OS : New Begining ;New update PG 2,Pg 3,Update 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The scene starts from the end of Thursdays Precap,the situation is Ragini left that place after seeing FL2.

Nachiket is super angry and upset seeing FL2 at that place as that place was used to be the one where she used to wait for him every day when they were dating with each other and he himself wanted to drop his Ragini back home as he realised that how much she is broken from inside after the bitter truth is out and how much pain she is going through at the present moment and he wanted to make sure that she reached home safely after all this but everything spolied because of FL2 presence.

(He is Nachiket only for his Ragini)

Neil: Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?Tumhe kaise pata chala ki main yaha hu,iska matlab yeh hai ki tum mera peecha kar rahi thi?

FL 2 : Nahi Neil,wo main...

Neil : Wo main kya?Mujhe kuch nahin sunna,aur na hi mujhe is waqt tumse baat karne mein koi dilshaspi hai,tum ghar jao,mujhe hospital jaana hai.

FL 2 : Per meri baat to suno Neil

Neil: Tumhe ek baar batane se baat samajh mein nahin aati kya?I have to go,im not intrested to listen to your explanation

Next Scene:

Nachiket enters to his cabin and surprised to see Suhaani and Aagam waiting for him,

Suhaani : Dad humne DNA report mom ko de diya hai.

Nachiket: Main jaanta hu Suhaani ki Ragini ko sach pata chal gaya hai isliye mujhe uski bahut fikar ho rahi hai.

Aagam : Baat kya hai dad?

Meanwhile Nachiket calls Ashaben to know if Ragini reached home safely,and she informs him that she reached home sometime back but seems very upset and disturubed and is not talking with anyone.

Hearing that Ragini reached home safely ,he feels a bit relaxed and tells her that he is coming home in few minutes.

Nachiket: Chalo baccho,Sari baat main tumhe raste mein bataunga,we dont have time right now.

He tells them everything whatever happened between them few hours back and tells them that they are infact right now going to Raginis house,He wants them to be with her today and stay in that house so that they can give support to their Mom.Meanwhile Suhaani informs him that when she was at Raginis house,her Nivedita mausi saw her and still didnt informed anyone and she dont trust her at all.Aagam also tells him how Pam snached his phone and locked him inside room so that he wont be able to create any problem at Roka function.

Nachiket is surprised with Pam behaviour but he was more worried for his Ragini and hence kept quiet.

Next Scene:

They reach home and Ashaben informs him that Ragini locked herself inside the room and is not talking to anyone.

Darwaza kholo Ragini

She opens the door hearing his voice.

He can clearly se that she is still crying inside the room

Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho Nachiket?she asks him whiping her tears.

Tumse koi milna chahta hai,main use lekar aaya hu and he calls Suhaani.

Im sorry mom,main janti hu ki meri wajah se aapko bahut takleef pahuchi hai,main manti hu ki mujhe aapse jhooth nahin bolna chahiye tha,per...

sorry tum kyu bol rahi ho beta?Galathi to meri ...

Please mom,aisa mat boliye,aapki koi galati nahin hai,aapki jagh koi bhi hota to yehi karta,maine hamesha aapko hi apni mom mana hai aur yakeen kijiye jub papa se mujhe pata chala ki main aapki beti nahin balki Rupali ki beti hu,tab bhi maine aapko hi apni mom samjha hai.Mere liye aap hi meri mom thi aur hamesha rahengi,aur maa ko poora haq hai ki wo apne bachho pe gussa kare.Meri liye aaphi meri mom ho.Mujhe papa se pata chala ki Rishtey khoon se nahin balki ehsaas se bante hai.Papa ne kabhi mujhme aur Ranbir,Aagam mein koi fark nahin dikhaya.Meri nazar mein main aaphi ki beti hu aur hamesha rahungi.

Saying this she hugs her tightly and cries,Ragini too hugs her.

Next Scene :

Mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe chalna chahiye,Ragini main keh raha tha ki aaj bachhe agar yehi ruk jaate to,

Nahin Nachiket,im fine,dont worry.you plase take them with you.

