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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Lovely! Beautifully penned down Dev! 👏

Thanks Tupu😃. Glad, you liked it.

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Originally posted by: poetic
Beautifully written Dev. Made my late evening.
Of course, we need more from you now.

Thanks Rachna. Glad you liked it.😃 I will try to write more. Still need to read your OS.

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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Then I insist 😳😳😳

Sure. I will be more than happy.😳

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JananiKiDeewani

i dnt knw tat u dnt knw my name, im Hema :))

Yeah. Nice to know your name, Hema. 😊

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I knew from the beginning that you wont be able to leave the Ktlk impact behind my dear friend. 🤗What a lovely memory in the background of Saiyaan.. and what a beautiful written OS ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

No words enough in praise for you... Loved the way you have expressed your feelings ... lovely scenario... lovely doc n intern love.. 😉 😳 .. i just got nostalgic.. n you know why.. indeed you know.. !!!

Your poetic sense made me believe that you are a fabulous writer... dont talk abt the shortcomings Dev... you have overpowered them by yourself... 😳😳
Loved it... more that its from the pen of a member whom i know for a long time now... !!! Sincerely Dev... you must keep writing more of them... Kaun jane.. this is the way to your goal.. 😛😉 you know what.. 😛

Will be waiting to read more from you.. keep going the flow... You rocked.. !!! 👏 👏

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-Spriha-

@-Spriha-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wow...short and sweet!
Really loved reading it...just wanna get these type of cute romantic scenes in the show too..!!:)

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: bawaswift
I knew from the beginning that you wont be able to leave the Ktlk impact behind my dear friend. 🤗What a lovely memory in the background of Saiyaan.. and what a beautiful written OS ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏
No words enough in praise for you... Loved the way you have expressed your feelings ... lovely scenario... lovely doc n intern love.. 😉 😳 .. i just got nostalgic.. n you know why.. indeed you know.. !!!
Your poetic sense made me believe that you are a fabulous writer... dont talk abt the shortcomings Dev... you have overpowered them by yourself... 😳😳
Loved it... more that its from the pen of a member whom i know for a long time now... !!! Sincerely Dev... you must keep writing more of them... Kaun jane.. this is the way to your goal.. 😛😉 you know what.. 😛
Will be waiting to read more from you.. keep going the flow... You rocked.. !!! 👏 👏

Never ever...KTLK is a important part of my life bawa bro🤗...I'm afraid, coz this impact will never go from my mind. And now we are getting re-telecast of KTLK on Sony's new channel, then that has made me more attached to the show.

Saiyyan song is such a song which I can never forget. It is the song which made me admire KTLK. I joined here. So I attach this song in most of my posts.😆😳

Yeah, its nostalgia for us. I can understand very well.

awwh, never knew that you will like it this much. Thank you!

my goal? as in? are you trying to say that I should start writing stories like KTLK?😃

sure, bro. Hope I get enough time to write more.

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Spriha-
Wow...short and sweet!
Really loved reading it...just wanna get these type of cute romantic scenes in the show too..!!:)

Thanks for your appreciation. Every comment means a lot to me. Hopefully, we will get these kinda scenes.😊

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Dev First of all sorry for the late reply

I somehow missed your PM. I havent been very active lately so somehow missed it

Its a beautiful OS Dev you right well

very vividly written

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d3c3nt

@d3c3nt

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

loved the scene, well written. Would like to read more please write whenever u can.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

That was adorable and romantic! I could imagine them doing this cheeky romance and now i am left here wanting for more! And trust me this forum needs good writers like you, not that the rest present here are bad XD but we would love to read more from you too :)
Thanks SS for requesting, keep doing that ;D