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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Oh Wow this was just perfect... 😊
I was smiling the whole time, beautifully written...πŸ˜ƒ

Yes they can only find solace in each others arm, there is no better place for them to let their heart out


Oh come on, Ragini. Tum tou aise kehrahi ho as if his presence doesn't affect you.
only his presence can effect her completely and even she can't deny this fact...

and the Flashback was more than perfect... πŸ‘πŸ‘

there is no one more impatient than Nachiket πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

This was Superb.. :)
Please update the next part soon :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92


Quite a stiff competition in reserving comments...πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Feedback time in Sanameyyy style...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Hello everyone! I'm back with a short update. This is the night stealer as it came after a very long timeπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

Cool Sanamey😎 !!!!! Whatta short update. Loved it totally.

The inside sight of the room horrified him. Nishi laid almost lifeless on the hospital bed and Ragini sitting at the foot of the bed, crying silently making no sound. But Nachiket could hear her cries. He composed himself again and walked to her.

When he put a hand on her shoulder, he heard her whisper his name.

Ragini opened her eyes and stood straight turning towards him. She instantly hugged him and let the tears flow.

Nachiket hugged her back. He tried hard not to break down but he couldn't help himself. Tears started flowing from his eyes too and they both poured their hearts out in the form of tears.

There they both found the solace in each other's arms. The inside war they both were going through after finding about their daughter's suicide was coming to an end.

Quite emotional one loved it😊 I so wish to see this in the show

"Konsi shirt doon yeh wali ya phir yeh wali?" She asks him holding his two Tees.

"Yeh wali dedo." Nachiket points towards one of the Tees.

"Yeh lo. And where's the towel?"

"Hoga naa wahin kahin. Rakha tha meine."

Ragini finds it and gives it to him when they both realize and feel awkward.

"I am sorry woh...tum thode confuse..lagrahe the" Ragini stammers guiltily and steps aside.

Awesomely scripted, Simple and the best😊.Such a traditional Wife Ragini is in this FF onlyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Show ka tou pata nahiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Sanamey the Flash back was so awesome. My special partπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

Ragini had her eyes shut when she felt Nachiket's presence. She didn't open her eyes. Nachiket stood above her. He was awestruck. Looking at her face; relaxed and carefree, he fell in love with her all over again. It seemed like the sea breeze was washing away all her stress and worries and he became relieved that he insisted a date on the beach. Superb Neira at their best in the FF.

She slid her arm in his and took a sip. Nachiket couldn't help but stare at her without blinking his eyes.

"Yahan kitna sukoon hai naa. Samader ki thandi hawa..aur lehron ki ye awaaz.. Thank you Nachiket for bringing me here." She said looking at him lovingly.

Nachiket smiled. He grabbed her by her waist and squeezed her closer (OpportunistπŸ˜†). Ragini didn't protest but Nachiket could see her cheeks turning red. He utilized the opportunity and snaked both his arms around her waist and pulled her closer to him so that her back was against his chest and he rested his chin on her shoulder. Ragini relaxed herself in his embrace.

Quite romantic and very lovely. Wah wah. Neira chemistry at its bestπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


"Kyun ki tumhara bharosa nahin kahiin bhi shuru hojate ho. Public ho ya private place tumse control nahin hota" She said teasingly.🀣 SuperπŸ‘πŸ‘

"Acchhaa.." He squeezed her closer and kissed her on the cheeks which were turning crimson red now. He could feel the shivers spiraling down her spine. Ragini's reaction always turned him on.

I am so grinning on this as Nachiket ka koi bharosa nahiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

"Shaadi ke baad 24X7 sirf mere saath.. Sirf tum aur mein akaile ghar mein. Aur koi nahin" He winked.

Ragini blushed at the thought of that. Her cheeks flustered. But she managed to answer him, "Aur kaam par kaun jayega, Mr. Nachiket Khanna"

"Jiski Mrs. Nachiket Khanna jaisi biwi ho woh kaam par kaise ja sakta hai. Meine to soch liya hai ek puri cricket team banaunga. Weise tum kya kehti ho kitne bacche hone chahiye?" He asked her curiously.

No option but to say that this is so Kamina Nachiket🀣

Ragini thought for a while, "Umm..chalo 3 kids."