Ragini ,abhi ghar jaane ki baad mujhe bahut saari baatein clear karni hai Pam aur FL2 ki saath aur main nahin chahta ki bacche yeh sab ka hissa bane.

She thinks to herself,"Tumhe theek se jhooth bhi bolna nahin aata,Main janti hu ki tum yeh sab mere liye kar rahe ho,per aaj main tumhe rokungi nahin,agar tumhari khushi isi mein hai to yehi sahi."

Next scene

He reaches home and Pam opens the door.

Neil,mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

sorry Pam,i dont want to talk anything right now,im very much tired and want to take rest

Neil,tum mujhe avoid kar rahe ho?

Maine kaha na Pam,kal bat karenge.Good Night.

Inside his room:

Pata nahin aaj mujhe khushi honi chahiye ya udas.Jaha ek taraf khusi hai ki hamare beech ki sari MUs clear ho gayi hai chahe wo Fake marriage ho y Suhaani ka,lekin tumhe is tarh toota hua dekh kar mujhse bardaash nahin ho raha hai,tumhe is halath mein main dekh nahin pa raha hu.Mujhe pata nahin tha ki tum aaj bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho,lekin ab main tumhare liye ya apne commitment ki wajah se shaadi nahin kar sakta Nivedita ki saath, ragini kyuki main aaj bhi tumse pyaar karta hu.Mujhe nahin pata ki main kaise is engagement se bahar niklunga lekin main kisi aur se shaadi nahin nahin karunga.

Aaj main apne aap se wada karta hu ki main ab phir se naya kadam badauge tumhari ore.Meri wajah se peche 15 saalo mein tumne bahut kuch saha hai,lekin ab aur nahin.Tum jin khusiyoon ki hakdaar ho,jinse tum itne saal door rahi,wo sab main tumhe doonga.Mujhe hamesha is baat ka afsoos rahega ki main tumhe theek se samajh nahin paya.Tum andar se roti rahi,tootti rahi lekin kabhi apna dard ya dukh bayaan nahin kiya.Tumhare sari takleefo ka zimmedar main hu Ragini.Main beeta hua waqt to wapa nahin laa sakta lekin ek nayi shuruaat zaroor karunga.Tumhare saath aur hamare baccho ki saath aur yeh mera wada hai tumse se nahin apne aap se.

The End

Dont know how the outcome is,but please read and give feedback.If you all like it,i will continue.

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Vidya.CV thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Pavan excellent

this is exactly what I m expecting from today's episode

Lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice, very nice! Lovely to read how Nachiket wants to take care of Ragini and now and be with her. He is willing to make up for all those lost year, yes that is the spirit! Also, the Ragini-Suhaani moment is very nice and touching.

Of course continue karo, yeh bhi koi poochne ke baat hai 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful, hope we get to see something like this soon onscreen as well.
the decision to be together needs to be taken and now.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh hua happy wali family ka reconciliation. Kya baat! Kya baat!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely!
This was just lovely..
Wish they had shown this instead.. but then drama kaise hoga?
hahahaha

Please continue this Pavan..
really need to read/see such sensitivity :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dis wud hav been a PERFECT continuation today from Thursday's episode👏... but ALAS!!! WE R FORCED TO WATCH NB's VERSION 😭 n she can't use brains more dan wat she throws on us 😒
Thanx for dis beautiful write up Pavan 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you everyone.Im glad that you all liked it.Next update by today evening.Stay tuned.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

Dis wud hav been a PERFECT continuation today from Thursday's episode👏... but ALAS!!! WE R FORCED TO WATCH NB's VERSION 😭 n she can't use brains more dan wat she throws on us 😒

Thanx for dis beautiful write up Pavan 👏


I Just hate NB's version
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng


I Just hate NB's version


Vidya apart from ur comments on forum I just luv ur Emoticons... Where did u get such innovative ones 😃

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