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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: hamna19khan
It's beautiful. Love to see the maturity your'e displaying in the characters :)
keep updating regularly.
It calms me down a bit after watching IKNMP's stressful episodes :)

Thank u for reading and liking and just writing how the charcters can be played. Next update will be up tomz.

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

I like this😊. Nachiket told Ragini about Rupali. This completely makes sense. But nothing in the show makes sense right now. I agree with hamna19khan, this is how the show must go. Thank you for this update😊

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney
I like this😊. Nachiket told Ragini about Rupali. This completely makes sense. But nothing in the show makes sense right now. I agree with hamna19khan, this is how the show must go. Thank you for this update😊

Just some communication that all it takes next update up soon.

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Part 9

Car
They dropped the kids off at school. They were on the way to the hospital when nachiket turned off onto a road full of beautiful mansions "nachiket what we doing here" "its a suprise" he pulled into a beautiful drive that lead to massive mansion ragini thought i have seen this house before. Nachiket parked up and helped ragini out of the car. "Nachiket who lives here" "we do" "what???. Remember when we were dating and u saw this house and said it was ur dream house i told u one day i would buy it for u. He got keys out and gave them to ragini.

New House
"Ragini open the door to ur new house" ragini opened it and walked in it was absolutely stunning. She was just stunned she looked at nachiket he was standing and just looking at ragini. "Nachiket this is stunning. "So u like it ragini" "i love it" well good because i have already closed the deal. Cum on i will show u around. Nachiket took ragini all around the house slowly showing her the kitchen,rooms and study downstaires then he took her upstairs showed her the master bedroom "this is our room he said its got its own bathroom" "its beautiful nachiket" he then showed her the kids rooms "this is nishis room, this is ranbirs room and this the twins room u know if we have two boys or two girls if we have one of each they can have seperate rooms. Ragini just looked at him he had thought of everything she loved him sooo much. "Ragini" "its beautiful nachiket u thought of everything" he walked upto her and said if we have more kids there is plenty of rooms she hit him and said let these cum first he just laughed. "Oh i forgot to show u something i will show u on the way out". They went outside and around the corner there was a guesthouse. "This ragini" "who is this for" "its for maa,badi naani and sunny tai they can stay here or in the house i just thought the guesthouse would be quieter for them". Ragini was just blowen away he had absolutely thought of everything. "Nachiket i am lost for words u are amazing u just the best" she kissed him i love u soo much. "Anything for my jaan"

Hospital
Ragini u sit in my cabin i will not be long. Dolly came in ma'am do u want anything to drink "no thank you" ragini was looking around the cabin and she saw pictures of the kids but none of her. Nachiket came back lets go ragini. "Why do u not have any pictures of me nachiket" i do ragini he showed her the computer it had her as a background pic. "Only i have the right to look at u" she laughed soo filmy but made her feel so special.

Doctors office.
The doctor came in how are u ragini "i am ok just some pain and things" lets do your scan. The scan was done everything was fine with the babies. While leaving nachiket asked ragini what she wanted to do. "Can we go shopping please" "ragini do we have to"please nachiket ok. Nachiket hated shopping but would he was not letting ragini go on her own.

Car
While driving to the shopping mall nachikets phone rang its was rupail he put the phone on speaker. "Hi nachiket how are u" "i am fine thx" "i got my test results today can we meet up so u can look at them?" "Rupail drop them off with my PA and i will look at them tomz and let u know" "why not today" "because i am spending the day with ragini i will speak to u tomz ok bye" "bye". He ended the call ragini looked at him and just put her hand in his hand.

Home
What u doing ragini? I am going to make dinner no u are not the doctor said u have to rest anyway i have ordered the food.
"Papa i am hungry" it will not be long nishi. Go get ranbir papa has something to show u quickly. Nishi ran and got ranbir. Nachiket sat on the sofa ranbir on one side and nishi on one side he got his phone out and was showing them the new house and their room. " papa can i have my room pink please" "course u can beta anything u want" "papa i want my room full of car pictures" " of course ranbir anything " papa what colour is ur room going u will have to ask ur mama that. All the while ragini was watching this scene her beautiful family nachiket was a wonderful husband and a fantastic father.

