Vignette Series - Marasim Part 2 pg 12 - Updated - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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P : Tumhari dressing sense kitni ghatiya hai. Just look at Nivedita. So well dressed. Am glad Neil is marrying her.
P goes away.

R smirks to herslef and thinks : Yes, Nivedita is so great that at their own engagement, his fiance is kissing me insane
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

P : Tumhari dressing sense kitni ghatiya hai. Just look at Nivedita. So well dressed. Am glad Neil is marrying her.

P goes away.

R smirks to herslef and thinks : Yes, Nivedita is so great that at their own engagement, his fiance is kissing me insane


And then N should refuse to do the engagement and just drag R with him out to the car and drive away .. and we're back to the car again 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I tell you ... seriously. 😆
he should just drive away somewhere without telling g anybody, just abducting Ragini on the way.

And they should be away from everybody for quite some time, at least for a year.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

I tell you ... seriously. 😆

he should just drive away somewhere without telling g anybody, just abducting Ragini on the way.

And they should be away from everybody for quite some time, at least for a year.




Yes.. for everyone's mental peace...
And he should just spoil her silly with his Amex black card ..for everything they missed out on..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And just being with her ... to make up for all the time that hey lost, all the beautiful memories they have not created.
they should just travel randomly, just be together.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes.. and spend days doing nothing as well..
just watching TV together if that's what matters <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Not on tata Sky please? Stupid they are 👎🏼 tata Sky I mean
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rachna that was superb!
Btw That quote is from Khalil Gibran! I heard this name in zindagi gulzar hai :X
Coming to the vignette, it was nicely written. Ragini's thoughts and the chaos emerging inside her was superbly penned. This was a very casual piece by you, basically it showed how ragini would behave and react when nachiket would return to her life, so i would just say it was brilliant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Not on tata Sky please? Stupid they are 👎🏼 tata Sky I mean


They can watch DD on cable for all I care ..
😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Rachna that was superb!
Btw That quote is from Khalil Gibran! I heard this name in zindagi gulzar hai :X
Coming to the vignette, it was nicely written. Ragini's thoughts and the chaos emerging inside her was superbly penned. This was a very casual piece by you, basically it showed how ragini would behave and react when nachiket would return to her life, so i would just say it was brilliant!


Thanks a lot Surbhi.😃

this is how I intended it to be - simple experience for both of them when they were back in each other's lives. And it has top happen when others are not around.

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