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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fourth part

Car
Nachiket was driving to the hospital all he could see was ragini's tears and her questions swirled in his head he drove fast he had caused these tears and this doubt in his ragini and he would clear it no matter what he could not live without his ragini. He reached the hospital and straight to his cabin and grabbed the file that would clear everything. He got back in his car and drove home.

Kids room
Ragini was sat looking at her kids sleeping and crying what would she tell them what would she tell the one who was not even in this world yet. Nachiket loved his kids just not their mother. Just then she heard the car he was back. She got up and went into the living room.

Living room
Nachiket stood and stared at ragini who had been crying since he left. He walked upto her but she took steps back. "Ragini listen to me please i have all the answers to all ur questions" she just looked at him "please ragini just hear me out then whatever u decided i will accept. She sat down he sat next to her and opened the file he went thru everything that he had been working on. U see ragini its been work that has kept me away from u. I have only been sleeping in the study because i didn't want to disturb u. U are tired from looking after the kids all day. I only met rupail last night because her boyfriend ronnie is the owner of the hospital chain that i want to buy. Ragini was crying now how did she doubt his love for her "Ragini i only love u and will always only love u. U and the kids are my life. Ragini ran into the bedroom she was sobbing. Nachiket came in.

Bedroom
He walked upto her and put his hand on her shoulder she just turned and grabbed him and he took her in a bear hug he kept kissing the top of her head. Finally he broke the hug and cupped her face in his hands and wiped her tears and said "ragini stop crying please u know i hate tears in ur eyes please. "Nachiket i am so sorry i doubted ur love its just that rupail is more beautiful then me and i am not the easist person to live with."Ragini u are the most beautiful woman in the world u just have to see thru my eyes and i promise on my life i will never make u doubt my love again saying this he kissed her. He was her nachiket now and forever. She had got all the answers from him he was hers and only hers. She looked at him and said i will be back in a minute he said ok. She walked into the kitchen and got the doctors report out of her bag now was the time to tell him the good news. Nachiket he turned around and saw ragini standing there with a envelope in her hand he walked upto her and she handed it to him "whats this ragini?? As he opened it he saw it was a doctors report he read it not once but twice and looked at her "ragini this he was speechless when "i found out yesterday" nachiket put his hand on her stomach and then dropped to his knees and kissed her stomach ragini didn't need to ask if he was happy she could see the happiness. He got up and hugged her and kissed her he said "thank u ragini u have made me that happiest man in the world again. They both sat down on the bed how "far along are u ragini" two months ragini answered who else knows nachiket asked she said no-one he got the phone out and what u doing nachiket i am phoning everyone telling them our good news. Its 11pm nachiket and everyone will be a asleep they can wake up for our good news right ragini. She grabbed the phone and said i don't want anyone knowing till at least i am four months please nachiket. He looked at her and agreed. He closer and gave her another kiss and said ab sao jai u need ur rest. As ragini moved to bathroom she turned to see nachiket looking at the report again and smiling. As ragini went into the bathroom nachiket promised himself make up for the hurt he caused ragini and to make her his once again.

Next morning
Ragini woke up first it was only 6am she had half hour before the kids would be up she turned around to see nachiket fast asleep she looked down and smiled seeing his protective hand on her stomach she lifted it careful not to wake him. This was the best sleep for weeks for both of them they were together. She got up and kissed him on his forehead he sighed and into the bathroom she went. She was feeling a bit queasy morning sickness uggh how she hated it. She had a shower and then went to get the kids up.

Kids Room
Ranbir, Nishi time to get up. time for school neither moved.
Any comments and suggestions to improve are greatly received thank u for reading. Any suggestions for names aswell please.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Any suggestions for a name for this FF?? Please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabz,
I read it right now.

I loved this part. Am so glad that N took the initiative to tell R the truth about Rupali. And glad that R listened.

Am so happy to see them happy for their unborn child. That's the exuberance you would expect a couple to show, not the lame one that we were forced to watch.

You could name the FF - In Love 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go. Amazing
Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Shabz,

I read it right now.

I loved this part. Am so glad that N took the initiative to tell R the truth about Rupali. And glad that R listened.

Am so happy to see them happy for their unborn child. That's the exuberance you would expect a couple to show, not the lame one that we were forced to watch.

You could name the FF - In Love 😃


Thank u for liking it. I wanted to how that a bit of understanding can go a long way. Love the name thank u. I have a few more parts to go hope it does not feel like i am babbling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

Read all the parts in one go. Amazing

Loved it.


