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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Wow Pavan!

This is called redeeming a character..

you've dealt with all of his blind spots so well.. all those things that he forgot had happened because of Pam and Nivedita.. hope he REALLY remembers that Suhani's kidnapping and shot injury happened because of Nivedita.. he should never forgive her for that...

Enjoyed reading it..

can't wait for him to go back to Ragini now :D

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Sam

@RonitPallaviNR

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Very nice da!!
I truly enjoyed reading it.. Neil ko bye bye and mere Nachiket ko a big hi and kissie

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Zainab

@Zainab_Sidd

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

This was soo cute.
Like Like 😊
Do write more.

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Pavan, awesome third part. I don't believe that you ended the FF.

I so like this Nachiket, somebody who takes his own decisions himself, after thinking through the situation. Also glad that he realised fully that it's because of the kids, Ragini is back in his life. Aww ! Such a sweet feeling.

Hope you start something soon.

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BlueMoon8

@BlueMoon8

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

@goldstar678

Bro,

Glad Nachiket spoke something .. In the Show, it is very unlikely that Nachiket will ever come to know about Pam and FL2's doings .. NB will keep them glorified .. just like, in the last Episode, suddenly FL2 ends up 'loving' Neil dearly .. and even asks him to go to his Ragini..

Last part was a short one .. You ended this OS too soon .. Wished you could have followed it with some more parts ..

Keep Writing .. Finally Nachiket back to his Ragini :)

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Syaza

@syazaibrahim

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

That was marvellous and wonderful and what not! 👏

Edited by syazaibrahim - 10 years ago

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Pavan, please continue this :)

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goldstar678

@goldstar678

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This is not ended all thanks to yesterdays episode,which was a big letdown for me atleast,because most of you all seems quiet happy and satisfied.I felt they just showed everything in a hurry burry.

I have decided to write my version of the reunion ,it will be up soon,may be by tomorrow.Before writing i want to see todays episode too.

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BlueMoon8

@BlueMoon8

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: goldstar678

This is not ended all thanks to yesterdays episode,which was a big letdown for me atleast,because most of you all seems quiet happy and satisfied.I felt they just showed everything in a hurry burry.

I have decided to write my version of the reunion ,it will be up soon,may be by tomorrow.Before writing i want to see todays episode too.

Great Bro ..

Waiting for your update ...

Today's episode .. you'll get to see Pam's emotional pleadings .. and maybe some lighter moments .. Wish the editing team gives less screen-time to the FreeLoaders ..

Keep Writing ..