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Wow, this OS is so beautiful! You are a brilliant writer. The last sentence was simply amazing.. Can't wait to read your other works!

sanika...that was superb...i hope such idea of letters wld be shwn in serial also...its very touchy...

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Amazing would be an under statement this was mind blowing I loved it soo much

loved the entry on Neil I literally could feel the yes drop out of my eyes I could visualise the whole thing

everyone was soo much in character

loved the last bit it was like I was reading a written update of the show

fantastic it was

hats ofkeep wrotting this was plain perfect

Aww <3
Thank you so much for the lovely comment 😊 😳
I will keep writing 😊
This made my day ❤️

Originally posted by: aati1429

Truly amazing!!!

I can simply feel each character and wow atleast somewhere we can see Neil and his feelings.

great thanks do update more.

Thanks a lot :)
@bold- yeah, lol. The woes of a fan 😆

Originally posted by: Vikruti

I want to jump up and down like a five year old kid after reading the last line by Neil.

Haayyyeee! That was just such a cute dialogue..."aadat hai mujhe.." uff!

You're a talented writer and this one shot was so cute. I would have never thought of this concept when given that kind of a prompt. Lovely work!

hahaha, who says only five year old can jump up and down? [:LOL]
Thanks a lot :)
@bold- the mind works in mysterious ways 😆 😉

Originally posted by: columbia

👏

Brilliant take a bow!!!

Thanks 😊
Weren't u in the BI forum too? 😛

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Write MOAR!!! :D

Hahaha, okay, gimme a prompt, cause my mind is tired now to think of anything [:LOL]

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Awesome OS. The letter was too good! you portrayed Neil's feelings very well.😛

Thanks a lot 😛

Originally posted by: Sanika.

Hahaha, okay, gimme a prompt, cause my mind is tired now to think of anything [:LOL]

Originally posted by: poetic

Aww .. this is so nice and eloquent.

loved the line - Aadat hai much😃He is still involved

Thanks a lot darling 😊