Epiphany Aarav OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Hinal dear, Hey Di!!

You are getting better and better... 🤗 Awwwh, that's such a huge compliment! ☺️

I loved loved loved loved ...it...😃 Thank you sooo much :D 😃

Clear and crisp writing... really really liked it lot...

The hurt he felt when his older brother rejected which he tried to ignore and hide..

And the way he wants all the luxury, envies his brothers.. so natural and honest.

Glad you liked that! I didn't want to make it seem like he was the ideal child. Everyone wants things, it's not unnatural to feel that way. Only a human tendency.

And the Epiphany... wow! just before that he was sad that his birthday was celebrated at home, with a cake baked by his mom. In one sec, everything changed. He got a new perspective...

I'm glad you caught on to that 😳 It was the best part for me to write out. I got so emotional myself, hahaa. Really fun to write.

This is one fine piece of writing Hinal...looking forward to read more from you... 😊

Thank you sooo muchhh 🤗

Love

MD

Lotsss of love!!

Hinal 😳

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

awesome!!!!
you have portrayed the emotions of a teenager so well that it never seemed to be a fictional story...
a very lovely piece of writing!!!