Vignette Series - Marasim Part 2 pg 12 - Updated - Page 2

Nyc one Rachana!! Awesm written👏👏

^^ i agree pls add how and by whom the fake marriage is revealed and abt Neil's reaction after he came to knw the truth, how did they Re-Untie..i want all this in ur stories as FB, waiting for such a piece from long tym, but none of the writers gvn it yet...plsss i just love ur writing, u can able to gv it awesmly.

Rachna!

Originally posted by: JananiKiDeewani

Nyc one Rachana!! Awesm written👏👏

^^ i agree pls add how and by whom the fake marriage is revealed and abt Neil's reaction after he came to knw the truth, how did they Re-Untie..i want all this in ur stories as FB, waiting for such a piece from long tym, but none of the writers gvn it yet...plsss i just love ur writing, u can able to gv it awesmly.

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Rachna!

That was breathtaking..

The quote you posted at the beginning was so beautiful, so apt..

Set the mood for the vignette oh so well.. the uneasiness, the awkwardness, the confusion the intense urge to smooth any wrinkles of tension between them..

Good lord - what powerful writing! <3

You're a rockstar! Thank you so much for this..

Really really impactful.. their weariness for love translated into one big sigh from my end when I finished reading it.. so heartfelt! Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: poetic

Arrey, you make me go ☺️

Frankly, once I post any piece, I cringe - things could be so much better, but I kind of lose patience and concentration.

But thank you for reading and liking this.

For me, once they are re-united, it's gonna be a lot of awkwardness involved because of the history. Will need lots of work on this one for sure. 😳

So beautiful! I seriously imagined the whole thing w Ronit and Pallavi.. So apt!

Loved it Rachna, hope they show him coming to her house directly instead of making Karan's home his base.

We still got a long long way to go :(

@ Sukhs - There will be those moments. I am not a romantic Bong for nothing 😆

Originally posted by: poetic

@ Sukhs - There will be those moments. I am not a romantic Bong for nothing 😆

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR

So beautiful! I seriously imagined the whole thing w Ronit and Pallavi.. So apt!

Loved it Rachna, hope they show him coming to her house directly instead of making Karan's home his base.

We still got a long long way to go :(

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Sammie 😃. This was the Vignette I was telling you about the other day.

Didn't do much work at office today - decided to write instead. 😆 I guess I do well when I am in office😆😲

Agree, that's why he comes to her place directly and not to KD's place here. 😊 I love him for that