moments the two can sneak 😃

Wonderful! Thank you for writing. And sorry for a late and long reply. 😆


Curious! Thank you so much for such a beautiful and lengthy comment! Your work is one of my favorites on the forum, so this means so much to me coming from you! 😳 😊 Gosh, I don't even know how to reply to this, I'm blushing like hell 😳

Hmm, marriage you say? Let's see... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

What?!!?

This was the end?!
I was so not ready for it :(

But thanks for making it so beautiful! Lovely lovely lovely!


I warned you! The train station arrived and everyone got off 😆

Thank you Sukhi di! 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shikha...I demand a new story!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Please write more more more :)


You too?! Eeps!

I'll try, but no promises 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

Shikha...I demand a new story!


Narges...I demand a new OS! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove


You too?! Eeps!

I'll try, but no promises 😛


A try is all I ask because I know you'll write 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou

@Tiana

A true fan! De taali 😃


Oops, missed this one:

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove


Narges...I demand a new OS! 😆


You being the younger to me, you have my aashirwaad. I am here to guide you on the right path, iss liye you go first phir dekhte hai 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove


Oops, missed this one:


What the hell does this mean... not allowed on my comments 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan


A try is all I ask because I know you'll write 😃


Awww! 😳 🤗

Narges--are you looking?!
Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago

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