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Amazing work Azka! What writing really! I cannot explain it to you that how much I loved this. Not only this chapter, but the previous as well!
This chapter... Kya kahu? You've left me speechless. Such awesome scenes you have created. My mouth was wide open while reading that breakfast scene...What an idea! I just loved how he was checking for her expressions after every little movement on her bare back ;) He is so naughty! Was purposely taking extra time to do the needful;) I must have read that scene at least 6 time till now.. Till now! I'm going and reading that again :D And that last few scenes along with the flashbacks were awesome! I could imagine it all and trust me it gave immense pleasure. This makes us realise that how great potential this storyline had..So many things to show and they're stuck with showing crap..! Khair, let it be! We're lucky to have you Azka!
Words woven in a lovely way, quick and delicate wit and a lyrical elegance that makes the reader enjoy every single sentence with pleasure! Such freshness and power Azka, that you feel drunk and beaten up but still wanting to leave your own world and enter the one you created ;)
A special thanks to you for dedicating this part to me😳 Believe me, I'm your fan now. And I'm not praising because this is a special dedication to me. Any IKNMP fan who lives to read gorgeous writing on NeiRa will lick this and sleep with it between their legs😉
This forum is blessed with the best writers!