Thank u for reading and liking it. Next update will be up tonight
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Shabz, this is great! The beauty of your writing is in how well you capture the turmoil of emotions running through both Nachiket and Ragini's heads. Don't ever doubt yourself! 😊
I really enjoyed how Nachiket made an effort to clear Ragini's misunderstanding instead of letting his ego get in the way. If only the show Nachiket/Ragini could understand this...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is beautiful 👏

Ragini u are the most beautiful woman in the world u just have to see thru my eyes

This line shows how much he loves Ragini... Loved the update... Now what will happen?? Waiting to know.. Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fifth part

Kids Room
No one moved so ragini went to ranbir and kissed him on his forehead "cum on beta time to get up" "no mama i want to sleep"cum on beta u have school cum on good boy" ranbir sat up half asleep. Now it was nishi's turn "cum on nishi time to wake up" "no mama". Ragini looked at her daugther she did look tired these were her first full days at school. She got nishi in her lap and carefully kissed her forehead and woke her up. Ranbir i will give u a shower. Nishi u sit here then u can have a shower ok "i want papa" "papa is still sleeping wait till he wakes up ok" next min nishi was off the bed and running to wake her papa up. Ragini was too late to stop her.

Bedroom
Nachiket was fast asleep when suddenly he got a thump in his stomach he woke up to see his angel nishi sitting on him with a great big simle on her face. "Morning papa" "morning beta he grabbed her and gave her a maasive kiss she started laughing. "I am sorry she woke u up nachiket cum on nishi time for a shower then school cum on" nishi just shook her head saying no "ragini i will get her ready its ok" only nachiket could handle this little madam. Cum on nishi ragini watched as her handsome hubby got their daugther ready how did she ever doubt this man.

Kitchen
Ranbir,nishi quickly finish ur breakfast. Nachiket walked in looking sexy as ever in a light blue suit. He saw ragini rushing about and grabbed her. "Ragini slow down" she knew why he was saying that. Nachiket what do u want for breakfast. "Nothing just a black coffee. i have a early meeting i will eat at the hospital cum on kids papa will drop u off cum". Kids went to get their bags.He walked upto ragini and said make sure u eat something and kissed her "i love u" i am so luck ragini thought.

Hospital
Nachiket walked in his PA was standing waiting for him. "Sir ur cases for today"thank u before this i need to make some personal calls ok. He went into the cabin and dialled dimpys number he needed a favour.
The phone rang karan answered "hi karan how are u" "i am fine how are u nachiket fine thx is dimpy there need to ask her a favour" of course. Karan handed dimpy the phone "hi nachiket how are u" " fine thx dimpy listen would the kids be able to stay at ur place tonight please i want to suprise ragini" "of course that is ok we will pick them up from school ok" "thanks a lot dimpy i owe u one". Next phone call to maa he needed to get ragini out of the house.

Hospital
Nachiket was busy dealing with his cases all day. His phone rang it was ragini "hi nachiket are u busy""never busy for u" she smiled listen maa has rung i need to go to her house i might be late back can u pick kids up please. Sure ragini i will pick the kids up and then pick u up ok. First part of this plan done now to second part. He rang his PA and asked anything else to do she said u have a meeting with ronnie nachiket said ring and pospone till tomorrow. He had a lot of making up to do.

Home
Nachiket came home early he needed to set everything up. The doorbell rang it was the flower people he told them exactly what he wanted they started their work. A few hours later everything was done all he had to do was go get ragini.

Maas house.
The doorbell rang it was nachiket sunny tai opened the door. "Hi saab" hi sunny tai he went up and touched maas feet and badi naani how are u beta. "I am ok maa" ragini appeared are u ready ragini yes where are the kids. They are at dimpys house we will pick them up on the way ok. They said their byes got in car.

Car
Ragini was staring out the window nachiket was looking at her. "U ok ragini whats wrong""nothing nachiket just thinking how lucky i am "he laughed cause u lucky u have me as a hubby she gently punched him first time in weeks his ragini was smiling he made another promise to never let this smile go. He turned towards home when ragini said we have to pick kids up nachiket. They can stay at dimpys tonight ragini but nachiket its fine ragini. She looked at him he was upto something.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is very nice... Loved the update 👏 . Now for Nachiket's surprise... I am waiting 😊

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