THREE MONTH LATER

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Ooh, I just love Nachiket's bonding with the kids! And the way he put Rupali's phone on speaker to gain back Ragini's trust was so caring

I like reading your work because you do such a great job with all the small details--great job Shabz!

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: neiralove
Ooh, I just love Nachiket's bonding with the kids! And the way he put Rupali's phone on speaker to gain back Ragini's trust was so caring

I like reading your work because you do such a great job with all the small details--great job Shabz!

It was to show that he will not hide anything from her. I think a few more parts then finish this

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Hamm.

@hamna19khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

It's perfect, the bond which Nachiket and kids share is amazing and the efforts he's doing to gain Ragini's trust is superb.

update soon :)

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Part 10

THREE MONTHS LATER

Rupail was out of there lifes for now nachiket had treated her.
Ragini was now 8 months pregnant and struggling she was on strict bed rest to keep her BP down. Ragini did not do bed rest but she had no choice. They had moved into the new house but at the min ragini and nachiket were downstairs only beacause ragini struggled on the stairs.

Early morning 6.30am
Nachiket was up and ready they kids were having breakfast he had breakfast and asked sunny tai to drop the kids off at school. Kids go say bye to mama kids ran off they came back and gave their papa a kiss goodbye. Nachiket saw maa taking breakfast for ragini and stopped her i will take it maa.

Bedroom
Ragini was up and sitting in bed. Nachiket walked in with breakfast. "Morning ragini he put the tray down and gave her a kiss. "Morning Nachiket" here breakfast. He sat down next to her she held his hand "nachiket do u have to go to work today? "Yes ragini whats wrong are u not well" "no i just want to spend some time with u" " i will try and finish early today ok". He kissed her and kissed her stomach as well and off he went.

Hospital
His PA came in and told him that he only had paperwork and a couple of dept meetings. He told her that he would have the meetings this morning and take the paperwork home.

Afternoon
Nachiket came home early to spend time with ragini he knew she was bored and in pain she had really struggled with this pregancy. He walked in the house and saw sunny tai asked if ragini was wake she said yes.

Bedroom
He went in and saw maa sat talking to ragini "nachiket u are home early" maa said "ur daugther ordered me this morning" ragini gave him a deathly stare he laughed and sat down next to her. "Do u want food beta" "no maa not yet" i will leave u two alone she got up and went and closed the door. Nachiket went to kiss ragini and she just turned her face away i was joking ragini u can go back to work if its that important ragini said. Nachiket loved her more when she got angry. Fine i will take this ice cream back aswell ice cream ragini had such cravings for it. They spend a lovely afternoon together just the two of them talking and just being with each other.

Night 1am
Ragini got up she was in a lot of pain more then before something was wrong. She went to the bathroom. Oh god she was bleeding and the pain was getting worse. She got up and went to the bathroom door and shouted "nachiket wake up please nachiket" he woke up groggley looking at her "ragini whats wrong" " i need to go the hospital i am bleeding" he shot up and looked at her she was just about to fall he grabbed her and made her sit on the bed turned and put a t-shirt on and his loafers on he went to go out "nachiket were u going" "ragini i am going to get the car out then i will come back and get u" "don't go plz" "ragini i have to i will be back in a min" he went out and woke sunny tai and told her to sit with ragini and he would be back. He came back after getting car out. Ragini was crying now she was in that much pain. "Ragini cum on lets go" he held one arm and sunny tai held the other one. They were cuming out of the room when maa came out of her room maa we taking ragini to hospital can u look after the kids i will ring u. They put ragini in the car sunny tai sat in the back with ragini nachiket drove as fast as he could but carefully. He rung dimpy and asked her to cum to the hospital.

Hospital
Nachiket parked up and opened the back door sunny tai got out "ragini cum on give me ur hand" "nachiket i can't walk i am in too much pain" "wait i will go get a wheelchair" he ran in and got a wheelchair. They put her in the wheelchair and wheeled her in.

Hospital Room
Ragini was on the bed nachiket sat next to her holding her hand. The doctor came in and started doing a scan. She looked worried " whats wrong" nachiket asked. Can i speak to u outside Mr Khanna. He went outside "your wife needs a C-Section now to deliver the babies because one of the babies has a decreased heartbeat we need to deliver now" "she is only 8 months pregnant can u not wait a few more weeks".

Precap
Nachiket sat outside operation room.