"3 na baba. 4 hi bache honge!"

"3!" Ragini repeated.

"4"

"3"

"We will see, Ms. Patel" Nachiket winked and looked into her eyes.

This is cracked me up🀣 and the winner of course is NachiketπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The Hospital scene was an emotional + Hard-hitting oneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ but i am a sucker for the romantic and cute scenesπŸ˜‰πŸ˜› so the Flashback certainly is the night stealer and certainly killed it in an awesome mannerπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

You are an amazing talent sanameyyy, thanks for such a wonderful update. I totally enjoyed it like every one over here.

Hats off to youπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘








Edited by MAK56 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
That was awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘
The first part was emotional and the flashback was sweet😳

The cabin convo was cute... I sooo loved Ragini giving him his clothes and the awkwardness😳


"Nothing. Bas, I was just wondering..6 years and 4 kids. Impressive."
This is much better than NB's 4 years and 4 kids theoryπŸ˜† I still have a confusion when I watch the show... When the show started Ranbir was around 21 and Nishi 18... That means they have an age gap of three years... And Nishi must be 1 year old when they separatedπŸ˜•...But the little Nishi they showed was around 3 years during the time of seperation... Then Ranbir must be adopted or NeiRa were together before marriage... According to Ragini she was married at the age of 19... If Nishi was 3 during separation... Then Ranbir was 6 years old... That means he was born before they married when Ragini was just 17πŸ˜• Quite mind-bogglingπŸ˜†

The flashback was awesome and NachiketπŸ˜†πŸ˜†He is just too muchπŸ˜†Well he got what he wantedπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰


"Thoda sabar kariye, Mr. Nachiket Khanna. Ek hafte baad Miss Ragini Patel aap ki Mrs. Nachiket Khanna hojaengi."
This was a cute dialogue😳 Loved it😳

So Nachiket has heard the convoπŸ˜ƒ

Now I am waiting for the next part

Do update soon...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
*FAINTS*
Tonight brings SO MUCH HAPPINESS!!

Thank you, Sanam!!

Detailed comments soon <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Paani Puri ... SQUEAL
Too sleepy now, will comment in details tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Zainab_Sidd

Hahahahaa

Awww such n emotional+funny update Appi πŸ‘

Dr. Aman -
6 saal aur 4 bacche impressive ( Like really impressive haan...)

I totally enjoyed it and flashback ne toh dhamaal he macha dia...
I wish something like this happens in IKNMP too ..

Lovely Lovely Update appii 😊 ...
but kaafi short update tha.. make sure next time aise na ho...

Plee Plee update soon.Love you... hugsss 😳


Siddy! Thank you so much baby! 😳 You always read it instantly. Thank you darling πŸ€—

I want to use that line bachon wali πŸ˜‰ show mein tou kabhi nahin dikhaenge..but it has such a potential na? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† And woh FB bhi tou fit karna tha naa πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

Short isliye ke kaafi time se pada tha aisehi so I thought ke jitna hai I should post it before working on my other FF update. Isliye next update mein time lagega. But I will try ziada time naa loon mein 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: neiralove

Sanam baby! ❀️

First, kudos to you for writing two kamal ki stories in two days!!! ❀️ πŸ€—

The inside war they both were going through after finding about their daughter's suicide was coming to an end. Finally! This is how they should be--supporting each other through thick and thin 😳

Phir Ragini taking over like a true wife, pulling out his clothes and towel 😳 Pata nai aur kya hoga uss suitcase mein... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ

"Nothing. Bas, I was just wondering..6 years and 4 kids. Impressive." Aman smiles and leaves. 🀣

And the flashback toh killed me! So romantic and so beautiful! Nachiket ko 6 bacche chahiye πŸ˜† Someone please tell him that MC does not equal nanha mehmaan πŸ˜†

Thank you so much for writing so well and so quickly love! You're the best! πŸ€—


Shikha!! ❀️

First, thank you so much inna jaldi padhne ke liye and that too before the PM πŸ˜ƒ

Arey nahin, it was all written pehle se hi. Itna mujh mein talent kahan πŸ˜† πŸ˜† That's the reason it's short. I decided to post it before writing our FF's update. Islie achanak se decide kara aur post kara πŸ˜ƒ

I so wish this happened in the show too. Parenthood, I believe, is something really powerful which connects husband and wife. And here, they both were separated for more than 15 years and also none of them moved on. So, this is how they should have reacted. But her highness, how dare we expect so much from her πŸ˜•

That scene where Ragini takes over like a real wife...I wasn't sure about that scene. But meine socha likha hai tou bas add karo ab πŸ˜† So glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

This bachon wali line has so much potential but alas our showmakers didn't use it πŸ˜› πŸ˜† tou meine socha kyun naa mein karlun πŸ˜†

FB is my favorite too 😳
Nachiket does look like someone who would insist on having at least 4 children πŸ˜‰
And Rags getting pregnant abhi would be so awkward..islie no nanha mehmaan now, Nachiket πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Thank you so much Shikha baby!! ❀️ I'm so glad that you loved it. Loads of hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Oh Wow this was just perfect... 😊
I was smiling the whole time, beautifully written...πŸ˜ƒ

Yes they can only find solace in each others arm, there is no better place for them to let their heart out


Oh come on, Ragini. Tum tou aise kehrahi ho as if his presence doesn't affect you.
only his presence can effect her completely and even she can't deny this fact...

and the Flashback was more than perfect... πŸ‘πŸ‘

there is no one more impatient than Nachiket πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

This was Superb.. :)
Please update the next part soon :))


Hamna dear!! 😳

First, welcome! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Right, Nachiket is the only good thing that happened in her life. Without him Ragini has always been miserable. I really hope they realize this soon. Our two idiots 😳

Flashback was the reason I posted it jaldi. Couldn't wait more to share with you guys πŸ˜ƒ Thank you so much Hamna for reading it and loving it πŸ˜³πŸ€—

About the update, it will take thoda time. I will work on the other update now. The one Shikha and I are writing together. So thoda patience πŸ˜‰ Thanks again! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl


Shikha!! ❀️

First, thank you so much inna jaldi padhne ke liye and that too before the PM πŸ˜ƒ

Arey nahin, it was all written pehle se hi. Itna mujh mein talent kahan πŸ˜† πŸ˜† That's the reason it's short. I decided to post it before writing our FF's update. Islie achanak se decide kara aur post kara πŸ˜ƒ

I so wish this happened in the show too. Parenthood, I believe, is something really powerful which connects husband and wife. And here, they both were separated for more than 15 years and also none of them moved on. So, this is how they should have reacted. But her highness, how dare we expect so much from her πŸ˜•

That scene where Ragini takes over like a real wife...I wasn't sure about that scene. But meine socha likha hai tou bas add karo ab πŸ˜† So glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

This bachon wali line has so much potential but alas our showmakers didn't use it πŸ˜› πŸ˜† tou meine socha kyun naa mein karlun πŸ˜†

FB is my favorite too 😳
Nachiket does look like someone who would insist on having at least 4 children πŸ˜‰
And Rags getting pregnant abhi would be so awkward..islie no nanha mehmaan now, Nachiket πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Thank you so much Shikha baby!! ❀️ I'm so glad that you loved it. Loads of hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—


PM ki zaroorat hi nahi padegi--I have telepathy with my partner πŸ˜†

Absolutely, they aren't only husband and wife and lost lovers, they are also lost parents. And that's what will bring them together in the end 😊 The wife scene definitely was my favorite scene (after the romantic date, of course).

I loved this Nachiket! He doesn't actually want bache, sirf bache banani hai πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

It was short, but you had everything in there, humor, pain, and of course, romance! So I don't mind the length all that much 😊

Hamara FF?! Haven't started yet... πŸ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MAK56



Quite a stiff competition in reserving comments...πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Feedback time in Sanameyyy style...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



MAK!! Can't quote pura..bohot lamba hojaega. Islie aise guzara karle aap πŸ˜†

Thanks cool Makway! 😎 πŸ˜†

Ragini is a good traditional wife and also independent and modern one. But show mein

Your flashback wala special part is one of my special too πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ I could totally imagine them. 😳

Nachiket isn't Nachiket if he stops being an opportunist πŸ˜†

I knew it you will like the flashback more and I am happy that you did 😳

Makway thank you so much for the detailed comment, my style πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

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